Savannah Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 60 "Chapter 13, part 2"Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?
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Comment from BethShelby
This is a ghost story, a crime story, and a love story, all wrapped into to one. You're doing a good job of making this interesting and keeping your readers wanting more.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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This is a ghost story, a crime story, and a love story, all wrapped into to one. You're doing a good job of making this interesting and keeping your readers wanting more.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
It'll be nice to meet Cash's mom. I wonder why she's become a victim of vandals - to warn Cash away from Paige?
One thing to look at:
It's surface is to rough.- Its surface is too rough.
An interesting development, Barbara. :) nancy
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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It'll be nice to meet Cash's mom. I wonder why she's become a victim of vandals - to warn Cash away from Paige?
One thing to look at:
It's surface is to rough.- Its surface is too rough.
An interesting development, Barbara. :) nancy
Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I will fix that area. We have met Cash's mom a few times before.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Barbara
The bad guys sure are putting a spin in this story. Chase's mum now having to move into Paiges house ....Some deeper mystery in this post and good hook at the end.
No issues I saw - a clean write and good read.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Dear Barbara
The bad guys sure are putting a spin in this story. Chase's mum now having to move into Paiges house ....Some deeper mystery in this post and good hook at the end.
No issues I saw - a clean write and good read.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Quillian
First of all, I like the way you divide your chapters into 4 parts for FS. Things are heating up with the slashing of Cash's Mom's tires. Who is responsible? Maybe Bradley Bookman just wants them all together.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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First of all, I like the way you divide your chapters into 4 parts for FS. Things are heating up with the slashing of Cash's Mom's tires. Who is responsible? Maybe Bradley Bookman just wants them all together.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gungalo
It's funny how these things happen in twos. Cash gets his elbow banged real hard and his mom has her tires slashed and window broken by a brick. This is more and more mysterious all the time.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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It's funny how these things happen in twos. Cash gets his elbow banged real hard and his mom has her tires slashed and window broken by a brick. This is more and more mysterious all the time.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from mumsyone
Good chapter, Barbara.
Dealing with kids that age is always fun and interesting, especially nowadays, when they seem to know everything before they ever get to kindergarten.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Good chapter, Barbara.
Dealing with kids that age is always fun and interesting, especially nowadays, when they seem to know everything before they ever get to kindergarten.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. My little ones are more street smart than I am.
Comment from c_lucas
I trust you have bought enough velco to keep your kids tied to their desk. A few roll of duct tape should keep them quiet. This is very well written.
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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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I trust you have bought enough velco to keep your kids tied to their desk. A few roll of duct tape should keep them quiet. This is very well written.
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Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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You might have a good idea there. Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
