Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER

Excellent

Light lingers less long,
autumn approaches, lovingly losing
leaves lovely landscapes.

Well done. Above is a suggestion.

Regards:

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013

Thanks Stephen. That would change it from a 5A to a 5-10-5

Comment from Capricorn30

Excellent

An absolutely beautiful writing, Tom;
A fine dedication to the rapidly approaching season;
"leaves lovely landscape"=indeed, fall displays magnificent scenery for all to enjoy.
The beautiful colors are short-lived, however.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013

Thank you Margaret. So true, like the flowers of summer, we get but a moment, and then they are gone.

Comment from Rmocruz

Excellent

You have presented the proper format of a 5A as described in
in the Author Notes. Very pleasant and descriptive of autumn,
I also enjoy this season as well.
Well crafted overall.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013

Thank you Rmocruz. It is surely the best time.

reply by Rmocruz on 02-Sep-2013

You're welcome; right around the corner.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Autumn/Fall is , without a doubt, my favorite time of year. All of the brilliant, blazing colors, the crisp, fresh air scented with hints of wood smoke from a wood burning stove. Oh, yeah, and Halloween, of course, my favorite holiday ( Yes, even more-so than Christmas, does that surprise you, LOL?)...

Nicely penned, Tom.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013

Thank you Cean. No, a love for Halloween is no surprise at all.

reply by Dean Kuch on 01-Sep-2013

;)