Savannah Love
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Comment from PageWizard
I didn't know that this could not stand on it's own until the "Author note," section. I had already read the chapter and it was a little busy for me. Now I know why. I will have to go back and read the others before I comment. Sorry.
However, interesting enough for me to want to read the beginning.
DeAnna
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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I didn't know that this could not stand on it's own until the "Author note," section. I had already read the chapter and it was a little busy for me. Now I know why. I will have to go back and read the others before I comment. Sorry.
However, interesting enough for me to want to read the beginning.
DeAnna
Comment Written 06-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the review.
Comment from emjaihammond
This is a good turn of events. You backtracked just enough to help us remember and put together the clues we needed to have in mind. Clever to do it that way. I look forward to more.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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This is a good turn of events. You backtracked just enough to help us remember and put together the clues we needed to have in mind. Clever to do it that way. I look forward to more.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate you stopping by.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oooh, Barbara, things ARE heating up! What a great plan you've had this group come up with - I can't WAIT for the next part now. I love how you've ended this too - sounds so typically Paige!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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Oooh, Barbara, things ARE heating up! What a great plan you've had this group come up with - I can't WAIT for the next part now. I love how you've ended this too - sounds so typically Paige!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate you stopping by.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, barbara, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where the awesome foursome hatch a plan to catch the thieves. i enjoyed reading it..
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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this is very well written, barbara, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where the awesome foursome hatch a plan to catch the thieves. i enjoyed reading it..
Comment Written 06-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and stopping by.
Comment from Gregt46
I'm amazed at the details brought up about so many characters. It the makes the story seem believable and raises questions that made me able to keep reading without being bored. Good job in my opinion. WGT
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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I'm amazed at the details brought up about so many characters. It the makes the story seem believable and raises questions that made me able to keep reading without being bored. Good job in my opinion. WGT
Comment Written 06-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
This is going great. I love the plan Billy Joe came up with of going to a baseball game. That will give the suspects, whom they've pinpointed as Daniel Walker and James Tyler, a chance to make a try to break into Paige's home while they're in Atlanta and look for money and jewelry. They'll spread the word around town that they'll all be in Atlanta, and set up cameras to alert the police if there is a break in. Sounds like a plan. Definitely 6 stars! judi
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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This is going great. I love the plan Billy Joe came up with of going to a baseball game. That will give the suspects, whom they've pinpointed as Daniel Walker and James Tyler, a chance to make a try to break into Paige's home while they're in Atlanta and look for money and jewelry. They'll spread the word around town that they'll all be in Atlanta, and set up cameras to alert the police if there is a break in. Sounds like a plan. Definitely 6 stars! judi
Comment Written 06-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and stopping by.
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You're so welcome. I like the trap the gang has set for those who've been disrupting Paige's life. judi
Comment from elgone
Setting a trap for the culprits to fall into, baiting it with knowledge the house will be empty and having evidence from video cameras. Sounds liek it should work well.
E
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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Setting a trap for the culprits to fall into, baiting it with knowledge the house will be empty and having evidence from video cameras. Sounds liek it should work well.
E
Comment Written 06-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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Who knows if it will work or not, but I have a feeling the foursome will have fun in Atlanta. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Norbanus
You keep all the characters moving around and doing their thing but you still have lots of mystery. You leave us thinking our own ideas of what the trap will catch. Well planned segment coming up. Even Morgan is removed from the scene, But I wouldn't be surprised if he finds something anyway.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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You keep all the characters moving around and doing their thing but you still have lots of mystery. You leave us thinking our own ideas of what the trap will catch. Well planned segment coming up. Even Morgan is removed from the scene, But I wouldn't be surprised if he finds something anyway.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
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Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
Another gem in a fine necklace of prose, written tight, with a definite lean towards drawing the reader into the plot. Leaving the house empty with cameras etc. might be a bit unrealistic but so far in this story anything goes. No SPAG or POV infractions of note.
Regards:
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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Another gem in a fine necklace of prose, written tight, with a definite lean towards drawing the reader into the plot. Leaving the house empty with cameras etc. might be a bit unrealistic but so far in this story anything goes. No SPAG or POV infractions of note.
Regards:
Comment Written 06-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
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Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
Comment from Taffspride
Although I have not been reviewing much lately Barbara, I have been reading each new chapter you have posted. This one, like all of the previous ones, certainly does not disappoint.
Your good use of dialog moves the story along so very well, keeping the readers interest.
I am glad to see you are writing again, and hope you are OK.
Iechyd da
Ann
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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Although I have not been reviewing much lately Barbara, I have been reading each new chapter you have posted. This one, like all of the previous ones, certainly does not disappoint.
Your good use of dialog moves the story along so very well, keeping the readers interest.
I am glad to see you are writing again, and hope you are OK.
Iechyd da
Ann
Comment Written 06-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
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Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
