Savannah Love
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Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, barbara, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where paige is not pleased with the answers the police chief gives her and demands that he respect nallah with a proper name instead of black servant
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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this is very well written, barbara, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where paige is not pleased with the answers the police chief gives her and demands that he respect nallah with a proper name instead of black servant
Comment Written 08-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I am sure we will find answers soon.
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
Consider:
"... Cash accepted it. He motioned... (Who is he?)
"The police chief tapped pen on pad...
"...for treasure and THAT a paper stating...
"... protecting them if need(s) be.
"Robert opened the door AND WAITED for the foursome to leave.
"Paige's eyes met his. "Do drop by the house after...
Regards:
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2013
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Consider:
"... Cash accepted it. He motioned... (Who is he?)
"The police chief tapped pen on pad...
"...for treasure and THAT a paper stating...
"... protecting them if need(s) be.
"Robert opened the door AND WAITED for the foursome to leave.
"Paige's eyes met his. "Do drop by the house after...
Regards:
Comment Written 08-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2013
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Sorry for the late response. At school it's semester break and we had a lot of paperwork to catch up on. I am now on break for two weeks and I have time to breath. I appreciate your help.
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Dear Barbara: As a former teacher, I know all about it. Will be offline Dec 23 to Jan 05. Merry Christmas.
XX Steve
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I'll miss you, but have a Merry Christmas and a blessed New Year.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Another great chapter my friend. Our good friend Robina 1978 is dying of throat cancer. Ritchie999 is taking a vote for all to read about buying her an honorary trophy. Which is her dying request. So go to his page and please vote yes so she can have her request honored.
Shalom,
Erick
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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Another great chapter my friend. Our good friend Robina 1978 is dying of throat cancer. Ritchie999 is taking a vote for all to read about buying her an honorary trophy. Which is her dying request. So go to his page and please vote yes so she can have her request honored.
Shalom,
Erick
Comment Written 08-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I will. Thank you for the information.
Comment from Gungalo
They meet with the police chief and discuss why the two would be given keys to the mansion. They chief seems to think they had the right. Meanwhile Paige and Cash grow impatient with him.
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They meet with the police chief and discuss why the two would be given keys to the mansion. They chief seems to think they had the right. Meanwhile Paige and Cash grow impatient with him.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I always look forward to you dropping by.
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SMiling at you Barb.
Comment from AprilShower
She inherited the house. Is she a distant relative to the original owners? I wonder where this story will take us. It's all about ghosts, and a romance that might take off eventually if they can ever get over the hump which is the north and the south's differences.
I have no suggestions. I'm anxious to find out what the mystery is, and if Paige and Cash get together at the end of the story?
April
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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She inherited the house. Is she a distant relative to the original owners? I wonder where this story will take us. It's all about ghosts, and a romance that might take off eventually if they can ever get over the hump which is the north and the south's differences.
I have no suggestions. I'm anxious to find out what the mystery is, and if Paige and Cash get together at the end of the story?
April
Comment Written 08-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. Paige is sort of a distant relative.
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Barbara,
It seems the racism runs deep in Savannah if the Police Chief can't bring himself to say Nala's name and must make reference to her colour. But, at the same time, his staff seem to be Creole at least ... He must have a problem with staff relations.
You've managed to raise even more questions with some of the answers, and introduce a few more potential villains here. Hence the six.
One small correction needed I think -
... Dennison rapped his fingers on the desk." - drop the (")
Patrick
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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Hi Barbara,
It seems the racism runs deep in Savannah if the Police Chief can't bring himself to say Nala's name and must make reference to her colour. But, at the same time, his staff seem to be Creole at least ... He must have a problem with staff relations.
You've managed to raise even more questions with some of the answers, and introduce a few more potential villains here. Hence the six.
One small correction needed I think -
... Dennison rapped his fingers on the desk." - drop the (")
Patrick
Comment Written 08-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. Darn I thought I actually answered some questions. Oh my!!! LOL
Comment from emjaihammond
This just gets better every time I read it. such a lot of suspense in the story line and the characters hold some mystery too. I have really enjoyed this story.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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This just gets better every time I read it. such a lot of suspense in the story line and the characters hold some mystery too. I have really enjoyed this story.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh, that picture and the description definitely gives one the creeps. They let Miss Evelyn ring me for just a minute today. I was so happy I cried when she hung up. On the psych floor they don't have phones in their rooms and i can't call her because I don't have the code word i need for them to put my call through. She made sense the 3-4 minutes we got to talk. She said she needed some books brought up to here as some of the nurses wanted to buy one. You can hear in her voice she's scared. God loves you and we do too.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh, that picture and the description definitely gives one the creeps. They let Miss Evelyn ring me for just a minute today. I was so happy I cried when she hung up. On the psych floor they don't have phones in their rooms and i can't call her because I don't have the code word i need for them to put my call through. She made sense the 3-4 minutes we got to talk. She said she needed some books brought up to here as some of the nurses wanted to buy one. You can hear in her voice she's scared. God loves you and we do too.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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I would be scared too. I can't imagine what she's going through. I am sure God will take care of her. Thank you for dropping by.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)
At least Bradley Bookman isn't a "boo hag". I still think most of the manifestations in Paige's new home have been provided by real live villains intent on scaring Paige out of her home.
Maybe when everyone is questioned more pieces of the puzzle will be found so Paige and Cash can concentrate on each other.
I noticed only two minor errors: Boo hags are like vampires because they're undead [being ==> beings] that [feel ==> feed] off humans.{Two typos?}
Very enjoyable background on local superstitions. All you need now is more love and Irish Hugs for good luck with your writing.
Roger
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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Hi Barbara:)
At least Bradley Bookman isn't a "boo hag". I still think most of the manifestations in Paige's new home have been provided by real live villains intent on scaring Paige out of her home.
Maybe when everyone is questioned more pieces of the puzzle will be found so Paige and Cash can concentrate on each other.
I noticed only two minor errors: Boo hags are like vampires because they're undead [being ==> beings] that [feel ==> feed] off humans.{Two typos?}
Very enjoyable background on local superstitions. All you need now is more love and Irish Hugs for good luck with your writing.
Roger
Comment Written 08-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and the catches. I always appreciate hearing from you. I needed an Irish hug again today.
Comment from judiverse
This is high interest! Interesting background about the Gullah people and their beliefs about boo hags and your description of them. The Police Chief tries to answer the questions that Paige and her friends have, but they don't seem satisfactory. And the Gullah beliefs hold back the investigation. Now that Redman has been found, maybe he can provide some answers. Great reading, and spooky. I'm going with six stars! judi
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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This is high interest! Interesting background about the Gullah people and their beliefs about boo hags and your description of them. The Police Chief tries to answer the questions that Paige and her friends have, but they don't seem satisfactory. And the Gullah beliefs hold back the investigation. Now that Redman has been found, maybe he can provide some answers. Great reading, and spooky. I'm going with six stars! judi
Comment Written 08-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
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You're so welcome. Always a pleasure. There are still many things that haven't been explained. Great suspense. judi
