Savannah Love
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Brooke,
Oh, so maybe the ghost are waiting outside the house anxious to get back in and start doing their tricky again
Great dialogue and of course your excellent writing.
Merry Christmas
LOL
Gert
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2013
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Hi Brooke,
Oh, so maybe the ghost are waiting outside the house anxious to get back in and start doing their tricky again
Great dialogue and of course your excellent writing.
Merry Christmas
LOL
Gert
Comment Written 24-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and sticking with me.
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You are welcome Barb.
Gert
Comment from queenv
The elements of a great story is evident. The chapter is written well. Great attention to detail is evident. The plot line flows well. Hope you get a publisher! Great job!
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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The elements of a great story is evident. The chapter is written well. Great attention to detail is evident. The plot line flows well. Hope you get a publisher! Great job!
Comment Written 24-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Curtis Hatch
Barbara,
This is an interesting chapter, and as usual, the action, suspense, and mystery are intense. It would appear that Paige and Bradley are on speaking terms, so to speak. It makes me wonder if all the investigations by the police, and the paranormal team will turn up anything. The question in my mind is this, will Bradley settle down and stop being a nuisance to others.
Have a Merry Christmas and may 2014 be your best year ever.
Curtis
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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Barbara,
This is an interesting chapter, and as usual, the action, suspense, and mystery are intense. It would appear that Paige and Bradley are on speaking terms, so to speak. It makes me wonder if all the investigations by the police, and the paranormal team will turn up anything. The question in my mind is this, will Bradley settle down and stop being a nuisance to others.
Have a Merry Christmas and may 2014 be your best year ever.
Curtis
Comment Written 24-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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I think Bradley is rather pleased with himself. He does have a motive though. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sasha
I apologize for taking so long to get to this. I've been away and just got back today. Great chapter. Well written and I like the pace, keeps the reader wanting more. MERRY CHRISTMAS TO YOU AND YOUR FAMILY TOO.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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I apologize for taking so long to get to this. I've been away and just got back today. Great chapter. Well written and I like the pace, keeps the reader wanting more. MERRY CHRISTMAS TO YOU AND YOUR FAMILY TOO.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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I completely understand. Thank you for the wonderful review. Enjoy paradise.
Comment from Cumbrianlass
I'm getting a charge out of Bradley's shenanigans with these people, and only the women realize, or accept, what's going on! The cops have gathered evidence and the case is gathering speed.
Another good post, Barbara!
Merry Christmas, and thank you so much for all your support in the past year.
Love Av
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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I'm getting a charge out of Bradley's shenanigans with these people, and only the women realize, or accept, what's going on! The cops have gathered evidence and the case is gathering speed.
Another good post, Barbara!
Merry Christmas, and thank you so much for all your support in the past year.
Love Av
Comment Written 24-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the wonderful review.
Comment from Lynette Marie
I don't mind reading a lot of dialogue when it is well done, and yours is well done. Your characters are easy to imagine. I was amused at Bradley's shenanigans. Well done!
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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I don't mind reading a lot of dialogue when it is well done, and yours is well done. Your characters are easy to imagine. I was amused at Bradley's shenanigans. Well done!
Comment Written 24-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Barb. A fine addition to your book. easy to understand despite the subject matter I liked your dialogue and imagery as always:
"Billy Joe reached the steps first. As he put his right foot on the bottom step, he stumbled and his toothpick fell from his mouth. "Dang it, Cash. You didn't need to kick me in the ass."
Merry, Merry Christmas to you and yours, Barb! Bob
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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Hi, Barb. A fine addition to your book. easy to understand despite the subject matter I liked your dialogue and imagery as always:
"Billy Joe reached the steps first. As he put his right foot on the bottom step, he stumbled and his toothpick fell from his mouth. "Dang it, Cash. You didn't need to kick me in the ass."
Merry, Merry Christmas to you and yours, Barb! Bob
Comment Written 23-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
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You deserved the six stars. Bob
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is an excellent addition to the story. I enjoy your character interaction which seems to allow me to get them much quicker through the dialog than the many descriptive passages most writers use. This was an enjoyable read and I thank you for sharing it with me.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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This is an excellent addition to the story. I enjoy your character interaction which seems to allow me to get them much quicker through the dialog than the many descriptive passages most writers use. This was an enjoyable read and I thank you for sharing it with me.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from kiwijenny
I like the dialogue .it keeps it real . There is a neat twist that Walker lost the family fortune gambling....I am glad your author notes say this chapter is not meant to stand alone.......how can chapters of novels stand alone?
Well done
God bless
Merry Christmas
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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I like the dialogue .it keeps it real . There is a neat twist that Walker lost the family fortune gambling....I am glad your author notes say this chapter is not meant to stand alone.......how can chapters of novels stand alone?
Well done
God bless
Merry Christmas
Comment Written 23-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. Chapters of novels can't stand alone, but I have been marked down because of it.
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Me too ...you haven't also been sent to a site to learn to write have you? Cos I have ...and I replied ...thanks
Grrrrrrrrrr
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I was told I should take a poetry class because my poem read like a laundry list.
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No....that leave me speechless.....You know not every reviewer can review....Wow
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So true. I got a three once because the reviewer didn't like dialogue and also a three because the reviewer didn't like Bradley. Oh yea! once a three because my post was too short. I've seen about everything, but every so often I get something new.
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But if someone doesn't like dialogue why read it? I don't like horror so I avoid reviewing it. Sigh .
Have a Merry Christmas :o)
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That's a good solution, but I have to review so I can support my posts. I still can't review enough during the school year to support, but I have angels who help me promote my work.
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Your work is very good:o)
Comment from AprilShower
MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A BLESSED NEW YEAR TO YOU, TOO, BARBARA!
This chapter is really funny. I looks like we'll need to wait until the New Year before we can read the next installment.
I couldn't help but laugh as I read this chapter.
Well done, bet you had fun writing this one.
April :o)
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2013
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MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A BLESSED NEW YEAR TO YOU, TOO, BARBARA!
This chapter is really funny. I looks like we'll need to wait until the New Year before we can read the next installment.
I couldn't help but laugh as I read this chapter.
Well done, bet you had fun writing this one.
April :o)
Comment Written 23-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. Merry Christmas and I hope you have Blessed New Year.
