Savannah Love
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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Okay, this is good. These two are starting to touch. It's only a matter of time before they might canoodle! LOL.
Moving right along.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*.*)
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014
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Okay, this is good. These two are starting to touch. It's only a matter of time before they might canoodle! LOL.
Moving right along.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*.*)
Comment Written 14-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014
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Thank you for being so devoted.
Comment from Sankey
Gee whizz old Cash is still not a believer what! Still a bit thick! I like how the ghost is sticking up for them all.
You have done good again. Wonder if Detective Davis knows about his wayward son? No Spags.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Gee whizz old Cash is still not a believer what! Still a bit thick! I like how the ghost is sticking up for them all.
You have done good again. Wonder if Detective Davis knows about his wayward son? No Spags.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. Cash is going to have to be kicked by the ghost before he believes.
Comment from Sasha
Things are really beginning to heat up. I am glad Cash was there to defend Paige. Dr. Walker is such an obnoxious man and I am so pleased the police didn't believe his story. Paige is clearly embarrassed about her level of education, possibly she fears it will scare Cash away. Great chapter, sorry it took me so long to get to it. I am almost back to normal--about 85 percent--and hope to catch up on my reviewing this week.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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Things are really beginning to heat up. I am glad Cash was there to defend Paige. Dr. Walker is such an obnoxious man and I am so pleased the police didn't believe his story. Paige is clearly embarrassed about her level of education, possibly she fears it will scare Cash away. Great chapter, sorry it took me so long to get to it. I am almost back to normal--about 85 percent--and hope to catch up on my reviewing this week.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from gramalot8
Barbara, as always, a great chapter. You continue to draw your readers into this period. Love the interaction between all your characters. Thanks for always sharing your talent with us. Jerri
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Barbara, as always, a great chapter. You continue to draw your readers into this period. Love the interaction between all your characters. Thanks for always sharing your talent with us. Jerri
Comment Written 26-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I appreciate both.
Comment from destiny223
A very interesting story. As I'm new here, I'll have to look for the other chapters. Loved your rapid fire dialogue. It was easy to keep up with and kept the story flowing.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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A very interesting story. As I'm new here, I'll have to look for the other chapters. Loved your rapid fire dialogue. It was easy to keep up with and kept the story flowing.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Righteous Riter
The writer brings this chapter in with high intensity and action. Wow, Dwayne is trying to get to poor Paige. Then cash saves the day. I like the action. The transition of the events is good. The pace is an intense as this pace concludes with Cash and Paige hand in hand.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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The writer brings this chapter in with high intensity and action. Wow, Dwayne is trying to get to poor Paige. Then cash saves the day. I like the action. The transition of the events is good. The pace is an intense as this pace concludes with Cash and Paige hand in hand.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I appreciate both.
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Barb. Very fast-0moving chapter. Superb dialogue. I like the way you utilize strong verbs in your writing here:
" hit Dwayne across the upper body. Morgan barked and snarled."
Suggestions: "lifted him upright, and repeatedly slugged him" I think this would be twice as effective if you not only used the verb "slugged" but where...like "slugged him in the face (or pounded him in the face)
Good writing once again, Barb. Bob
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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Hi, Barb. Very fast-0moving chapter. Superb dialogue. I like the way you utilize strong verbs in your writing here:
" hit Dwayne across the upper body. Morgan barked and snarled."
Suggestions: "lifted him upright, and repeatedly slugged him" I think this would be twice as effective if you not only used the verb "slugged" but where...like "slugged him in the face (or pounded him in the face)
Good writing once again, Barb. Bob
Comment Written 25-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013
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I am so sorry it has taken so long for this reply. I needed time to fix the problems. I always apreciate your help.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Barbara, this has some great moments of stress with your characters and some great filling in information on Paige. Really well penned and smooth read.
I enjoyed it.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Dear Barbara, this has some great moments of stress with your characters and some great filling in information on Paige. Really well penned and smooth read.
I enjoyed it.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 25-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I appreciate both.
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
Liked this and the previous post. It's fun to see a prejudice bigot get his just due. And befittin' as Billy Joe might say
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Liked this and the previous post. It's fun to see a prejudice bigot get his just due. And befittin' as Billy Joe might say
Comment Written 25-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I appreciate both.
Comment from Curtis Hatch
Barbara,
The chapter has good action and suspense. It was amusing to see Paige trying to sidestep her Ivy League degrees and studies abroad. I was amused by the way, Cash handled the situation with Walker, before his mother called the police. I look forward to the next chapter.
Curtis
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Barbara,
The chapter has good action and suspense. It was amusing to see Paige trying to sidestep her Ivy League degrees and studies abroad. I was amused by the way, Cash handled the situation with Walker, before his mother called the police. I look forward to the next chapter.
Curtis
Comment Written 25-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I appreciate both.
