Picture Poems
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Comment from Capricorn30
I absolutely love this poem!
I like the incorporation of both man and nature as they complement one another;
the first lines of the writing focus on nature, and as the bend in the path occurs, so also does the poem bend to focus on man's journey.
EXCELLENT!
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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I absolutely love this poem!
I like the incorporation of both man and nature as they complement one another;
the first lines of the writing focus on nature, and as the bend in the path occurs, so also does the poem bend to focus on man's journey.
EXCELLENT!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Thank you Margaret. You words touched my heart.
Comment from zanya
Yes I think that is indeed a place we would all like to go to get away from being always or mostly part of the 'herd' and thus pursue our own precious individuality - after all that is our unique gift to the planet.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Yes I think that is indeed a place we would all like to go to get away from being always or mostly part of the 'herd' and thus pursue our own precious individuality - after all that is our unique gift to the planet.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Thank you Zanya. Well said.
Comment from rama devi
Love the simplicity and depth of this as well as the flow--quite lyrical and well voiced. I love walking alone in the woods, so this resonated with me. Beautiful presentation as well.
Fine phonetics with consonance and alliteration of L (lonely, little, leaves blown), alliteration of B (blown, bend) and N (next, nameless). Fine consonance of S and D as well. Sounds great read aloud.
NAMELESS BEND has a good ring of intensity to it and makes a strong closing.
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Love the simplicity and depth of this as well as the flow--quite lyrical and well voiced. I love walking alone in the woods, so this resonated with me. Beautiful presentation as well.
Fine phonetics with consonance and alliteration of L (lonely, little, leaves blown), alliteration of B (blown, bend) and N (next, nameless). Fine consonance of S and D as well. Sounds great read aloud.
NAMELESS BEND has a good ring of intensity to it and makes a strong closing.
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 29-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Thank you rama Devi. That was an awesome review.
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:-))) My pleasure
Comment from robina1978
Nice photo to go with this poem, complements it very well. I like the shape of a tree you made. Also enjoyed the way you wrote about your walk and the nameless corners.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2013
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Nice photo to go with this poem, complements it very well. I like the shape of a tree you made. Also enjoyed the way you wrote about your walk and the nameless corners.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2013
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Thank you Inelegant good to hear from you.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Indeed the little known path can be a lonely road but sometimes the rewards can be astounding.
What's around the next bend? Who knows?
Cleverly written and formatted.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2013
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Indeed the little known path can be a lonely road but sometimes the rewards can be astounding.
What's around the next bend? Who knows?
Cleverly written and formatted.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2013
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Thank you Shirley.
Comment from Joan E.
You adorned your verse with the perfect picture and shaped it a very appealing, plus parallel form. I enjoyed the mood and focus on the "nameless bend". Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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You adorned your verse with the perfect picture and shaped it a very appealing, plus parallel form. I enjoyed the mood and focus on the "nameless bend". Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 25-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much, Joan.
Comment from Jackarrie
This is a lovely poem, the display is so creative shaped like a tree and the image is just fabulous.
Down the road less traveled.
Well done Mary
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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This is a lovely poem, the display is so creative shaped like a tree and the image is just fabulous.
Down the road less traveled.
Well done Mary
Comment Written 25-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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Thank you, Jackarrie.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is a lovely poem and lovely photo, Treischel, perfectly matched. I have wondered, when you take a photo, do you have the words already in mind, or are you inspired by the photo? Whichever way you do it, the final presentation is perfect. xsx sandra
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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This is a lovely poem and lovely photo, Treischel, perfectly matched. I have wondered, when you take a photo, do you have the words already in mind, or are you inspired by the photo? Whichever way you do it, the final presentation is perfect. xsx sandra
Comment Written 25-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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Thank your Sandra. I get inspired by the photo.
Comment from Frankeddy
Nice free verse poem, your poem describes the accompanying picture.
Unlimited freedom, let your thoughts solve the next bend.
Presented in a bright clear setting.
Well done. Frankeddy
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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Nice free verse poem, your poem describes the accompanying picture.
Unlimited freedom, let your thoughts solve the next bend.
Presented in a bright clear setting.
Well done. Frankeddy
Comment Written 25-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much Frankeddy. I appreciate the visit and nice comments.
Comment from ragamuffin
Beautiful! Your words and description make it so easy to picture the solitary woods, a path wide open, and a longing to have the freedom to just meander and experience life. An excellent piece. I get a very uplifting and pleasurable feel from the piece.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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Beautiful! Your words and description make it so easy to picture the solitary woods, a path wide open, and a longing to have the freedom to just meander and experience life. An excellent piece. I get a very uplifting and pleasurable feel from the piece.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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Thank you very much ragamuffin. I am so glad you liked it, and really appreciate the award of stars.
