Comment from Norbanus

Excellent

Everyone's in place and the trap is set. Excellent bit of character exposure with the '69 charger, the Mercedes-Benz SUV and Billy Joe's reaction to Paige's Daisy Dukes..

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Oh, a great chapter again, Barbara - it seems so realistic! What about the pup? Did they bring him to the sitter's yet? One small typo -

"We need (a) copies of their drivers..."

I am awaiting the next part eagerly. I do hope they catch whoever has been causing so much trouble!

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013

I changed that sentence at the last second and still messed up. Thank you for the catch.

Comment from AprilShower

Excellent

I was wondering there for a moment why this fellow needed to scan their driver license. It surprised me that someone delivered the car to the house. Usually, a person or persons go to the rental place of business to rent a car. However, I guess if you pay them enough, they'll send two cars out, one to leave and the other to return them to their place of business.

Hope they'll be able to solve the mystery.

April

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013

Money speaks. Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Auroraboreal800

Excellent

I like the idea to set motion detectors and cameras to catch the thieves red handed when they break in.
Going to see plying the Braves sounds very cool.
GREAT chapter Barbara, just as usual...
Hugs!
:)

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013

Thank you for the kind review and hugs right back.

Comment from pickthorn

Excellent

I guess we will know next week if their surveillance trap to catch the thieves works or not. The dialogue seems very real. The story is well written. Great work.

Sorry Barbara. I'm glad you brought my attention to the '3' stars I gave you. Obviously a mistake. :-)

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013

Thank you for the kind review. I'm not sure it's a three star review though.

Comment from Roxanna Andrews

Excellent

Well done as always. Will look forward to seeing who get caught on the surveillance cameras, maybe a ghost. Saw no error, thought it well done and look forward to the next chapter. rox

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Patrick G Cox

Excellent

Hi barbara,

The thot plickens I think. Now I wonder what could possibly go wrong with this wonderful plan. Plenty I guess...

Nicely done, didn't see any spag this time either.

Patrick

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from RazberryBullet

Exceptional

I love the easy way your people speak, especially the southern dialect.

Got a chuckle here:..."You seen Paige?" "She's sitting in the backseat. So?" "We get in a accident, it ain't my fault. I warned ya'." ;P

I'm looking forward to find out what Bart comes across.

Excellent!

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from emjaihammond

Excellent

This still seems to move right along. It seems to ever be edging closer to the person who is in the center of the mystery. I for one, can't wait to find out who has been the trouble maker here.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Curly Girly

Excellent

Paige's shorts and T-shirt must look very sexy.
Billy Joe is worried that Cash might find it too distracting while he drives.
This was well written and I could spot nothing in need of correction.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013

Thank you for the kind review.