Comment from NaughtieScribe

Excellent

Hmmm. You're being really cagey on this one. Either it's a setup to a gotcha moment, or a how-the-heck did that happen. This could go either way, it definitely got the makings for some serious action. In any case I know it will be a hoot of a read.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2013

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Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Exceptional

I don't know how I missed this one. I thought I had looked for your name on the writing stories page. Somehow I missed this gem of a piece. So real like and extremely descriptive. Thank you

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2013

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Thank you for the kind review. Thank you for the kind review.w. I always enjoy hearing from you.

Comment from Roxanna Andrews

Excellent

Good as ever. Glad to see you back. Hope you are feeling some better after the loss of your pet. So sorry. This is well done and a great plan for catching the intruders. =} Rox

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2013

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Comment from Writingfundimension

Excellent

A very clever plan and solution to how to catch the bad guys in the act. Great plotting in this chapter, barbara. I look forward to seeing how this all goes.

Warmest regards, Bev

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013

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reply by Writingfundimension on 12-Oct-2013

You're welcome! :0)

Comment from cheyennewy

Exceptional

Hi Barbara,

I think the plan to go to the game is a good one. With cameras throughout the house they should be able to identify the crook. It does seem that the gems are an important part of this mystery. I keep waiting for a romance between Cash and Paige to heat up! I think they have feelings for each other but seem reluctant to admit it. Another wonderful chapter.....blessings, chey

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2013

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Comment from Tonulak

Excellent

Dear Barbra,
I enjoyed this chapter setting the trap in motion. Very clean writing, but I saw one spag; "Page's eyesbrows...", should be "eyebrows". Great job with this chapter--
Ted

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2013

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Thank you for the kind review. Thank you for the catch.

Comment from bhogg

Exceptional

Hi Barbara, a great post. You amaze me with your ability to make your stories flow so smoothly. My only disappointment was the brevity. I was really getting into it! Bill

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2013

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reply by bhogg on 13-Oct-2013

I always enjoy visiting!

Comment from allborn66

Excellent

This is a lovely chapter. They seem to have a great plan going here. I love how you are playing on the "small town" mentality of every one knows.
Barbara

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2013

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Comment from jadapenn

Excellent

Hi Barbie, a nice chapter. You have some good concepts in all your stories. Each one is different, but I still miss Matt. lol. I'm glad you feel a bit better now. Take care. luv jada

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2013

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Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

It's good to see you writing again, Barbara.
A chapter well told - there's still tension,
but things seem to be tying up perfectly.
Hopefully, Paige and Cash will admit their
true feelings for each other.

Paige's eyesbrows
........eyebrows

Margaret

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2013

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