Picture Poems
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Comment from amanda98653
Merry Christmas, Treischel:)
A beautiful poem you've written there.
beautiful alliterations in d
"This garden of diverse delight
Displays"
The structure is flawless and the imagery the poem depicts if beautiful.
hugs
Amanda
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2013
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Merry Christmas, Treischel:)
A beautiful poem you've written there.
beautiful alliterations in d
"This garden of diverse delight
Displays"
The structure is flawless and the imagery the poem depicts if beautiful.
hugs
Amanda
Comment Written 25-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2013
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Thank you Amanda. Hugs to you too.
Comment from patricia2042
Excellent use of a form that is new to me, and which I intend to try out myself. Pleasant thoughts, not utterly original but with great charm.
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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2013
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Excellent use of a form that is new to me, and which I intend to try out myself. Pleasant thoughts, not utterly original but with great charm.
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Comment Written 23-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2013
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Thank you Patricia.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, treischel, you did an excellent job writing this triolet poem about the beauty of the garden that delights the heart. i enjoyed reading it. i had a hard time reading it because the letters kept fading into the background. i had to adjust my screen.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2013
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this is very well written, treischel, you did an excellent job writing this triolet poem about the beauty of the garden that delights the heart. i enjoyed reading it. i had a hard time reading it because the letters kept fading into the background. i had to adjust my screen.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2013
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Thank you sweetwoodjax, that blue on green color scheme gives some people trouble. Ive tried to adjust the green several times. This combination seemed best of all the others.
Comment from mfowler
I like how the triolet works with this poem. Your central premise of gardens displaying God's delights is simple but universal in appeal. The poem's format allows reptition and celebration of the key point; enough to stimulate thinking about the idea, but not so much as to feel laboured.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2013
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I like how the triolet works with this poem. Your central premise of gardens displaying God's delights is simple but universal in appeal. The poem's format allows reptition and celebration of the key point; enough to stimulate thinking about the idea, but not so much as to feel laboured.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2013
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Thank you fowler. An excellent analysis.
Comment from Gungalo
In sights so bright that they excite
Emotions that within us dwell.
This garden of diverse delight
Displays the Maker's works so well.
A beautiful triolet Tom. It's true that the maker's works are displayed wel wherever they may be. This is a wonderful write.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2013
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In sights so bright that they excite
Emotions that within us dwell.
This garden of diverse delight
Displays the Maker's works so well.
A beautiful triolet Tom. It's true that the maker's works are displayed wel wherever they may be. This is a wonderful write.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much Gungalo. You make me smile.
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That real good Tom.
Comment from 9999pool
Another beautiful garden poem to describe the beauty of this diverse colorful garden of flowers.
Such pleasing and colorful diplay of nature's small wonders to delight and cheer up our weary souls, smiles.
Good triolet and very well penned too.
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2013
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Another beautiful garden poem to describe the beauty of this diverse colorful garden of flowers.
Such pleasing and colorful diplay of nature's small wonders to delight and cheer up our weary souls, smiles.
Good triolet and very well penned too.
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))
Comment Written 19-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2013
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Thank you Ritchie.
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My pleasure Tom. Happy and joyous season to you and yours.
Comment from Brocha1
very well written.There is nothing quite like te magic of blossoming flowers. They certainly do attest to the wonder of their creator.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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very well written.There is nothing quite like te magic of blossoming flowers. They certainly do attest to the wonder of their creator.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Thank you Bricha1
Comment from bkbehera
It is an impressive piece of triolet narrating the beauty of garden blooming with the glory of creature, as variety of flowers. It is beautiful and extremely catchy.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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It is an impressive piece of triolet narrating the beauty of garden blooming with the glory of creature, as variety of flowers. It is beautiful and extremely catchy.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Thank you bkbehera.
Comment from rhonny
i like this and i think the poem works very well in form that i'm not all that familiar with. but your words and lines flowly nicely and aren't forced.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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i like this and i think the poem works very well in form that i'm not all that familiar with. but your words and lines flowly nicely and aren't forced.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Thank you rhonny.
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:)
Comment from CornishChick
You know I'm your biggest fan. I read all your poems. Some "hit" me more than others, although the talent shines trough all. This one is particularly special to me. I love the feel of it. The rhyming, the rhythm. And, of course, the subject matter. Don't get discouraged. You are blessing others out there ... like me! You are also quite talented in photography and your photo choices always match your poetry so well. Keep it up!
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2013
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You know I'm your biggest fan. I read all your poems. Some "hit" me more than others, although the talent shines trough all. This one is particularly special to me. I love the feel of it. The rhyming, the rhythm. And, of course, the subject matter. Don't get discouraged. You are blessing others out there ... like me! You are also quite talented in photography and your photo choices always match your poetry so well. Keep it up!
Comment Written 24-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2013
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Thank you Ashowalter. I'm so glad for your comments and encouragement.
