Savannah Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 64 "CHAPTER 14: PART ONE"Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?
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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Well, if they have their way about it, things will begin to heat up.
Hate to see Faye go. I thought she'd play matchmaker of the highest order.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*.*)
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014
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Well, if they have their way about it, things will begin to heat up.
Hate to see Faye go. I thought she'd play matchmaker of the highest order.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*.*)
Comment Written 14-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014
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True, but I needed to get some people out of the way. Thank you.
Comment from Sankey
No worriers I have read them all anmd trailing right along with ya and enjoying every minute of it. I think I has myself on about being nearly caught up too is seems. No Spags
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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No worriers I have read them all anmd trailing right along with ya and enjoying every minute of it. I think I has myself on about being nearly caught up too is seems. No Spags
Comment Written 12-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I really appreciate you dropping by.
Comment from Teagan Rose Horton
well done again.
so talented, wow. so inspiring and courageous.
you have a lot of potential! keep up the fantastic writing!
have fun, take care.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2013
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well done again.
so talented, wow. so inspiring and courageous.
you have a lot of potential! keep up the fantastic writing!
have fun, take care.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I appreciate both.
Comment from Jade Lawson
This was a nice chapter. Sorry about my delay with reviews. So Faye decide to leave, and the investigation continues. The suspense continues well and enhances the plot in each chapter, and it seems like they have a good plan. I like the way you write, not boring descriptions, a nice dialogue.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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This was a nice chapter. Sorry about my delay with reviews. So Faye decide to leave, and the investigation continues. The suspense continues well and enhances the plot in each chapter, and it seems like they have a good plan. I like the way you write, not boring descriptions, a nice dialogue.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I am way behind in my reviewing. I doubt I will ever catch up.
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You can only do your best. I just cannot go on at this pace either. I'm going to stop following so many works, even if that means losing readers. Who reads my work reads it, who doesn't, doesn't. I'm human! Of course, I'll continue to follow your work.
Comment from onkughosh19
It is a briliant idea they are hatchinng...to catch the thieves red- handed by prtending there is no one in the house.What I understand from the little bit we were given to read is that Daniel and James Tyler are behind the robbery in the house and the inmates are planning to catch them in the act.
A good story that holds the interest of the reader right fro the bginning to the end.An apt picture is accompanying this piece
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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It is a briliant idea they are hatchinng...to catch the thieves red- handed by prtending there is no one in the house.What I understand from the little bit we were given to read is that Daniel and James Tyler are behind the robbery in the house and the inmates are planning to catch them in the act.
A good story that holds the interest of the reader right fro the bginning to the end.An apt picture is accompanying this piece
Comment Written 10-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Mteske
The dialogue is great and you have outstanding word choice- snatch, refuse, scrunched etc. I also enjoy how you the change the form of speaking based on the character (the braves fan- supposta' and self-respectin').
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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The dialogue is great and you have outstanding word choice- snatch, refuse, scrunched etc. I also enjoy how you the change the form of speaking based on the character (the braves fan- supposta' and self-respectin').
Comment Written 10-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Mishelly
I feel like it's not long now until the truth is revealed. I love how each post brings a piece of the puzzle. Cash and the others have come up with a good plan, and I'm sure it won't be too long before we discover who the culprit is behind everything. :-)
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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I feel like it's not long now until the truth is revealed. I love how each post brings a piece of the puzzle. Cash and the others have come up with a good plan, and I'm sure it won't be too long before we discover who the culprit is behind everything. :-)
Comment Written 09-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate your time.
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Barb. I love your authentic characterizations in this one especially well.
Suggestions:
"After Paige watched Faye put her phone inside her purse, she asked, "You're leaving?" (perhaps "said" works better here. Read it and see what you think, Barb)
"It seems she's made up her mind." Paige touched Faye's arm." (I would switch these two pieces around.) "Paige touched Faye's arm etc..."
Outstanding job here, Barb. Bob
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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Hi, Barb. I love your authentic characterizations in this one especially well.
Suggestions:
"After Paige watched Faye put her phone inside her purse, she asked, "You're leaving?" (perhaps "said" works better here. Read it and see what you think, Barb)
"It seems she's made up her mind." Paige touched Faye's arm." (I would switch these two pieces around.) "Paige touched Faye's arm etc..."
Outstanding job here, Barb. Bob
Comment Written 08-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and the suggestions. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Comment from fafa
Realy you ´ve done a good chapter, now i need too read the others chapters for understand your novel.
thanks for a great read. I realy enjoyed this piece of novel.
Very best wish. bye
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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Realy you ´ve done a good chapter, now i need too read the others chapters for understand your novel.
thanks for a great read. I realy enjoyed this piece of novel.
Very best wish. bye
Comment Written 08-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Curly Girly
This is another well written chapter to your novel, Barbara. I spotted no spag; your work is always well edited.
Please accept my continued condolences regarding Big Boy.
It's good to see you back on-line and keeping busy with your story.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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This is another well written chapter to your novel, Barbara. I spotted no spag; your work is always well edited.
Please accept my continued condolences regarding Big Boy.
It's good to see you back on-line and keeping busy with your story.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I still miss Big Boy more than I can tell you. He always laid beside me when I was on the computer.
