Savannah Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 66 "CHAPTER 14: PART THREE"Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?
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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Well, sit me down or blow me over! Where the hell did he go, There's no creek to settle his sensibilities, so Cash, boy, needs to get back in the saddle.
Whew, at this rate, these two will remain platonic for a coons age.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*.*)
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Well, sit me down or blow me over! Where the hell did he go, There's no creek to settle his sensibilities, so Cash, boy, needs to get back in the saddle.
Whew, at this rate, these two will remain platonic for a coons age.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*.*)
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Poor Cash, what is Paige to do?
Comment from Sankey
Oh dear, what happened? Is he being a good Southern boy or what? I think she is just being very kind and showing them all a good time and her appreciation.
Possible spag.... the Dodgers five to three.(")
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Oh dear, what happened? Is he being a good Southern boy or what? I think she is just being very kind and showing them all a good time and her appreciation.
Possible spag.... the Dodgers five to three.(")
Comment Written 12-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thanks for the catch. I appreciate it.
Comment from NaughtieScribe
Billy Joe sounds so much like my Dad, too kewl.
Uh-oh, I bet Paige bunks with Cash so that Mary Pat and Billy Joe can have that dream honeymoon. I feel it coming. Am I right?
Yay!, I knew it, I just knew it. Billy Joe and Mary Pat get the honeymoon. Whoo hoo!
What the heck - is Cash trying to be a tease?
Dang it, my luch break is over. I'll be back later tonight.
Well done as always.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2013
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Billy Joe sounds so much like my Dad, too kewl.
Uh-oh, I bet Paige bunks with Cash so that Mary Pat and Billy Joe can have that dream honeymoon. I feel it coming. Am I right?
Yay!, I knew it, I just knew it. Billy Joe and Mary Pat get the honeymoon. Whoo hoo!
What the heck - is Cash trying to be a tease?
Dang it, my luch break is over. I'll be back later tonight.
Well done as always.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate you spending your lunch with me.
Comment from AprilShower
I don't know how I missed this chapter. Caah is good fellow. Paige better marry him. I enjoyed the chapter, Barbara. It's a lot of fun when you can travel this way. This is well written. I enjoyed the chapter.
April
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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I don't know how I missed this chapter. Caah is good fellow. Paige better marry him. I enjoyed the chapter, Barbara. It's a lot of fun when you can travel this way. This is well written. I enjoyed the chapter.
April
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. sorry you had to read this with no points attached.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
I rarely jump into the middle of a book I have not read from the start, but I've NEVER seen a reward as large as 1.98... for two more pumps you could reach two bucks! I'd be insane to pass that up. How can you possibly have had enough pumps saved up to do this??? WOW.
Well, I owe you a review, so I will say that the dialogue seems natural with good use of action tags to keep the reader focused... and... Who doesn't love a chocolate lab?
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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I rarely jump into the middle of a book I have not read from the start, but I've NEVER seen a reward as large as 1.98... for two more pumps you could reach two bucks! I'd be insane to pass that up. How can you possibly have had enough pumps saved up to do this??? WOW.
Well, I owe you a review, so I will say that the dialogue seems natural with good use of action tags to keep the reader focused... and... Who doesn't love a chocolate lab?
Comment Written 24-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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I had saved my pumps from the summer when I had time to actually review, and I use them throughout the school year. I made a mistake and actually hit an extra zero. I hate that. Thank you for the kind review.
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Aha! I figured there was a reason for it. You must have saved a ton of them from not posting all summer. Good for you!
Comment from Tonulak
Dear Barbra,
This was a fun excursion through Atlanta. Braves beating the Dodgers...is this a fantasy book?:) Nice touch at the end with the romance and the cliffhanger--Ted
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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Dear Barbra,
This was a fun excursion through Atlanta. Braves beating the Dodgers...is this a fantasy book?:) Nice touch at the end with the romance and the cliffhanger--Ted
Comment Written 24-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. LOL, Hey I'm a Cardinal fan from way; when Bob Gibson pitched.
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Now, there was a guy who could throw some heat!
Comment from christopherjl
Thank you for sharing the next instalment of your book. Like your comment says if I don't read it all its a bit confusing. I think you had great dialogue, I hope the book is progressing as well as you'd like it to.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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Thank you for sharing the next instalment of your book. Like your comment says if I don't read it all its a bit confusing. I think you had great dialogue, I hope the book is progressing as well as you'd like it to.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mastery
Wow! This chapter has it all, eh, Barb. Very good writing...Lots of dialogue to keep up with, but you write it so effortlessly that it's great to read. Bravo! Bob
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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Wow! This chapter has it all, eh, Barb. Very good writing...Lots of dialogue to keep up with, but you write it so effortlessly that it's great to read. Bravo! Bob
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Comment from JB Lynn
You've certainly got a good graspe of dialogue in this piece. Though this is the first work of yours I've come across, I definitely believed these four were a close group of friends. Of course, the day seemed a little too perfect, so I imagine there's some trouble coming up in your story. Thanks for the author's notes. They were helpful.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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You've certainly got a good graspe of dialogue in this piece. Though this is the first work of yours I've come across, I definitely believed these four were a close group of friends. Of course, the day seemed a little too perfect, so I imagine there's some trouble coming up in your story. Thanks for the author's notes. They were helpful.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from michaelcahill
This is a nice tour of Atlanta and a perfect exploration of the characters in a different element. Some are out of theirs and most interesting to see them that way. Cash is out of his mind at the end. And, of course, we MUST find out why. Excellent spot to leave us at. The dialogue is wonderful throughout as is the writing as it as been from the first word I read. I am totally into a story that would normally not appeal to me. Don't tell my poker buddies but, I liked "Little Women" too. ha! mikey
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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This is a nice tour of Atlanta and a perfect exploration of the characters in a different element. Some are out of theirs and most interesting to see them that way. Cash is out of his mind at the end. And, of course, we MUST find out why. Excellent spot to leave us at. The dialogue is wonderful throughout as is the writing as it as been from the first word I read. I am totally into a story that would normally not appeal to me. Don't tell my poker buddies but, I liked "Little Women" too. ha! mikey
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I am worried about Cash myself.
