Savannah Love
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Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, barbara, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where cash and billy talk about the women in their lives. and they find that paige's fiance was killed. something big went down in savannah
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2013
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this is very well written, barbara, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where cash and billy talk about the women in their lives. and they find that paige's fiance was killed. something big went down in savannah
Comment Written 11-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2013
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A lot went down in savannah. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mumsyone
Good chapter, Barbara. Anxious to hear what Cash heard over the phone.
"Paige's (ex-fianc©)?"
Cash walked over to a shaded area and searched for Bart's phone number(,) then pressed dial.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2013
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Good chapter, Barbara. Anxious to hear what Cash heard over the phone.
"Paige's (ex-fianc©)?"
Cash walked over to a shaded area and searched for Bart's phone number(,) then pressed dial.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the catch and kind review.
Comment from judiverse
Oh, my. I can't wait to find out what's happened back in Savannah. Billy Joe's observations about Paige and Cash are probably right on the money, judging from Paige's reactions to Cash. Love Billy Joe's complaints about the food, service and coffee. Oh, those dainty cups. Interesting news about Cleve Clover being killed. Wonder how that will fit into the plot. Great work, and six stars. judi
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2013
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Oh, my. I can't wait to find out what's happened back in Savannah. Billy Joe's observations about Paige and Cash are probably right on the money, judging from Paige's reactions to Cash. Love Billy Joe's complaints about the food, service and coffee. Oh, those dainty cups. Interesting news about Cleve Clover being killed. Wonder how that will fit into the plot. Great work, and six stars. judi
Comment Written 11-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and the encouragement.
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You're so welcome. Will be looking forward to what happens next. judi
Comment from elgone
Good cliff hanger ending. Also the tie in to the race car driver's death being under investigation. He's probably into debt to the mob or something. Good job.
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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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Good cliff hanger ending. Also the tie in to the race car driver's death being under investigation. He's probably into debt to the mob or something. Good job.
E
Comment Written 11-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I hadn't thought of the mob, neat idea.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Do I sense something is brewing Barb when Cash said to Billy Joe saying --
"We've opened a hornets' nest, and it's not pretty. Come on. We need to hurry."
Hmmm
Gert
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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Do I sense something is brewing Barb when Cash said to Billy Joe saying --
"We've opened a hornets' nest, and it's not pretty. Come on. We need to hurry."
Hmmm
Gert
Comment Written 11-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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I know we need to hurry, this is coming to a close. Thank you for the kind review.
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Really you story is coming to the end?
Gert
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As slow as I write, it will be a while. I just wanted to let you know that I do appreciate you and wish you the best.
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You are so welcome
Gert
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
Oh my, now I've got a whole week to wait to see what else is going on. Is the puppy okay? We can't have anything happen to Morgan. God loves you and so do I.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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Oh my, now I've got a whole week to wait to see what else is going on. Is the puppy okay? We can't have anything happen to Morgan. God loves you and so do I.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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I hope Morgan is fine. He's staying with Nala. We will have to wait and see. Thank you for the kind review.
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You're a dog lover, you can't let anything happen to Morgan. it would break to meany of your readers hearts. God loves you and I do too.
Comment from c_lucas
It looks like things are really popping with everyone out of town. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
Error:
With is (his) shirt off and
"Paige's ex-fianc©?" (Evil Eddie)
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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It looks like things are really popping with everyone out of town. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
Error:
With is (his) shirt off and
"Paige's ex-fianc©?" (Evil Eddie)
Comment Written 11-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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I shall fix those two little irritations. Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from adewpearl
It's what, seven - I would add that comma
I love the cliff hanger ending
excellent dialogue throughout - I love how Cash still thinks Paige is too proper and rich and Yankee to consider a life with him while is friend is trying to set him straight
Humorous discussion of what is Southern and the Northern influence on Atlanta LOL :-) Brooke
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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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It's what, seven - I would add that comma
I love the cliff hanger ending
excellent dialogue throughout - I love how Cash still thinks Paige is too proper and rich and Yankee to consider a life with him while is friend is trying to set him straight
Humorous discussion of what is Southern and the Northern influence on Atlanta LOL :-) Brooke
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Comment Written 11-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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I really like Billy Joe's character because he's not afraid to say what he thinks or feels. He's fun. Thank you for the kind review. I added the comma.
Comment from Gungalo
Cash says no to marrying Paige. LOL. BUt we shall see. In the meantime, they've gotten a call to hurry back to the homestead. Something's up for sure.
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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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Cash says no to marrying Paige. LOL. BUt we shall see. In the meantime, they've gotten a call to hurry back to the homestead. Something's up for sure.
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Comment Written 11-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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Yes, something is up. Thank you for the kind review.
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Smile.
