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Comment from angelface2
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Hello, Carolyn, I just had to see what your writing was like. (You just reviewed a poem of mine.) I like your humorous little story. OH, I got my laugh for the day. As you may guess I am a grandparent and a great grandparent. Gotta love the little ones, huh?

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2013

reply by the author on 03-Oct-2013
    Hi there, yes, my writing is diverse. Faith is one of those side paths to poetry that I take now and then. She is a hoot, aren't grandchildren wonderful, you are lucky, I don't have a great-grand yet. Stop by anytime,I am delighted you liked 'Papa's squeaky chair'. :-) Carolyn
Comment from pattipac
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LOL, I am a grandparent of three small granddaughters and can envision this very scene, thanks to your vivid writing. We now enjoy telling tales on our grown sons when we're together. Get ready Faith, your days of adult embarrassment are coming.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2013

reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
    Yep, she is so very funny. She told me before school started, if you think I'm smart now GeGe, (that's me) just wait 'til I start to Kindergarten. She hasn't disappointed us. So happy to hear your story too. Thanks so much for the great review and rating, Carolyn
Comment from Bundhoo
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Wow ....
I really love your poem and also the topic and the title is AWESOME , your poem is very interesting which grips the reader all along!
Regards,
Marwa!;)

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2013

reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
    Thanks Marwa for enjoying this little story about Faith and her grandpa. She is a cutie. Have a great day. Carolyn
reply by Bundhoo on 20-Sep-2013
    Don't mention it......;)
reply by Bundhoo on 20-Sep-2013
    My grandmother and father both are not in this world they died before my birth.........:(
Comment from The Death
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I am really enjoying these stories about little Faith.Children have the charm that no one can escape and their playfulness makes us smile and feel great.It was a very interesting story.You did an amazing work

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2013

reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
    Thank you, your encouragement is so rewarding. I'm delighted you are enjoying Faith. She is a little character. :-) Carolyn
Comment from david bell
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This reminds me of my great granddaughter. She is a joy to be with. At four, she always wanted to writing her book on my computer.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2013

reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
    Oh yes, we have a few of those that Faith dictated and I have them printed out in booklet form. She has quite an imagination. Good to hear from you David. Carolyn
Comment from N.K. Wagner
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Very funny. I especially like the name Faith for the minister's granddaughter. At first I wasn't sure if you were talking about a girlfriend, a puppy or a child, though. Sorry - I'm always looking for the misdirection - the twist. Adorable story. :) Nancy

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2013

reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
    Thanks Nancy,Sorry this little story confused you. But, yes, Faith is our 5 yr old granddaughter. She is a hoot!. :-) Carolyn
Comment from GE Parson
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Yep, that's hilarious! Children come up with the most innocent but amusing sayings, not even trying to b funny.

If I may ask, is "Papa" your husband? And i so what denomination are you?

I myself was raised in the Independent Baptist denomination, not that that makes any difference in God's eyes.

Y'all have a blessed week,
Your Friend.........Jerry

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2013

reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
    Hi Jerry, Yes, Faith is our granddaughter. She is a hoot. PaPa (Larry, my husband) preaches for the Church of Christ. We have both been Christians since our youth. This is a true story. :-) Carolyn
Comment from jmdg1954
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You're right... Not a chance! Keep them coming Carolyn. You're two for two in my books with your Faith posts....
Nicely done. John

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2013

reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
    Hi there, I have missed you. Thanks for your comments John. I'm glad you enjoyed Faith. Have a great day. Carolyn
Comment from Tomes Johnston
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This is a beautiful poem about the love between father and daughter. I loved this story and it brought a smile to my face. I love this little girl and hope to be reading a lot more about her in future.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2013

reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
    Yes, Faith is easy to love, she is a cutie. So glad you enjoyed this Tomes. There will be more. :-) Carolyn
reply by Tomes Johnston on 18-Sep-2013
    Take care.

    Tom.
Comment from emjaihammond
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Naw, you couldn't be more right. As a grandparent, I can't ever get enough of them. I loved it. I can just hear her saying that, I could never keep from laughing. Just too funny. I'm so happy you shared this with us.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2013

reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
    I am so happy this made you laugh. I get a kick out of it every time I think of it myself. Grandchildren (all children) are a joy. :-) Carolyn