Savannah Love
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44 total reviews
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Barb,
I was beginning to think I'd never get back to Paige and Cash! Whew! It may take me forever and a day to get through this book, but I'll get 'er done!!
Nice to see Cash and Paige getting closer.
*Happy 2015!*
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2014
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Hi, Barb,
I was beginning to think I'd never get back to Paige and Cash! Whew! It may take me forever and a day to get through this book, but I'll get 'er done!!
Nice to see Cash and Paige getting closer.
*Happy 2015!*
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 29-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2014
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I answered all of these and for some reason on one saved.
Thank you for dropping by and leaving the kind review.
HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comment from Sankey
Can't Bradley behave himself? Naughty man! At least he could have waited till the "abnormal hehe paranormal' folks left.
Good work glad you are back.
No Spags. Can't remember if you looked at my replacement chapter 3 and working on something else for my book and a poem.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2013
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Can't Bradley behave himself? Naughty man! At least he could have waited till the "abnormal hehe paranormal' folks left.
Good work glad you are back.
No Spags. Can't remember if you looked at my replacement chapter 3 and working on something else for my book and a poem.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2013
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You are absolutely wonderful!!!!! Thank you for wonderful review. You make my day. Thank you.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
No problem Barbara, I just love good dialogue, and this is the very best part in this piece. I like this chapter, so interesting with all this paranormal activities.
EXCELLENT job my dear friend.
:)
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2013
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No problem Barbara, I just love good dialogue, and this is the very best part in this piece. I like this chapter, so interesting with all this paranormal activities.
EXCELLENT job my dear friend.
:)
Comment Written 19-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2013
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Comment from kiwijenny
Thank you for this . I liked this and I especially liked your author notes..I have been critiqued severely for a chapter 12 not standing alone and that I needed to develop characters then given a site on how to write....Sorry I didn't mean to rant. I loved the way you ended this . I am intrigued. Great writing
God bless and Merry Christmas.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2013
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Thank you for this . I liked this and I especially liked your author notes..I have been critiqued severely for a chapter 12 not standing alone and that I needed to develop characters then given a site on how to write....Sorry I didn't mean to rant. I loved the way you ended this . I am intrigued. Great writing
God bless and Merry Christmas.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2013
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Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Barbara I thought for sure Bradley was behaving and that was it. Great reactions in this one. Nice mystery and some witty points from your ghost:)
I enjoyed reading this one.
Thanks for sharing and happy holidays,
Maureen
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2013
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Dear Barbara I thought for sure Bradley was behaving and that was it. Great reactions in this one. Nice mystery and some witty points from your ghost:)
I enjoyed reading this one.
Thanks for sharing and happy holidays,
Maureen
Comment Written 18-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2013
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Comment from Erik McGinley
Another amusing story about this crazy ghost. :)
I remember reading one a while back and being intrigued about it.
I did find the interest coming back but this one reads just a little bit eventful, intentionally maybe.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2013
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Another amusing story about this crazy ghost. :)
I remember reading one a while back and being intrigued about it.
I did find the interest coming back but this one reads just a little bit eventful, intentionally maybe.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2013
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Comment from Righteous Riter
Good solid introduction to this chapter. The tone is se from the start. This character grabs my attention and raises my curiosity as the chapter goes on. Good character balance. Good dialogue between the characters. Good transition between the events. Good steady pace that intensifies towards the end. Good exciting conclusion as it seems that Bradley reached out and touched Wesley Blake.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2013
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Good solid introduction to this chapter. The tone is se from the start. This character grabs my attention and raises my curiosity as the chapter goes on. Good character balance. Good dialogue between the characters. Good transition between the events. Good steady pace that intensifies towards the end. Good exciting conclusion as it seems that Bradley reached out and touched Wesley Blake.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2013
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Comment from JMUwrites
This is wonderfully written Barbara, quite captivating actually thanks to the element of suspense that you've injected into it with the paranormal adventurers' doing their thing...reminds me of the "Ghost Hunters" episodes that I watch on TV.
Thanks for sharing and I now await the next installment!
Jeffrey
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2013
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This is wonderfully written Barbara, quite captivating actually thanks to the element of suspense that you've injected into it with the paranormal adventurers' doing their thing...reminds me of the "Ghost Hunters" episodes that I watch on TV.
Thanks for sharing and I now await the next installment!
Jeffrey
Comment Written 18-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2013
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Comment from red rooster
It can be difficult to start reading well into a book. Sometimes I have to read the chapters a couple of times to recognize all the players and what is going on. Not this time. The dialogue invited me into the story, and introduced me to the characters. You did an excellent job with the chapter. It had a beginning, a middle and ended with suspense to make the reader want to continue reading. I especially like how your descriptions and action are interwoven in the conversations.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2013
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It can be difficult to start reading well into a book. Sometimes I have to read the chapters a couple of times to recognize all the players and what is going on. Not this time. The dialogue invited me into the story, and introduced me to the characters. You did an excellent job with the chapter. It had a beginning, a middle and ended with suspense to make the reader want to continue reading. I especially like how your descriptions and action are interwoven in the conversations.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2013
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I am not sure what I should improve to get a five. Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from rtobaygo
Great hook at the end. I like the paranormal aspect of the story...and the humor that it generates.
Well done!
Take care,
Ray
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2013
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Great hook at the end. I like the paranormal aspect of the story...and the humor that it generates.
Well done!
Take care,
Ray
Comment Written 18-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I received a three for this story line and was told that I should drop the ghost.
