Savannah Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 60 "Chapter 13, part 2"Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?
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Comment from emjaihammond
This is always interesting and fun to try to figure out the mystery with the characters involved. I have been for the Cash love match, but we will have to see what happens. A good story every time.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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This is always interesting and fun to try to figure out the mystery with the characters involved. I have been for the Cash love match, but we will have to see what happens. A good story every time.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Poor mom, now they're taking it out on her. Well done as always. More and more mystery. Looking forward to the next installment. Rox.......................
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Poor mom, now they're taking it out on her. Well done as always. More and more mystery. Looking forward to the next installment. Rox.......................
Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review
Comment from chasennov
Savannah Love. 'Chapter Thirteen Part Two.' Beautiful as usual. You are a very good writer to come up so consistently with such good work, which I really enjoy reading. Well done.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Savannah Love. 'Chapter Thirteen Part Two.' Beautiful as usual. You are a very good writer to come up so consistently with such good work, which I really enjoy reading. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're most welcome.
Comment from barkingdog
Who ever it is has involved Cash's mother. He sure is riled. Don't mess with Cash! I like that man.
The foursome must be getting close to an answer. Why else would anyone try to scare them off?
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Who ever it is has involved Cash's mother. He sure is riled. Don't mess with Cash! I like that man.
The foursome must be getting close to an answer. Why else would anyone try to scare them off?
Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from donaldww
With a brick through Mom's window, the mystery is growing. Good idea bringing mer to Paige's house, where she'll be more part of the action.
Well done!
Cheers,
DW
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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With a brick through Mom's window, the mystery is growing. Good idea bringing mer to Paige's house, where she'll be more part of the action.
Well done!
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from adewpearl
I continue to like how they add things to the list of facts/clues and argue over the logic of what to add and whether or not others in the group are jumping to conclusions.
You show how seriously someone is taking this all with the slashing of the tires and the smashed picture window - somebody is out to cause trouble, and you convey that sense of danger well. :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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I continue to like how they add things to the list of facts/clues and argue over the logic of what to add and whether or not others in the group are jumping to conclusions.
You show how seriously someone is taking this all with the slashing of the tires and the smashed picture window - somebody is out to cause trouble, and you convey that sense of danger well. :-) Brooke
Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Barbara Wilkey ....
I have read this with interest as I am following your story, chapter by chapter. I notice that you continue to use bad and filthy language which, as I see it, detracts from good writing. There are a few grammatical errors which I have not listed because apparently that is how the people speak in the area about which you are writing.
Now I look forward to the next chapter.
Love from .... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Hullo Barbara Wilkey ....
I have read this with interest as I am following your story, chapter by chapter. I notice that you continue to use bad and filthy language which, as I see it, detracts from good writing. There are a few grammatical errors which I have not listed because apparently that is how the people speak in the area about which you are writing.
Now I look forward to the next chapter.
Love from .... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Billy Joe is uneducated. He is the only one who used poor grammar and bad language.
Comment from justmarly
You have a great imagination. Love you story. You keep it so interesting. Some one is now playing hard and starting to pick on Cash's mom. I cana't get over who may had hit Cash's arm. It would seem a ghost but should we go that far? Thats for you to point out and make it good. It's so good. You need to get this published as soon as you finish. Keep up the good work. JM
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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You have a great imagination. Love you story. You keep it so interesting. Some one is now playing hard and starting to pick on Cash's mom. I cana't get over who may had hit Cash's arm. It would seem a ghost but should we go that far? Thats for you to point out and make it good. It's so good. You need to get this published as soon as you finish. Keep up the good work. JM
Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and stopping by.
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You are mopre than welcome. JM
Comment from Dawn Munro
Wow, Barbara, this chapter is full of action - I'm intrigued about Cash's mother being harassed and I think bringing her to center of action (Paige's) makes a great addition.
My only question is how a small pup on the floor could be thought to have jolted Cash so badly.
I enjoyed it very much.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Wow, Barbara, this chapter is full of action - I'm intrigued about Cash's mother being harassed and I think bringing her to center of action (Paige's) makes a great addition.
My only question is how a small pup on the floor could be thought to have jolted Cash so badly.
I enjoyed it very much.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and stopping by.
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You are welcome.
Comment from lancellot
It's a good chapter and very written. When those fingers started going up and things were laid out, I couldn't help thinking this is like a Nancy Drew mystery novel. I enjoyed those so much growing up. Thank you for that.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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It's a good chapter and very written. When those fingers started going up and things were laid out, I couldn't help thinking this is like a Nancy Drew mystery novel. I enjoyed those so much growing up. Thank you for that.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
