Savannah Love
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55 total reviews
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Barb,
Good facts/info in this one.
Love the feisty Faye, she'll spice up things. Now Cash will have his hands full with Paige and Mom.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014
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Hi, Barb,
Good facts/info in this one.
Love the feisty Faye, she'll spice up things. Now Cash will have his hands full with Paige and Mom.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax
Comment Written 03-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014
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Thank you.
Comment from Sankey
Good work yet again still having fun going through all this getting closer to the end I think only a few chapters to go to get caught up.
No Spags
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Good work yet again still having fun going through all this getting closer to the end I think only a few chapters to go to get caught up.
No Spags
Comment Written 12-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Antonin70
It's good to catch up with your magnum opus, Barbara, after being on vacation for a few weeks. The plots still grab me and are a good mixture of love and mystery - who dunnit even? - and I can see it being very successful in finished form. My only quibble is that you aren't writing fast enough, but if that's to keep up the standard then take all the time you need. Cheers and keep the story coming. Anton
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
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It's good to catch up with your magnum opus, Barbara, after being on vacation for a few weeks. The plots still grab me and are a good mixture of love and mystery - who dunnit even? - and I can see it being very successful in finished form. My only quibble is that you aren't writing fast enough, but if that's to keep up the standard then take all the time you need. Cheers and keep the story coming. Anton
Comment Written 12-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and words. Unfortunately my paying job must take most of my time.
Comment from swandrh
I really liked this first few lines but beginning of this is really good but overall it lacks a good plot and end but with work I think this could be a very good story.
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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
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I really liked this first few lines but beginning of this is really good but overall it lacks a good plot and end but with work I think this could be a very good story.
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Comment Written 12-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
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I stated in the author's notes that if you have not read from the beginning of the novel you will NOT know what's going on.
Welcome to FS.
Comment from michaelcahill
oh yes. I am right back on board with this story. I remember this clearly. I am enjoying this search through the census and ancestry records. I am a huge Ancestry.com follower or at least I was till I found this place. are you familiar with the sight? if not stop by just to see how they go about finding relatives from the past. I do think that these posts stand alone. we have your style and word choice and interaction of character. and each post I have read has left me wanting more. now to find the time. really well written and engaging. mike
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
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oh yes. I am right back on board with this story. I remember this clearly. I am enjoying this search through the census and ancestry records. I am a huge Ancestry.com follower or at least I was till I found this place. are you familiar with the sight? if not stop by just to see how they go about finding relatives from the past. I do think that these posts stand alone. we have your style and word choice and interaction of character. and each post I have read has left me wanting more. now to find the time. really well written and engaging. mike
Comment Written 11-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Adri7enne
You must enjoy the study of genealogy - looking back through old census papers. So you incorporate your interest into your story line. Good idea. I'm assuming your characters are trying to find the identity of the ghost? Well done, Barb. I almost called you "Paige". LOL!
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
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You must enjoy the study of genealogy - looking back through old census papers. So you incorporate your interest into your story line. Good idea. I'm assuming your characters are trying to find the identity of the ghost? Well done, Barb. I almost called you "Paige". LOL!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from pickthorn
I have tuned in late to this very interesting story. There seems to be quite a few characters here but you tie them into the story very professionally. Great writing
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013
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I have tuned in late to this very interesting story. There seems to be quite a few characters here but you tie them into the story very professionally. Great writing
Comment Written 11-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from irishauthorme
Went back and finished your previous chapters to catch up. I liked the way that you wrote about Paige shying away from Cash, with the underlying reason being her own feelings for him, very good writing. Also good the way you used the abduction of Paige and Mary Pat to force a reconciliation between Paige and Cash. Good, fast moving action, and your excellent dialogue propelled the story forward.
irish
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013
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Went back and finished your previous chapters to catch up. I liked the way that you wrote about Paige shying away from Cash, with the underlying reason being her own feelings for him, very good writing. Also good the way you used the abduction of Paige and Mary Pat to force a reconciliation between Paige and Cash. Good, fast moving action, and your excellent dialogue propelled the story forward.
irish
Comment Written 11-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate hearing from you.
Comment from Jade Lawson
Uh this sounds quite intriguing. They know that Alice gave to Ann Wilkins the jewel, but they have no record of it. They can't even find any record of Ann's father's name, but it seems that the census were helpful for their research. I wonder if Cash's Uncle isn't Ann's relative, hence, Cash as well.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013
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Uh this sounds quite intriguing. They know that Alice gave to Ann Wilkins the jewel, but they have no record of it. They can't even find any record of Ann's father's name, but it seems that the census were helpful for their research. I wonder if Cash's Uncle isn't Ann's relative, hence, Cash as well.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Well written. What did we do without computers to google everything? I am looking forward to reading what comes next. This is a very interesting novel~Debbie
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013
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Well written. What did we do without computers to google everything? I am looking forward to reading what comes next. This is a very interesting novel~Debbie
Comment Written 11-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
