Savannah Love
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58 total reviews
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Barb,
Whooohooo! Love these kind of end hooks.
Chase better get to some serious courting if he's gonna have Paige married in a month! LOL.
Great chapter. Turning the page now.
~ System glitch. ~~
"Paige's ex-fianc[�©]?"
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilinâ??â?¦ Jax (*,*)
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
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Hi, Barb,
Whooohooo! Love these kind of end hooks.
Chase better get to some serious courting if he's gonna have Paige married in a month! LOL.
Great chapter. Turning the page now.
~ System glitch. ~~
"Paige's ex-fianc[�©]?"
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilinâ??â?¦ Jax (*,*)
Comment Written 06-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
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You're the greatest
Comment from Sankey
More interesting sub plot again huh. Good story can't wait to get into it again. Going really well but curious and mysterious. No Spags
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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More interesting sub plot again huh. Good story can't wait to get into it again. Going really well but curious and mysterious. No Spags
Comment Written 12-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Oh my you have been busy.
Comment from NaughtieScribe
Oh no, I hope Paige does'nt do a guilt trip over Cleve's death.
"I got eyes, ain't I? Paige's yours. You two just need to set the wedding day." - LOL!
It's official, Billy Joe has my heart. I swear he reminds me so much of my Dad, bless his soul.
And you have left me with a serious cliff hanger. Luckily I got 25 minutes left of lunch. Onward.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2013
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Oh no, I hope Paige does'nt do a guilt trip over Cleve's death.
"I got eyes, ain't I? Paige's yours. You two just need to set the wedding day." - LOL!
It's official, Billy Joe has my heart. I swear he reminds me so much of my Dad, bless his soul.
And you have left me with a serious cliff hanger. Luckily I got 25 minutes left of lunch. Onward.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2013
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I get a kick out of Billy Joe myself. He's fun.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)
This post is a nice change of pace as Cash and Billy Joe chat while the girls rest. For the first time Billy Joe tells Cash that Paige is just waiting for him to "pop the question." Cash just continues to act clueless. Didn't he learn anything in college?
Now a call from Bart stirs up some action. Something has happened back at Paige's mansion back in Savannah and the decide its time to head back.
A news broadcast has reported that Paige's former fianc© has been killed in a racing accident. Will Paige need more love and Irish Hugs to get over this rough patch?
Good dialog as the story seems ready to move forward.
Roger
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2013
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Hi Barbara:)
This post is a nice change of pace as Cash and Billy Joe chat while the girls rest. For the first time Billy Joe tells Cash that Paige is just waiting for him to "pop the question." Cash just continues to act clueless. Didn't he learn anything in college?
Now a call from Bart stirs up some action. Something has happened back at Paige's mansion back in Savannah and the decide its time to head back.
A news broadcast has reported that Paige's former fianc© has been killed in a racing accident. Will Paige need more love and Irish Hugs to get over this rough patch?
Good dialog as the story seems ready to move forward.
Roger
Comment Written 25-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I always appreciate hearing from you. I am sure some Irish hugs could cure Paige and all else that ills the world.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
A good transition, Barbara. Sounds like you're on the home stretch and all our questions are about to be answered. Well done. :) nancy
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2013
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A good transition, Barbara. Sounds like you're on the home stretch and all our questions are about to be answered. Well done. :) nancy
Comment Written 15-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2013
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Yes, I am. Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from elchupakabra
Lately, I've been in and out of this and many other stories on FS, and I apologize. I'm in between yet another move, and of course, yet again, it has to be from one province to another lol. Anyways, I enjoyed the dialogue in this piece, I thought it was representative of the characters. I also thought your narrative pushes the story along well. A great addition to your book, excellent work here, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2013
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Lately, I've been in and out of this and many other stories on FS, and I apologize. I'm in between yet another move, and of course, yet again, it has to be from one province to another lol. Anyways, I enjoyed the dialogue in this piece, I thought it was representative of the characters. I also thought your narrative pushes the story along well. A great addition to your book, excellent work here, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A good chapter, my friend. I can't wait to find out more about the ghost. Bet you are looking forward to thanksgiving break~~Debbie
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2013
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A good chapter, my friend. I can't wait to find out more about the ghost. Bet you are looking forward to thanksgiving break~~Debbie
Comment Written 15-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. Yes, one of my son's and his fiancé will be coming. I still have one at home. I will be missing two and their families, but they live too far.
Comment from chasennov
Savannah Love. 'Chapter Fifteen Part one.' This was a pleasant read once again. I am sorry I have not been around lately, took a sabbatical, but will be back in full swing shortly. Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2013
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Savannah Love. 'Chapter Fifteen Part one.' This was a pleasant read once again. I am sorry I have not been around lately, took a sabbatical, but will be back in full swing shortly. Well done.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. Life happens and our writing suffers.
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You're very welcome, and never was a truer word spoken, Barbara.
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You're very welcome, and never was a truer word spoken, Barbara.
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You're very welcome, and never was a truer word spoken, Barbara.
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You're very welcome, and never was a truer word spoken, Barbara.
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
"Paige's ex-fianc©?" Thought you would like to see this.
Again good job and enjoyed reading. ................................................................
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2013
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"Paige's ex-fianc©?" Thought you would like to see this.
Again good job and enjoyed reading. ................................................................
Comment Written 14-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. EE hates me.
Comment from allborn66
Oh - that's not playing fair. You character is told something and the reader doesn't get to listen in.
I'm hoping you'll fill us in soon. The chapter had a great flow. The dialogue sounded natural.
Barbara
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2013
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Oh - that's not playing fair. You character is told something and the reader doesn't get to listen in.
I'm hoping you'll fill us in soon. The chapter had a great flow. The dialogue sounded natural.
Barbara
Comment Written 14-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
