Savannah Love
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Comment from Writingfundimension
Whew, lots of emotional undercurrents in this chapter, Barbara. You do that sort of thing so well! I think Paige's gesture for her friends is a really nice touch. Too bad Cash is spoiling it. As usual, mighty fine writing! Warmest regards, Bev
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Whew, lots of emotional undercurrents in this chapter, Barbara. You do that sort of thing so well! I think Paige's gesture for her friends is a really nice touch. Too bad Cash is spoiling it. As usual, mighty fine writing! Warmest regards, Bev
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
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You're most welcome! :0)
Comment from fairy77
Wow!Baseball!that was a great piece about sight seeing and relationships.I enjoyed the dialogue and enjoying a new city.It was an excellent piece.Well done!beth fairy77.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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Wow!Baseball!that was a great piece about sight seeing and relationships.I enjoyed the dialogue and enjoying a new city.It was an excellent piece.Well done!beth fairy77.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Allezw2
Lady barbara wilkey,
Pounding the beat to set up the guys and gals, too. So they get dropped into a puzzler and only 50% seem to have a clue, 25% mostly aboard and the remainder a question.
Rates as a travelogue, with some easily extracted detail to set the occasion and the place. A bit of verisimilitude to nail down a veneer of authenticity.
The emotions are a bit scrambled, and a definite query touched the ending, an emotional denouement?
Fantasist
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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Lady barbara wilkey,
Pounding the beat to set up the guys and gals, too. So they get dropped into a puzzler and only 50% seem to have a clue, 25% mostly aboard and the remainder a question.
Rates as a travelogue, with some easily extracted detail to set the occasion and the place. A bit of verisimilitude to nail down a veneer of authenticity.
The emotions are a bit scrambled, and a definite query touched the ending, an emotional denouement?
Fantasist
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're quite welcome.
Comment from JMUwrites
Excellent write Barbara, bravo on a job wonderfully done!
I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter read, from beginning to end the interaction between characters kept my attention and had me longing for more! Most notably, as a reader I felt as though I was "one of the gang", there to witness each scene play-out...thanks to the very descriptive way in which the scenes were written.
Thanks so much for sharing this chapter, and I do very much look forward to the next!
All the best to you, with warm regards...
JMU
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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Excellent write Barbara, bravo on a job wonderfully done!
I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter read, from beginning to end the interaction between characters kept my attention and had me longing for more! Most notably, as a reader I felt as though I was "one of the gang", there to witness each scene play-out...thanks to the very descriptive way in which the scenes were written.
Thanks so much for sharing this chapter, and I do very much look forward to the next!
All the best to you, with warm regards...
JMU
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and stopping by.
Comment from allborn66
This is a very interesting chapter. I think your characters interact with each other well. The dialogue is believable. The situation play out well.
Barbara
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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This is a very interesting chapter. I think your characters interact with each other well. The dialogue is believable. The situation play out well.
Barbara
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
This is quite an adventure of these guys. Paige was so generous to treat them all. It must be nice to be rich. I've been to Atlanta many times because it is only two hours away but of the things you list, I've only been to Stone Mountain. I've also been to Underground Atlanta, the Gone With the Wind museum and CNN. You didn't mention those. I can't wait to see if their trap worked to catch the thieves.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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This is quite an adventure of these guys. Paige was so generous to treat them all. It must be nice to be rich. I've been to Atlanta many times because it is only two hours away but of the things you list, I've only been to Stone Mountain. I've also been to Underground Atlanta, the Gone With the Wind museum and CNN. You didn't mention those. I can't wait to see if their trap worked to catch the thieves.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I couldn't name them all.
Comment from amahra
$158.00 - was this paid for the group or just Cash and Paige. That is a lot of money to watch fish. The dialogue made them seen so real. And I like this line, "you bein a yankee might cause problems." Great stuff.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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$158.00 - was this paid for the group or just Cash and Paige. That is a lot of money to watch fish. The dialogue made them seen so real. And I like this line, "you bein a yankee might cause problems." Great stuff.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. The Georgia Aquarium is right at $30 a piece.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
It seems the foursome is having a good time and I hoe their plan works out. I was happy when Cash took hold of Paige's hand more than once when they were sightseeing. I didn't expect them to end up in the same room. Finally Cash kissed Paige and she returned his passion. I must say I have been waiting for them to get together and they finally did! Well done, blessings, chey
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Hi Barbara,
It seems the foursome is having a good time and I hoe their plan works out. I was happy when Cash took hold of Paige's hand more than once when they were sightseeing. I didn't expect them to end up in the same room. Finally Cash kissed Paige and she returned his passion. I must say I have been waiting for them to get together and they finally did! Well done, blessings, chey
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and your support.
Comment from Curtis Hatch
Barbara,
The story continues to hold my attention. The dialogue between the characters is outstanding even though the circumstances are awkward for Cash. After a great day, Paige gives Billy Joe her room and informs Cash he will have to put up with her. After their kiss, Cash leaves the room raising the suspense of what is to come. I enjoyed the read.
Curtis
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Barbara,
The story continues to hold my attention. The dialogue between the characters is outstanding even though the circumstances are awkward for Cash. After a great day, Paige gives Billy Joe her room and informs Cash he will have to put up with her. After their kiss, Cash leaves the room raising the suspense of what is to come. I enjoyed the read.
Curtis
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and your support.
Comment from Sasha
I enjoyed this chapter. I love the fascinating information about where they went. I also like the fun dialogue between all four. Love how you left us, and Paige, hanging with the unclear ending. I hope Cash comes back....lol
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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I enjoyed this chapter. I love the fascinating information about where they went. I also like the fun dialogue between all four. Love how you left us, and Paige, hanging with the unclear ending. I hope Cash comes back....lol
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and your support.
