Night Guilt
Guilt never rests30 total reviews
Comment from Millibrad
An excellent foray into the mind of a tortured soul. The character of Sheriff Dugan is a reminder that everything in life is not black or white, that there are many shades of gray. I'm glad Tracy can sleep again.
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An excellent foray into the mind of a tortured soul. The character of Sheriff Dugan is a reminder that everything in life is not black or white, that there are many shades of gray. I'm glad Tracy can sleep again.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2013
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
window what time ii was ('It') not 'ii'
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A well-written, but very sad story. I am glad it is fiction, but there are too many similar cases which are true. It is so very sad. This one touched my heart~Debbie
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window what time ii was ('It') not 'ii'
sleep-deprived should be hyphenated
A well-written, but very sad story. I am glad it is fiction, but there are too many similar cases which are true. It is so very sad. This one touched my heart~Debbie
Comment Written 09-Nov-2013
Comment from Gungalo
Boy this was sure a great story. The love she once felt for her husband was gone and in it's place stood the long arm of the law. Sigh.
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Boy this was sure a great story. The love she once felt for her husband was gone and in it's place stood the long arm of the law. Sigh.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2013
Comment from joneau2
This was an incredibly engaging tale, so interesting. Your writing is excellent, the story well conceived and composed. I'm impressed. Very well done.
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This was an incredibly engaging tale, so interesting. Your writing is excellent, the story well conceived and composed. I'm impressed. Very well done.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2013
Comment from ericawrites
Wow, this is a really fantastic story, so very well written, draws the reader in from start to finish. Very cleverly composed, you paint a vivid picture of your characters.
The picture is just adorable.
Well done, good luck in the competition.
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Wow, this is a really fantastic story, so very well written, draws the reader in from start to finish. Very cleverly composed, you paint a vivid picture of your characters.
The picture is just adorable.
Well done, good luck in the competition.
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Comment Written 09-Nov-2013
Comment from Siouxsun
Excellent writing! Captivated from beginning to end. It is so realistic it is hard to separate fiction from the emotions it stirred.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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Excellent writing! Captivated from beginning to end. It is so realistic it is hard to separate fiction from the emotions it stirred.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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Thank you very much.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
window what time ii was ('It') not 'ii'
sleep-deprived should be hyphenated
A well-written, but very sad story. I am glad it is fiction, but there are too many similar cases which are true. It is so very sad. This one touched my heart~Debbie
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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window what time ii was ('It') not 'ii'
sleep-deprived should be hyphenated
A well-written, but very sad story. I am glad it is fiction, but there are too many similar cases which are true. It is so very sad. This one touched my heart~Debbie
Comment Written 11-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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Thank you, Debbie. I appreciate the great review and you help with the edits.
Comment from Twilightspire
In a word, powerful. This piece is wonderfully well written and shockingly poignant. I've seen too much of this crap not be able to relate to any of the characters. Its realistic and chilling with vivid descriptions and an excellent flow.
Very good, my friend.
-T.J.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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In a word, powerful. This piece is wonderfully well written and shockingly poignant. I've seen too much of this crap not be able to relate to any of the characters. Its realistic and chilling with vivid descriptions and an excellent flow.
Very good, my friend.
-T.J.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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Thank you very much, T.J. I appreciate the awsome review. Unfortunately many of has seen too much of that. Choices matter.
Comment from baustian64
You have the ability to make a great story come from a small sentence. I really enjoyed reading this. This was written very well. Thank you.
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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2013
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You have the ability to make a great story come from a small sentence. I really enjoyed reading this. This was written very well. Thank you.
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Comment Written 10-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2013
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Thank you
Comment from pbroussard209
This was a very touching story. The last paragraph actually gave me chills. I like how we came in during the middle of the ordeal and you led us to a heartfelt end.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2013
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This was a very touching story. The last paragraph actually gave me chills. I like how we came in during the middle of the ordeal and you led us to a heartfelt end.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2013
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Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. When did the site come back up?
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I think just now. That was horrible, I felt like a drug addict who couldn't get her fix. I think I may have a problem. I don't stay logged in but I like to check in often throughout the day. I didn't know what to do with myself. I had to resort to FB. Lol
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Lol, I went to FB too!
