Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

I like the spunky way that Paige handles Dwayne. He is rude and prejudiced. He isn't taking her comments so well

Everybody does?" (Should there be a question mark here?)

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013

I have fixed the question mark issue. Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from adewpearl

Exceptional

Everybody does? - I wouldn't make that a question.
He pushed his way passed her. - past
I am laughing my head off at Paige's threat to buy his land and give it to Nala as a present. I can just imagine the look on his face! LOL
What a great scene :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013

Paige can be a little feisty herself. Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from c_lucas

Exceptional

Finally, Cash will get a chance to massage his fists on Walkers face! This is very well written with smooth flow of words, Good job.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013

Maybe Cash is too much of a gentleman to do that.
We wil have to wait and see. Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

LOL the poor old doctor he got exactly what he had been asking for didn't he Barb. To insult them got him an insult in return. LOL

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 Comment Written 15-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013

He isn't a nice man. Thank you for the kind review.

reply by Gungalo on 15-Sep-2013

I guess he is not for sure.