Savannah Love
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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Well, this could get interesting. Is Cash going to run away again or run over to the bed. Okay, gotta turn the page!
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*.*)
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Well, this could get interesting. Is Cash going to run away again or run over to the bed. Okay, gotta turn the page!
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*.*)
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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I so enjoy your comments.
Comment from Sankey
Oh wow what happened? I guess we are gonna find out soon enough. Another good brief chapter. Definitely got me along for the whole ride here.
No Spags.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Oh wow what happened? I guess we are gonna find out soon enough. Another good brief chapter. Definitely got me along for the whole ride here.
No Spags.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from NaughtieScribe
I bet Cash slept in the lobby. Hehehe. Too funny. This scene reminds me of an old black and white movie from the 50's.
I can't wait to find out what his excuse is gonna be. Loving it.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2013
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I bet Cash slept in the lobby. Hehehe. Too funny. This scene reminds me of an old black and white movie from the 50's.
I can't wait to find out what his excuse is gonna be. Loving it.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2013
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THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comment from Jade Lawson
Hi. Indeed Cash's reaction was very strange and poor Paige feels confused and with lack of confidence. It's very strange his action to say the least.
I bet she was happy to see Cash at the door finally, but I wonder what he will say. I am very curious to learn why he reacted in such way.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2013
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Hi. Indeed Cash's reaction was very strange and poor Paige feels confused and with lack of confidence. It's very strange his action to say the least.
I bet she was happy to see Cash at the door finally, but I wonder what he will say. I am very curious to learn why he reacted in such way.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I am sorry you had to review this with no points attached.
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Not to worry. I review mainly because I enjoy the story and to learn, not for the member cents.
Comment from Zue65
I believe this is the story of the rich girl who don't trust men and she's now smitten with the poor boy Cash. Please do tell me if I am following the same story. I have been gone for so long, I have missed some of the events and I don't know if I am following the same thread of events. I really like this story and I look forward to reading the next chapter of your story. God bless.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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I believe this is the story of the rich girl who don't trust men and she's now smitten with the poor boy Cash. Please do tell me if I am following the same story. I have been gone for so long, I have missed some of the events and I don't know if I am following the same thread of events. I really like this story and I look forward to reading the next chapter of your story. God bless.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mteske
Thank you for adding the background knowledge. I had read bits and pieces prior to this and was still in the dark. The background cleared it up for me. Also, great word choice- ensued, rushed, released, relaxed etc. Maybe next time write the background knowledge in italics so then you will not have to add the "today's post" part. Great job on this!
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Thank you for adding the background knowledge. I had read bits and pieces prior to this and was still in the dark. The background cleared it up for me. Also, great word choice- ensued, rushed, released, relaxed etc. Maybe next time write the background knowledge in italics so then you will not have to add the "today's post" part. Great job on this!
Comment Written 30-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I missed a few chapters but feel this is still strong on characterization. I was wondering if you would consider doing a couple of little additions.
With the line:
"I really will." Paige closed the door. "I'm beginning to really hate men."
I know the sentence: "I'm beginning to really hate men." is apparently said to herself, but maybe you could say:
"I'm beginning to really hate men," she muttered to herself. Or not, whatever you feel is best.
Also:
I guess I slept more than I thought.
might sound more casual as:
Guess I slept more than I thought.
That is just a suggestion, and it is absolutely not necessary.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2013
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I missed a few chapters but feel this is still strong on characterization. I was wondering if you would consider doing a couple of little additions.
With the line:
"I really will." Paige closed the door. "I'm beginning to really hate men."
I know the sentence: "I'm beginning to really hate men." is apparently said to herself, but maybe you could say:
"I'm beginning to really hate men," she muttered to herself. Or not, whatever you feel is best.
Also:
I guess I slept more than I thought.
might sound more casual as:
Guess I slept more than I thought.
That is just a suggestion, and it is absolutely not necessary.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2013
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I appreciate your help and review.
Comment from BethShelby
This is funny although I'm sure it wasn't for Paige. She thinks her kiss has driven Cash away. I think maybe he is trying to the perfect Southern gentleman and not take advantage of the situation. Paige isn't as inhibited as he seems to be at the idea of spending the night with him.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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This is funny although I'm sure it wasn't for Paige. She thinks her kiss has driven Cash away. I think maybe he is trying to the perfect Southern gentleman and not take advantage of the situation. Paige isn't as inhibited as he seems to be at the idea of spending the night with him.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mishelly
The way you portrayed Paige's emotions in this post was very realistic. I felt her genuine concern and worry for Cash. I found her reaction at the end very funny, hugging Cash and then slapping him. I can't wait to read the next post to find out why he ran out like that after their kiss :-)
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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The way you portrayed Paige's emotions in this post was very realistic. I felt her genuine concern and worry for Cash. I found her reaction at the end very funny, hugging Cash and then slapping him. I can't wait to read the next post to find out why he ran out like that after their kiss :-)
Comment Written 30-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from gramalot8
Barbara, Paige and Cash are such an interesting couple. I really loved the part about how she openly greets him at the door, then remembers she still mad at him and slaps him. I think we all can relate to moments like that. Great story and thanks, as always, for sharing your talent with us. Jerri
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Barbara, Paige and Cash are such an interesting couple. I really loved the part about how she openly greets him at the door, then remembers she still mad at him and slaps him. I think we all can relate to moments like that. Great story and thanks, as always, for sharing your talent with us. Jerri
Comment Written 30-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
