Savannah Love
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Comment from mumsyone
Good chapter, Barbara. Nice to see that Cash is an old-fashioned kind of guy. Not many of those left these days.
He spent the night with (a?) professional.
"It never occurs (occurred?) to me that you spent the night with a ghost or a treasure chest
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2013
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Good chapter, Barbara. Nice to see that Cash is an old-fashioned kind of guy. Not many of those left these days.
He spent the night with (a?) professional.
"It never occurs (occurred?) to me that you spent the night with a ghost or a treasure chest
Comment Written 03-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and the assistance.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Barb
I really like this chapter, to find out how Cash is a true gentlemen respecting Pagie.
( I know that feeling until Stan and I tied the knot
I like the carton of a cat and dog making up.
Gert
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Hi Barb
I really like this chapter, to find out how Cash is a true gentlemen respecting Pagie.
( I know that feeling until Stan and I tied the knot
I like the carton of a cat and dog making up.
Gert
Comment Written 03-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I want Cash to be a true Southern Gentleman. I hope it plays well.
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I know you as the writer will make it so.
Gert
Comment from elgone
He spent the night with (a) professional.
Cash explains how a country boy respect s a lady. That's why he ran away and slept in the SUV. Cute chapter with a nice conflict between the two MCs
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He spent the night with (a) professional.
Cash explains how a country boy respect s a lady. That's why he ran away and slept in the SUV. Cute chapter with a nice conflict between the two MCs
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Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
Comment from Gungalo
Boy Paige sure put it to im and he finally told her he slept in the SUV because that is how he was brought up. He asked if they were still good and she said perfect. SIgh.
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Boy Paige sure put it to im and he finally told her he slept in the SUV because that is how he was brought up. He asked if they were still good and she said perfect. SIgh.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
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Smiling at you Barb.
Comment from Taffspride
A real Southern gentleman is Cash. A great chapter Barbara. Although I have been neglecting reviewing, because of my own novel, I have continued reading your, looking forward to it each week.
I like your great use of dialog to tell the story, I have been encouraged to do the same, because it engages the reader. You have proved that it does.
Thank you for sharing.
Iechyd da
Ann
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A real Southern gentleman is Cash. A great chapter Barbara. Although I have been neglecting reviewing, because of my own novel, I have continued reading your, looking forward to it each week.
I like your great use of dialog to tell the story, I have been encouraged to do the same, because it engages the reader. You have proved that it does.
Thank you for sharing.
Iechyd da
Ann
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Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Another nice chapter that moves along with the usual crisp and believable dialog that throws in hints of conflict in every line. Thanks for the read.
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Another nice chapter that moves along with the usual crisp and believable dialog that throws in hints of conflict in every line. Thanks for the read.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Curly Girly
Another good chapter. The story is warming up. She's learning about Cash and the way he feels about her.
You wrote:
Paige wrinkled up her nose and plopped on the bed.
Suggest:
Paige wrinkled her nose and plopped on the bed.
He remove his finger, put his arms around her,
He removeD his finger, put his arms around her,
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2013
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Another good chapter. The story is warming up. She's learning about Cash and the way he feels about her.
You wrote:
Paige wrinkled up her nose and plopped on the bed.
Suggest:
Paige wrinkled her nose and plopped on the bed.
He remove his finger, put his arms around her,
He removeD his finger, put his arms around her,
Comment Written 03-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and the sharp eyes.
Comment from lindalcreel
So Cash is old fashioned; that's sweet. But Paige would have rather had him spend the night. she does care about him and they both need to get over their insecurities if they are going to face these ghosts together. they went away for a reason. Maybe they should take care of that business and everything else will fall into place, as long as they can get rid of their egos. Thanks for sharing another wonderful read.
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So Cash is old fashioned; that's sweet. But Paige would have rather had him spend the night. she does care about him and they both need to get over their insecurities if they are going to face these ghosts together. they went away for a reason. Maybe they should take care of that business and everything else will fall into place, as long as they can get rid of their egos. Thanks for sharing another wonderful read.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
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So welcome:)
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Barbara,
At least Cash and Paige have made peace. I like Cash's approach, he has his principles and stands firm by them.
Nice close to the chapter, but what is happening in Savannah????
Patrick
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Hi Barbara,
At least Cash and Paige have made peace. I like Cash's approach, he has his principles and stands firm by them.
Nice close to the chapter, but what is happening in Savannah????
Patrick
Comment Written 03-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2013
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We will find out in my next post what happened back home. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Eigle Rull
Oh, Man, the photo you chose is perfect. It's beautiful, cute, lively, and it helps tell the meaning of the story.
This piece was very well written in words that were easy to read and understand. They conveyed your thoughts and feelings to the readers. It was interesting and cute. It held my attention very well. The dialog was fantastic, and I very much enjoyed reading it my friend. I think it is excellent.
Always with respect,
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2013
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Oh, Man, the photo you chose is perfect. It's beautiful, cute, lively, and it helps tell the meaning of the story.
This piece was very well written in words that were easy to read and understand. They conveyed your thoughts and feelings to the readers. It was interesting and cute. It held my attention very well. The dialog was fantastic, and I very much enjoyed reading it my friend. I think it is excellent.
Always with respect,
Comment Written 03-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
