Savannah Love
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Comment from JMUwrites
This is excellent Barbara, the conversations between characters is written so very well and I enjoy seeing each character develop the way they have from one chapter to the next!
Thanks so much for sharing this one and I'll now anxiously await the next installment in your novel!
Warmly,
Jeffrey
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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This is excellent Barbara, the conversations between characters is written so very well and I enjoy seeing each character develop the way they have from one chapter to the next!
Thanks so much for sharing this one and I'll now anxiously await the next installment in your novel!
Warmly,
Jeffrey
Comment Written 18-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Hahahaha - oops. Paige did not hire anyone. This is a great chapter, Barbara. I think Billy Joe and Cash had better start believing in ghosts. I like how you arranged the bit about Billy Joe making Cash stop for gas, especially. Very realistic. :)
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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Hahahaha - oops. Paige did not hire anyone. This is a great chapter, Barbara. I think Billy Joe and Cash had better start believing in ghosts. I like how you arranged the bit about Billy Joe making Cash stop for gas, especially. Very realistic. :)
Comment Written 18-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well wwritten, barbara, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where we find out the things going on at the house and cash thinks paige paid for special effects people to make it happen. he tells paige that cleve was killed and she said she would send flowers
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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this is very well wwritten, barbara, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where we find out the things going on at the house and cash thinks paige paid for special effects people to make it happen. he tells paige that cleve was killed and she said she would send flowers
Comment Written 18-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from emjaihammond
This grows more interesting by the minute. Or chapter I guess I should say. It is fascinating to watch the boys question each other about what Paige might be capable of after all this time. I guess nobody is counted out at this time. A good mystery.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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This grows more interesting by the minute. Or chapter I guess I should say. It is fascinating to watch the boys question each other about what Paige might be capable of after all this time. I guess nobody is counted out at this time. A good mystery.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from chasennov
Savannah Love. 'Chapter Fifteen, Part Two.' Another one of your perfectly written chapters in the book you have crafted with great skill. Well done, Barbara.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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Savannah Love. 'Chapter Fifteen, Part Two.' Another one of your perfectly written chapters in the book you have crafted with great skill. Well done, Barbara.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Sorry for the delay Barbara, you are most welcome to the review. Kid regards.
Comment from barkingdog
Now what did you go and plant that idea in my head for? I was all comfy with the ghost. LOL
Cleve's death must have something to do with the hauntings. You have me stumped.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2013
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Now what did you go and plant that idea in my head for? I was all comfy with the ghost. LOL
Cleve's death must have something to do with the hauntings. You have me stumped.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2013
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I didn't mean to stump you, well, maybe a little bit. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Barbara,
Great job with the ghosts - even if Billy Joe and Cash don't believe I think you set it up in such a way that I could determine my thoughts on this ghost.
I was surprized Paige didn't more upset over Cleave - but time will tell.
Great writing in this one, I enjoyed reading it. Can't wait to dive into the ghosts a wee bit more.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2013
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Dear Barbara,
Great job with the ghosts - even if Billy Joe and Cash don't believe I think you set it up in such a way that I could determine my thoughts on this ghost.
I was surprized Paige didn't more upset over Cleave - but time will tell.
Great writing in this one, I enjoyed reading it. Can't wait to dive into the ghosts a wee bit more.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 17-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2013
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We will find out more about Cleve later. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Zinnia48
I don't have a clue what is going on, but I am entranced by the dialogue--especially the way you give each character an individual voice. Caroline
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2013
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I don't have a clue what is going on, but I am entranced by the dialogue--especially the way you give each character an individual voice. Caroline
Comment Written 17-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Oh my now you definitely have such an mysterious chapter her Barb Real ghost or the special effects people come in and give the reality there are at least 15 ghost in Pagie's home
Gert
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2013
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Oh my now you definitely have such an mysterious chapter her Barb Real ghost or the special effects people come in and give the reality there are at least 15 ghost in Pagie's home
Gert
Comment Written 17-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I am sure Tyler and Daniel were so afraid they greatly exaggerated the situation. At least I hope so.LOL
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It's up to you Barb to tell us what happens next.
Gert
Comment from lindalcreel
Paige wouldn't lie to them and it seems pretty obvious that someone didn't want those guys in the house. Love how the story is coming together. I always look forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2013
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Paige wouldn't lie to them and it seems pretty obvious that someone didn't want those guys in the house. Love how the story is coming together. I always look forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and the encouragement.
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You're very welcome:)
