Savannah Love
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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Whoohooo! The man has scruples and didn't want to take advantage.
I think he's not listening to her, "Yeah, baby, come to Mamma."
Great chapter.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*.*)
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
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Whoohooo! The man has scruples and didn't want to take advantage.
I think he's not listening to her, "Yeah, baby, come to Mamma."
Great chapter.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*.*)
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from Sankey
At last. He is a proper boy huh! I bet his Momma must be pleased with him. Really good stuff going on here. Dying to know what has happened back home. No Spags again good job.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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At last. He is a proper boy huh! I bet his Momma must be pleased with him. Really good stuff going on here. Dying to know what has happened back home. No Spags again good job.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you, I really appreciate this.
Comment from NaughtieScribe
No! Paige needed to hold out a little longer. Make him sorry for having her worry so. Uh, she's puddy in his arms. Thank goodness, she gets under his skin just as much.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2013
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No! Paige needed to hold out a little longer. Make him sorry for having her worry so. Uh, she's puddy in his arms. Thank goodness, she gets under his skin just as much.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2013
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Paige cares a lot for Cash, but both are too stubborn to admit it. Thank you.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)
"I'm a country boy. I know how to handle myself."{In reality Cash doesn't have a clue about handling himself with women. Maybe Paige wanted him to lose a little romantic control.}
When Paige confronts Cash about running out when she dressed a bit more sexy than he expected, his only excuse for leaving her alone was, "Maybe I was hungry."
With that lame excuse, Cash almost blew Paige's romantic plans. Fortunately after Paige plied the real reason out of Cash, this wonderful exchange took place:
Cash put his finger over her lips. "Because that's how I was raised and that's who I am." He removed his finger, put his arms around her, and his lips tenderly met hers.
After the kiss, Cash continued to hold Paige. "We good?"
Paige nodded. We're perfect.
Now I am sending you my love and Irish Hugs for your great healing dialog.
Roger
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2013
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Hi Barbara:)
"I'm a country boy. I know how to handle myself."{In reality Cash doesn't have a clue about handling himself with women. Maybe Paige wanted him to lose a little romantic control.}
When Paige confronts Cash about running out when she dressed a bit more sexy than he expected, his only excuse for leaving her alone was, "Maybe I was hungry."
With that lame excuse, Cash almost blew Paige's romantic plans. Fortunately after Paige plied the real reason out of Cash, this wonderful exchange took place:
Cash put his finger over her lips. "Because that's how I was raised and that's who I am." He removed his finger, put his arms around her, and his lips tenderly met hers.
After the kiss, Cash continued to hold Paige. "We good?"
Paige nodded. We're perfect.
Now I am sending you my love and Irish Hugs for your great healing dialog.
Roger
Comment Written 25-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I always appreciate hearing from you. The Irish hugs feel good.
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
Good job. I'm enjoying catching up. Some of the actions in your scenes are quite vivid; however, Paige slapping Cash was a little over kill.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2013
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Good job. I'm enjoying catching up. Some of the actions in your scenes are quite vivid; however, Paige slapping Cash was a little over kill.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. Paige is very high strung and I wanted her to show a lot of emotion.
Comment from RGstar
The second chapter I have come across in terms of keeping in touch. Yo are a long way in.
Nothing to report this time.
A good flow, good dialogue with emotions in the right places.
I don't know where the story is going now from which it is derived, but wherever that is, it is on its way.
Not so much more I can add yo this, if only to say , keep going.
Good work.
RGstar
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The second chapter I have come across in terms of keeping in touch. Yo are a long way in.
Nothing to report this time.
A good flow, good dialogue with emotions in the right places.
I don't know where the story is going now from which it is derived, but wherever that is, it is on its way.
Not so much more I can add yo this, if only to say , keep going.
Good work.
RGstar
Comment Written 07-Nov-2013
Comment from trevorletang
Well I am intrigued, where is it that Cash was last night? You have managed to capture the feeling of fear, worry tension so well. The reader feels it to. I have not read your previous chapters but intend to do so. Am looking forward to more
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Well I am intrigued, where is it that Cash was last night? You have managed to capture the feeling of fear, worry tension so well. The reader feels it to. I have not read your previous chapters but intend to do so. Am looking forward to more
Comment Written 07-Nov-2013
Comment from mfowler
All that angst! All that conversation, and he slept in the SUV. Loved it! I kept waiting for the secret of the night but he turns out to be moral...noone expects that.
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All that angst! All that conversation, and he slept in the SUV. Loved it! I kept waiting for the secret of the night but he turns out to be moral...noone expects that.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2013
Comment from Selina Stambi
AW ..w...w!
What a lovely chapter. Oh, yes, and I'm good too!
Loved this - a most unexpected follow up to the previous write.
Well done!
Sonali
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AW ..w...w!
What a lovely chapter. Oh, yes, and I'm good too!
Loved this - a most unexpected follow up to the previous write.
Well done!
Sonali
Comment Written 06-Nov-2013
Comment from Jade Lawson
Paige was worried and shows that to Cash. Their argument was intense. she thinks about the worst things. But then Cash explains that he didn't feel comfortable of things happening because of the way he was raised. I wonder if that was really the reason.
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Paige was worried and shows that to Cash. Their argument was intense. she thinks about the worst things. But then Cash explains that he didn't feel comfortable of things happening because of the way he was raised. I wonder if that was really the reason.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2013
