Savannah Love
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Comment from Dawn Munro
Oops, the question to which Paige replies, "Three, French, Spanish and Italian..." should be, "Besides (English), how many languages do you speak?" Otherwise, you have to change the answer to , "...English, Spanish and Italian." right?
What a fabulous chapter! I loved it, Barbara!
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2013
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Oops, the question to which Paige replies, "Three, French, Spanish and Italian..." should be, "Besides (English), how many languages do you speak?" Otherwise, you have to change the answer to , "...English, Spanish and Italian." right?
What a fabulous chapter! I loved it, Barbara!
Comment Written 22-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you. I think in dialogue it worked.
Comment from mumsyone
Another good chapter, Barbara.
(")I resigned my position at SCAD because I refused to work with him after he made prejudicial comments to my friend.
Hey, little lady, how much of that there education do ya have.(?)
He's a kind(,) considerate(,) southern gentleman, who is very loyal to his friends."
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2013
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Another good chapter, Barbara.
(")I resigned my position at SCAD because I refused to work with him after he made prejudicial comments to my friend.
Hey, little lady, how much of that there education do ya have.(?)
He's a kind(,) considerate(,) southern gentleman, who is very loyal to his friends."
Comment Written 22-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2013
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Thank you for your eagle eyes. I have fixed those. Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
Wow, things were getting heated up there for a few minutes. Paige is one very educated young lady but doesn't flaunt it and seems to just want a normal life, not snooty. Good chapter. God loves you and we do too.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2013
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Wow, things were getting heated up there for a few minutes. Paige is one very educated young lady but doesn't flaunt it and seems to just want a normal life, not snooty. Good chapter. God loves you and we do too.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
Comment from elgone
Take a look at the part I mentioned below. And thanks for the chuckle.
and you know we are beneath such behavior. - LOL You said it like it is not as he would have said it. bs - and you know such behavior is beneath my family.
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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2013
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Take a look at the part I mentioned below. And thanks for the chuckle.
and you know we are beneath such behavior. - LOL You said it like it is not as he would have said it. bs - and you know such behavior is beneath my family.
E
Comment Written 22-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2013
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LOL it's fixed. Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
Comment from Norbanus
That handy crutch is just too much
to swipe at him all on its own.
Lucky for Walker he's a good talker
and Cash didn't break any bones.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2013
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That handy crutch is just too much
to swipe at him all on its own.
Lucky for Walker he's a good talker
and Cash didn't break any bones.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Barbara,
Oh dear, oh dear, Mr Walker certainly got what he needed, but probably not what he hoped. Now you need to let your readers into some of the rest of the secrets about this house - like is Cash really a 'rightful heir"? Are there more tunnels, passages and secret rooms hidden in the place?
It seems to me that Faye holds a lot of the keys to these and a few more little mysteries here.
Patrick
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2013
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Hi Barbara,
Oh dear, oh dear, Mr Walker certainly got what he needed, but probably not what he hoped. Now you need to let your readers into some of the rest of the secrets about this house - like is Cash really a 'rightful heir"? Are there more tunnels, passages and secret rooms hidden in the place?
It seems to me that Faye holds a lot of the keys to these and a few more little mysteries here.
Patrick
Comment Written 22-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2013
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I'm pretty sure the answers are forthcoming. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gungalo
The police to the rescue. Faye called them and they showed up just in time. Cash slugged him a few good ones before they got there. This is really turning into a mess isn't it? LOL. You picture of the ghost is awesome.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2013
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The police to the rescue. Faye called them and they showed up just in time. Cash slugged him a few good ones before they got there. This is really turning into a mess isn't it? LOL. You picture of the ghost is awesome.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
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Sure thing girlie.
Comment from jadapenn
Caught you early today, I did, miss Barbie. Very active chapter and I liked all the conflict going on. Quite a spooky story with all these apparitions. I like your characters. Hope ole Walker keeps to himself now. Well written. luv jada
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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2013
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Caught you early today, I did, miss Barbie. Very active chapter and I liked all the conflict going on. Quite a spooky story with all these apparitions. I like your characters. Hope ole Walker keeps to himself now. Well written. luv jada
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Comment Written 22-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
Comment from c_lucas
Cash wasn't half trying. Walker should have be down and out after the first blow. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, Making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2013
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Cash wasn't half trying. Walker should have be down and out after the first blow. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, Making for a very good read.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2013
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Cash didn't want to show off in from of Paige. LOL Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
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If his mother was against fighting, maybe Cash was afraid of getting a spanking. Faye could still swing a mean switch. You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
