Savannah Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 67 "CHAPTER 14: PART FOUR"Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?
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Comment from Curtis Hatch
Barbara,
The story continues to hold my attention as Cash and Paige spar with the emotions they are feeling and trying to control. Cash has more problems with the relationship than Paige it would appear. He seems to be overwhelmed with the class differences. Excellent dialogue. It is an enjoyable read.
Curtis
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Barbara,
The story continues to hold my attention as Cash and Paige spar with the emotions they are feeling and trying to control. Cash has more problems with the relationship than Paige it would appear. He seems to be overwhelmed with the class differences. Excellent dialogue. It is an enjoyable read.
Curtis
Comment Written 29-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from PageWizard
Hello again,
Good chapter, in lines following END OF PREVIOUS POST:you spelled PAGE instead of Paige. I also couldn't figure out what she was dressed in when she went into the hall, then remembered her close were in the other room after the fact. Was she naked? LOL
See you next chapter,
DeAnna
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Hello again,
Good chapter, in lines following END OF PREVIOUS POST:you spelled PAGE instead of Paige. I also couldn't figure out what she was dressed in when she went into the hall, then remembered her close were in the other room after the fact. Was she naked? LOL
See you next chapter,
DeAnna
Comment Written 29-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I will check that out. Nobody has mentioned that in the previous post or in this one.
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Thank you for the kind review. I will check that out. Nobody has mentioned that in the previous post or in this one.
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Thank you for the kind review. I will check that out. Nobody has mentioned that in the previous post or in this one.
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Thank you for the kind review. I will check that out. Nobody has mentioned that in the previous post or in this one.
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Thank you for the kind review. I will check that out. Nobody has mentioned that in the previous post or in this one.
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Thank you for the kind review. I will check that out. Nobody has mentioned that in the previous post or in this one.
Comment from essence56
I look forward to reading each chapter as it comes. My favorite is Paige and I want her so much to have a good relationship and happiness. You are such a good author and I can tell a good person in heart, that is why your writing is so down to earth and gives much vision. Thank you
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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I look forward to reading each chapter as it comes. My favorite is Paige and I want her so much to have a good relationship and happiness. You are such a good author and I can tell a good person in heart, that is why your writing is so down to earth and gives much vision. Thank you
Comment Written 29-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Paige is just full of contradiction, isn't she? She didn't want to start anything with Cash, and now she has - you've hit it just right, I think, Barbara. Her emotions are running on high. I'm waiting for his to catch up now. LOL. Very entertaining.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Paige is just full of contradiction, isn't she? She didn't want to start anything with Cash, and now she has - you've hit it just right, I think, Barbara. Her emotions are running on high. I'm waiting for his to catch up now. LOL. Very entertaining.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Barbara Wilkey ....
I enjoyed this rather short chapter of your book and there is just one small change needed.
* You have - until I have too. This should be -
until I have to.
Now I look forward to the next chapter.
Love from .... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Hullo Barbara Wilkey ....
I enjoyed this rather short chapter of your book and there is just one small change needed.
* You have - until I have too. This should be -
until I have to.
Now I look forward to the next chapter.
Love from .... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Cumbrianlass
OOO, I love the bit of drama at the end. She hugs him, and then smacks him! I hope he gets the message. Good post - I felt for Paige - trapped like she was in the room.
I'm interested to see what he has to say for himself.
Great post, Barbara.
Hugs
Av
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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OOO, I love the bit of drama at the end. She hugs him, and then smacks him! I hope he gets the message. Good post - I felt for Paige - trapped like she was in the room.
I'm interested to see what he has to say for himself.
Great post, Barbara.
Hugs
Av
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I appreciate hearing from you.
Comment from vapros
I think the readers here understand that many of the chapters presented here could best be followed in the context of the book. However, if you have more reviews than steady followers, then many of us must grade upon what we see before us.
You have handled this one very well. Good dialogue among five characters, and a good description of the miserable night Paige has had. Good work.
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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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I think the readers here understand that many of the chapters presented here could best be followed in the context of the book. However, if you have more reviews than steady followers, then many of us must grade upon what we see before us.
You have handled this one very well. Good dialogue among five characters, and a good description of the miserable night Paige has had. Good work.
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Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from reconciled
Hello there....exceptional read. Stories are hard to attention keep if the read puts you to sleep....and I'm wide awake....I hope Cash...is too.....love michael
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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Hello there....exceptional read. Stories are hard to attention keep if the read puts you to sleep....and I'm wide awake....I hope Cash...is too.....love michael
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jean Lagace
What life's problem can't be solved with a bubble bath? This is chapter 67 and it looks like their first kiss. They sure take their time in the South. And then I read the author's note. I knew there had to be an explanation to my denseness. Well, overall, it might be a bit silly but it is well written. A full count then. LOL
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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What life's problem can't be solved with a bubble bath? This is chapter 67 and it looks like their first kiss. They sure take their time in the South. And then I read the author's note. I knew there had to be an explanation to my denseness. Well, overall, it might be a bit silly but it is well written. A full count then. LOL
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Pen&Ink
A tight little story here. Admittedly, I have some catching-up to do, but I did enjoy this short chapter. You use the Paige's thoughts to instill much suspense in this chapter. Though I enjoy descriptive writing, often what isn't said is just as powerful.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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A tight little story here. Admittedly, I have some catching-up to do, but I did enjoy this short chapter. You use the Paige's thoughts to instill much suspense in this chapter. Though I enjoy descriptive writing, often what isn't said is just as powerful.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
