Savannah Love
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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Barb,
Yep, those Daisy Dukes will gettcha every time! Cash won't know what hit him. Ha-cha!
What tells me something will happen at the game? Hmmmm...
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*.*)
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
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Hi, Barb,
Yep, those Daisy Dukes will gettcha every time! Cash won't know what hit him. Ha-cha!
What tells me something will happen at the game? Hmmmm...
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*.*)
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from Sankey
Still having a terrific time I think my speed reading ability has improved outta sight with your stuff. Great chapter and no spags.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Still having a terrific time I think my speed reading ability has improved outta sight with your stuff. Great chapter and no spags.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
Please note the sentence was copied from your post so you could see the sentence and find it to correct
When Paige returned from changing, she watched Cash recheckg the cameras.
Cute dialogue; makes them sound authentic.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2013
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Please note the sentence was copied from your post so you could see the sentence and find it to correct
When Paige returned from changing, she watched Cash recheckg the cameras.
Cute dialogue; makes them sound authentic.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I wonder how that g got there. LOL
Comment from chasennov
Savannah Love. 'Chapter fourteen: Part Two.' You have written another great chapter here. As usual your work is flawless and accurate. Well done.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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Savannah Love. 'Chapter fourteen: Part Two.' You have written another great chapter here. As usual your work is flawless and accurate. Well done.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
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You are very welcome, Barbara.
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You are very welcome, Barbara.
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You are very welcome, Barbara.
Comment from Anthony Crosbie
Hi Barbara. I like the style of your writing. You paint pictures with the characters movements and it brings the story to life. The dialogue is sharp and clever. Anthony
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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Hi Barbara. I like the style of your writing. You paint pictures with the characters movements and it brings the story to life. The dialogue is sharp and clever. Anthony
Comment Written 17-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lancellot
Well written and yes, I understand why you have to break them up. I only saw one little thing.
Notes:
We need [a] copies of their drivers' licenses.
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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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Well written and yes, I understand why you have to break them up. I only saw one little thing.
Notes:
We need [a] copies of their drivers' licenses.
- delete
Comment Written 17-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from michaelcahill
This is some great dialogue here. You use the dialogue expertly to reveal more and more about the characters. That is a perfect way to use dialogue. It sticks in our heads as we breeze through the smart interplay between the characters being entertained while details wend there way in to stay. I am really enjoying this story now that I have read more of it. Excellent work. mike
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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This is some great dialogue here. You use the dialogue expertly to reveal more and more about the characters. That is a perfect way to use dialogue. It sticks in our heads as we breeze through the smart interplay between the characters being entertained while details wend there way in to stay. I am really enjoying this story now that I have read more of it. Excellent work. mike
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Tonulak
Dear Barbra,
Good natural going to the ballgame dialog and atmosphere. Nice detail with the plan. I did see one spag; "we need a copies of their driver's liscense", drop the "a". Great job--Ted
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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Dear Barbra,
Good natural going to the ballgame dialog and atmosphere. Nice detail with the plan. I did see one spag; "we need a copies of their driver's liscense", drop the "a". Great job--Ted
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Nanashirley
Great reading as always. I find it hard to give enough detail on such a small chapter. Other than the usual three thumbs up.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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Great reading as always. I find it hard to give enough detail on such a small chapter. Other than the usual three thumbs up.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from ladykah81
I really enjoy your dialogue; I chuckled at the banter between Cash and Paige. I definitely need to read back chapters so I can better understand what is going on. I look forward to reading more of your novel. Good work.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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I really enjoy your dialogue; I chuckled at the banter between Cash and Paige. I definitely need to read back chapters so I can better understand what is going on. I look forward to reading more of your novel. Good work.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Thank you for the kind review.
