Savannah Love
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Comment from TOMORAL
This is a page turner. I read the last chapter and am eager to read the next. I think the picture is awesome, and it gets my attention right away. Looking forward and pulling for Paige and Cash....blessings...
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This is a page turner. I read the last chapter and am eager to read the next. I think the picture is awesome, and it gets my attention right away. Looking forward and pulling for Paige and Cash....blessings...
Comment Written 04-Nov-2013
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
CONSIDER: See a pattern?
"Paige yanked the ties...Avoid adverbs you don't need.
"Paige elevated her voice. "Exactly my point!"
"Paige stood up hands on her hips. KEEP IT SIMPLE
A good read as usual.
Regards:
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CONSIDER: See a pattern?
"Paige yanked the ties...Avoid adverbs you don't need.
"Paige elevated her voice. "Exactly my point!"
"Paige stood up hands on her hips. KEEP IT SIMPLE
A good read as usual.
Regards:
Comment Written 04-Nov-2013
Comment from pickthorn
Well I'm glad that Paige and Cash are together again and he had an innocent explanation for his whereabouts the night before. Now maybe they can enjoy their time in New Orleans.
Another well written chapter that I really enjoyed. Gary
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Well I'm glad that Paige and Cash are together again and he had an innocent explanation for his whereabouts the night before. Now maybe they can enjoy their time in New Orleans.
Another well written chapter that I really enjoyed. Gary
Comment Written 04-Nov-2013
Comment from country ranch writer
SO GLAD SHE FORGAVE HIM, THERE ARE STILL SOME GENTLEMAN IN THE WORLD ALTHOUGH NOT MANY!WHAT EVER HAPPENED TO MORALS PEOPLE HAD GROWING UP
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SO GLAD SHE FORGAVE HIM, THERE ARE STILL SOME GENTLEMAN IN THE WORLD ALTHOUGH NOT MANY!WHAT EVER HAPPENED TO MORALS PEOPLE HAD GROWING UP
Comment Written 04-Nov-2013
Comment from Writingfundimension
Terrific dialogue in this chapter, barbara. I'm so glad that Paige and Cash are back being friends though it was definitely touch and go. Another excellent chapter!
Warmest regards, Bev
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Terrific dialogue in this chapter, barbara. I'm so glad that Paige and Cash are back being friends though it was definitely touch and go. Another excellent chapter!
Warmest regards, Bev
Comment Written 04-Nov-2013
Comment from AprilShower
This is so sweet. This is the start of a wonderful relationship, Barbara. It's one where two can fully trust each other. I am enjoying the story. It's well written.
April :o)
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This is so sweet. This is the start of a wonderful relationship, Barbara. It's one where two can fully trust each other. I am enjoying the story. It's well written.
April :o)
Comment Written 04-Nov-2013
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi Barbara,
So she paces all night and he's sleeping in the SUV - a well penned post for your story progression - these two characters seem to drive each other nuts from time to time.
You managed to let that come across in this post.
Well penned work my friend.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
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Hi Barbara,
So she paces all night and he's sleeping in the SUV - a well penned post for your story progression - these two characters seem to drive each other nuts from time to time.
You managed to let that come across in this post.
Well penned work my friend.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 04-Nov-2013
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
You show Paige's concern for Cash so well.
She really questioned him - almost an interrogation
but still he hasn't told all.
Your writing makes it all so realistic, Barbara.
Margaret
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You show Paige's concern for Cash so well.
She really questioned him - almost an interrogation
but still he hasn't told all.
Your writing makes it all so realistic, Barbara.
Margaret
Comment Written 04-Nov-2013
Comment from amahra
I think I've told you this before, but I really love your character's names, Cash and Paige. I always struggle to get mine. Though once I do, I'm satisfied. I don't think I would have forgiven Cash so quickly. Another slap would have been perfect. Smile.
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I think I've told you this before, but I really love your character's names, Cash and Paige. I always struggle to get mine. Though once I do, I'm satisfied. I don't think I would have forgiven Cash so quickly. Another slap would have been perfect. Smile.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2013
Comment from JMUwrites
Thanks for sharing this Barbara...a wonderful, most enjoyable chapter write and once again you did awesomely with keeping all the conversational exchanges clear and concise for the reader's benefit! (and there was a great deal of conversation in this chapter)
All the best to you and happy writing going forward!
JMU (Jeffrey)
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Thanks for sharing this Barbara...a wonderful, most enjoyable chapter write and once again you did awesomely with keeping all the conversational exchanges clear and concise for the reader's benefit! (and there was a great deal of conversation in this chapter)
All the best to you and happy writing going forward!
JMU (Jeffrey)
Comment Written 04-Nov-2013
