Savannah Love
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Comment from Writingfundimension
Things are a little more 'up close and personal' and still the two idiots don't get it LOL. A thoroughly enjoyable chapter, barbara. I love the ghost's sense of humor. Merry Christmas, Bev
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2013
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Things are a little more 'up close and personal' and still the two idiots don't get it LOL. A thoroughly enjoyable chapter, barbara. I love the ghost's sense of humor. Merry Christmas, Bev
Comment Written 22-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
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You're very welcome, barbara. :0) Bev
Comment from Sankey
Great work. Good chapter yet again. I love it when the reading is soooo interesting. Got me hooked again and NO SPAGS. Well done.
Thanks again for the exciting ride.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2013
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Great work. Good chapter yet again. I love it when the reading is soooo interesting. Got me hooked again and NO SPAGS. Well done.
Thanks again for the exciting ride.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from elgone
The way this is worded it sounds at first that Nala is n
barking.
Paige glanced up when she heard a familiar bark. "Nala, how have you been?" She hugged Nala, and then bent down and cuddled Morgan. "I missed you too."
I think I'd have it more like this.
Paige glanced up when she heard her dog's familiar bark as he came running out to greet her, Nala following. "How have you been?" She hugged Nala, and then bent down and cuddled Morgan. "I missed you too."
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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2013
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The way this is worded it sounds at first that Nala is n
barking.
Paige glanced up when she heard a familiar bark. "Nala, how have you been?" She hugged Nala, and then bent down and cuddled Morgan. "I missed you too."
I think I'd have it more like this.
Paige glanced up when she heard her dog's familiar bark as he came running out to greet her, Nala following. "How have you been?" She hugged Nala, and then bent down and cuddled Morgan. "I missed you too."
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Comment Written 22-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate you dropping by. Made the change. I have already worked on that area, but yours is better.
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
Well, they're making some headway but not enough anybody really knows what's happening yet. Good chapter. God loves you and so we. Merry Christmas and happy New Year's.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2013
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Well, they're making some headway but not enough anybody really knows what's happening yet. Good chapter. God loves you and so we. Merry Christmas and happy New Year's.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. My prayers continue to be with both of you.
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
Another gem devoid of any SPAG or POV infractions. As to the ghost Bradley. love him for adding comic relief. The plot thickens after the cops show up. Well written and executed.
Regards:
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2013
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Another gem devoid of any SPAG or POV infractions. As to the ghost Bradley. love him for adding comic relief. The plot thickens after the cops show up. Well written and executed.
Regards:
Comment Written 22-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and stopping by.
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Dear Barbara: Just posted 'Pelham Hall' Thanks.
XX Steve
Comment from mumsyone
Good chapter, Barbara. Merry Christmas to you and your husband. I can hardly believe it's here already!
Paige smiled when the cars (car's) activity stopped.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2013
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Good chapter, Barbara. Merry Christmas to you and your husband. I can hardly believe it's here already!
Paige smiled when the cars (car's) activity stopped.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the catch, it should have been van's also. I guess my brain is on vacation. I appreciate the help.
Comment from judiverse
Very engaging. Bradley seems to be stirring up some trouble. He's quite the fun ghost. Billy Joe accusing Cash of kicking him seems to Be Bradley's work, as well. Paige does learn that Walker is the one who's been giving orders. according to Redman. But Walker is apparently among the missing. Apparently the Walker family is deeply in debt. Great developments in this. judi
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2013
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Very engaging. Bradley seems to be stirring up some trouble. He's quite the fun ghost. Billy Joe accusing Cash of kicking him seems to Be Bradley's work, as well. Paige does learn that Walker is the one who's been giving orders. according to Redman. But Walker is apparently among the missing. Apparently the Walker family is deeply in debt. Great developments in this. judi
Comment Written 22-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate you sticking by me.
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Hi, Barbara. You're so welcome. Love those tricks that Bradley is pulling. judi
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You're so welcome. Always enjoy reading about Bradley's antics. judi
Comment from adewpearl
duc-tape - duct tape
I like the way you work the explanation of what has been going on and who's behind it into the conversation.
Merry Christmas to you, too, my friend :-) Brooke
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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2013
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duc-tape - duct tape
I like the way you work the explanation of what has been going on and who's behind it into the conversation.
Merry Christmas to you, too, my friend :-) Brooke
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Comment Written 22-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2013
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Thank you for helping me with that word. I have tried many different ways to spell that word, but nothing looked right. DUHHHHHHH, maybe I should have looked it up. My brain is on vacation.
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:-)
Comment from in777wr#
This was a well written story. It would be interesting to find out what hold did Walker have on Redman. Good build up in this story. This story kept my attention, and was well written.
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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2013
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This was a well written story. It would be interesting to find out what hold did Walker have on Redman. Good build up in this story. This story kept my attention, and was well written.
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Comment Written 22-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from c_lucas
It looks like the excitement is dying down. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read. Very good job.
Error:
giving the order (orders)
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2013
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It looks like the excitement is dying down. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read. Very good job.
Error:
giving the order (orders)
Comment Written 22-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2013
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As I posted, I had ordered and knew that wasn't right so took the ed off and still messed it up. Thank you for catching it.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
