Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Barb,

Whoaaaa, not good for Paige at all. Cash isn't going to take to kindly to someone messing with 'his' woman!

Good chapter.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2015

Cash doesn't like to share.

Comment from NaughtieScribe

Excellent

You are really good at showing how bigotry doesn't always come in the form of sheet wearing idiots. Sometimes the most painful cut is the smallest. The sheriff wiping off his hand really evokes emotions. Well done.

I'm also getting tired of my girl Paige getting snatched up. Seriously, Cash knows this female can't go fishing without finding trouble, but he lets her go around back by herself. Shame on you Cash, ugh.

Okay I've got enough time left of my lunch to check out the next chapter. See you later.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014

Thank you for the kind review. Paige can't stay out of trouble.

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Barbara,
Loved the obvious clash with the town's still evident prejudice. Great post for your story, strong imagery, great dialogue and overall mystery still ongoing at the end. Nice cliff hanger.

I enjoyed the read and thanks for sharing. Happy New Years!
Maureen

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014

I appreciate your kind review and dropping by.

Comment from Selina Stambi

Excellent

Oh, you do know how create wonderful cliff hangers, Barbara.

Another good one. Now I have to know what comes next!

Happy New Year to you.

Sonali

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014

Thank you for the wonderful review.

Comment from Tonulak

Excellent

Dear Barbra,
A nice chapter showing prevailing prejudice, culture shook at Asian food and a nice little cliffhanger at the end of the chapter. Great job with this one--Ted

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014

Thank you for the kind review and stopping by.

Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

I certainly might not have chosen to read this but you engaged my curiosity and because the story developed so very well I had no choice but to read. You were able to hold my interest. Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Janie King

Excellent

Now, I'm stuck here for a whole week and can't find out what is happening to Paige until then. Oh me, oh my. Good chapter. God bless. Love ya, Janie

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014

Thank you for the kind review and stopping by. LOL

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Hi, Barb. Excellent writing and off to a great start for 2014. Congratulations btw on being in the top ten this year. Bravo!

Suggestion: "What a jerk! I can't believe prejudice is still alive and well in the 21st century. I see it is." (I think in the context this is used, you should not put it in italics, but rather just had "she thought" to it which you do in a case like this.

Happy New Year. Bob

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014

Thank you for the kind review and stopping by. Will check it out.

Comment from queenv

Excellent

Now you know I lost the real plot of this good story thinking about that food. The story is well written and has good strong characters. Good Job.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2014

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Curly Girly

Excellent

Oh, this is scary! It sounds as if Paige has been attacked walking back to her car. Somebody is holding her against her will. I hope that is not a knife at her back.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2014

I appreciate your kind review. Thank you for dropping by.