Savannah Love
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Comment from Auroraboreal800
Very well written chapter, Barbara. I like how believable the characters are and how I can imagine these situations really playing out. You're keeping the interest of the readers.
Nicely done job!
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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2013
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Very well written chapter, Barbara. I like how believable the characters are and how I can imagine these situations really playing out. You're keeping the interest of the readers.
Nicely done job!
:)
Comment Written 09-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Curtis Hatch
Barbara,
This is another riveting chapter as they dig through the census records in an effort to find the trail of the broach after it was passed to Ann Wilkins. It is compelling to observe the group as they follow the genealogy of the family.
The mystery remains. How did Paige end up with the broach while she is still single? I look forward to the next posting.
Curtis
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2013
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Barbara,
This is another riveting chapter as they dig through the census records in an effort to find the trail of the broach after it was passed to Ann Wilkins. It is compelling to observe the group as they follow the genealogy of the family.
The mystery remains. How did Paige end up with the broach while she is still single? I look forward to the next posting.
Curtis
Comment Written 09-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. She found the brooch.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Well done as always. Can't wait to find out what is happening, but then the book will be over and I'll hate that. =} I'm wondering if the computer in this chapter is a laptop? If so it might be best to call it that. Just my thoughts. Well done. Rox
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2013
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Well done as always. Can't wait to find out what is happening, but then the book will be over and I'll hate that. =} I'm wondering if the computer in this chapter is a laptop? If so it might be best to call it that. Just my thoughts. Well done. Rox
Comment Written 09-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. Yes, it is a laptop and you are correct.
Comment from Curly Girly
This is a another well-written addition to your book. Now they are trying to trace the family-tree through the old census records.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2013
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This is a another well-written addition to your book. Now they are trying to trace the family-tree through the old census records.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2013
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Comment from justmarly
I'm so anxious to find out what is going to happen. I have always loved your story. Cash's mom is like me I hate to impose on anyone. Your stories flow so nicely and I feel like I'm there. But what will it cost Paige to keep the house. She almost left before. The love Cash has for her wouldn't have it. Nicely done. Thanks for sharing. JM
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I'm so anxious to find out what is going to happen. I have always loved your story. Cash's mom is like me I hate to impose on anyone. Your stories flow so nicely and I feel like I'm there. But what will it cost Paige to keep the house. She almost left before. The love Cash has for her wouldn't have it. Nicely done. Thanks for sharing. JM
Comment Written 08-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2013
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You are very welcome. JM
Comment from Sasha
I love genealogy and work on my family history all the time. It is not as easy as I thought to find out the specifics of someone if you don't have all the right information. They are understandably curious, I would be too. I do hope they figure out who the brooch was given to or if it stopped being passed on to the next in line.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2013
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I love genealogy and work on my family history all the time. It is not as easy as I thought to find out the specifics of someone if you don't have all the right information. They are understandably curious, I would be too. I do hope they figure out who the brooch was given to or if it stopped being passed on to the next in line.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2013
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Comment from writerwish
Hi there. IT SOUNDS like they are making progress in this investigation. It will help me if perhaps I had a list of characters. I put mine in my author,s notes. Keep writing. It is suspenceful.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2013
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Hi there. IT SOUNDS like they are making progress in this investigation. It will help me if perhaps I had a list of characters. I put mine in my author,s notes. Keep writing. It is suspenceful.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2013
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Comment from NaughtieScribe
I feel cheated. This chapter needs to be longer. I was all caught up in the census listing (I actually worked for the Census Bureau years ago), and felt like something big was gonna pop, the it stops. You are such a tease. Uh.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2013
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I feel cheated. This chapter needs to be longer. I was all caught up in the census listing (I actually worked for the Census Bureau years ago), and felt like something big was gonna pop, the it stops. You are such a tease. Uh.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2013
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Comment from judiverse
I thought you did a great job of handling the details about the diary and using the census to get information about the Bookman and Wilkins families. It is so interesting to be on the trail of genealogical information like that. Effective use of dialogue in this, too. Cash's mother comes of as a charming woman, and she provides some help. It does seem that Cash is wise to have his mother stay with Paige after her tires were slashed. Safety in numbers. judi
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2013
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I thought you did a great job of handling the details about the diary and using the census to get information about the Bookman and Wilkins families. It is so interesting to be on the trail of genealogical information like that. Effective use of dialogue in this, too. Cash's mother comes of as a charming woman, and she provides some help. It does seem that Cash is wise to have his mother stay with Paige after her tires were slashed. Safety in numbers. judi
Comment Written 08-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
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You're so welcome. You're keeping me puzzled about what's going on. There may be a ghost about, but there's also some living being (or more than one) out to drive Paige from her home. judi
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very wel lwritten, barbara, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where faye has some ideas on how to find the ancenstors by looking at the census, and they discover that ann was deceased in the 1900 census.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2013
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this is very wel lwritten, barbara, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where faye has some ideas on how to find the ancenstors by looking at the census, and they discover that ann was deceased in the 1900 census.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2013
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