Savannah Love
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Comment from Sasha
Someone is definitely trying to intimidate Cash. I do hope the can find out who the culprit is and put a stop to it. Great chapter that I enjoyed reading very much.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Someone is definitely trying to intimidate Cash. I do hope the can find out who the culprit is and put a stop to it. Great chapter that I enjoyed reading very much.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from irishauthorme
This is an excellent chapter. Interesting reading, by using dialogue to show us what was happening. The narrative moved forward at a good speed. The opposing viewpoints of Cash-now that he has direct evidence-and Billy Joe added the realism needed there and also authenticated the mystery.
You write more succinctly with each chapter. Read most of your previous but didn't review, still enjoying your work. irish
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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This is an excellent chapter. Interesting reading, by using dialogue to show us what was happening. The narrative moved forward at a good speed. The opposing viewpoints of Cash-now that he has direct evidence-and Billy Joe added the realism needed there and also authenticated the mystery.
You write more succinctly with each chapter. Read most of your previous but didn't review, still enjoying your work. irish
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping down.
Comment from Curtis Hatch
Barbara,
The chapter is interesting and captivating; I found it riveting and read straight through. The suspense and mystery continue to build with each subsequent release, and the intrigue escalates. It appears that Paige's belief in Bradley Bookman's ghost is putting a strain on her relationship with Cash as the artifacts continue to appear.
Curtis
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Barbara,
The chapter is interesting and captivating; I found it riveting and read straight through. The suspense and mystery continue to build with each subsequent release, and the intrigue escalates. It appears that Paige's belief in Bradley Bookman's ghost is putting a strain on her relationship with Cash as the artifacts continue to appear.
Curtis
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping drop.
Comment from Mark Alan Trimeloni
In the last week, I just had a flat tire and was broken down on the four-lane for an hour waiting for help to arrive. I get chills looking at your picture.
Nala grabbed a kitchen towel and began wiping off Cash. "Mr. Cash, what happened?"
I don't exactly know why this part made me laugh. I just got this weird visual of this woman with a towel in this man's face.
"If he's so helpful, then why'd he let those men hit and tie us up?" asked Mary Pat.
That is a very good question Mary Pat.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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In the last week, I just had a flat tire and was broken down on the four-lane for an hour waiting for help to arrive. I get chills looking at your picture.
Nala grabbed a kitchen towel and began wiping off Cash. "Mr. Cash, what happened?"
I don't exactly know why this part made me laugh. I just got this weird visual of this woman with a towel in this man's face.
"If he's so helpful, then why'd he let those men hit and tie us up?" asked Mary Pat.
That is a very good question Mary Pat.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Barb. I believe ghosts do haunt houses. In this case an old antebellum home from the civil war days, anything is possible. I think your plot continues to move along nicely, barb.
Good write and superb dialogue btw. Bob
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Hi, Barb. I believe ghosts do haunt houses. In this case an old antebellum home from the civil war days, anything is possible. I think your plot continues to move along nicely, barb.
Good write and superb dialogue btw. Bob
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from nora arjuna
Hi there read this while standing in a packed train. Thats how valuable time can be lol. The surrounding mysteries continue. Nothing to pick at. All well written.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Hi there read this while standing in a packed train. Thats how valuable time can be lol. The surrounding mysteries continue. Nothing to pick at. All well written.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
Comment from boxergirl
I haven't read your previous post, but I this portion is well written and kept my attention from start to finish. You did a great job with your dialogue and paragraphs. Everything was tight and kept the story moving smoothly. I hope I can learn from your examples. :-)
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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I haven't read your previous post, but I this portion is well written and kept my attention from start to finish. You did a great job with your dialogue and paragraphs. Everything was tight and kept the story moving smoothly. I hope I can learn from your examples. :-)
Comment Written 02-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Righteous Riter
The writer transitions the events well. This story has good balance as the writer uses a pace that intensifies as the chapter goes on. The writer does a good job of keeping the readers attention from start to finish. I enjoyed reading this piece. Good job.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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The writer transitions the events well. This story has good balance as the writer uses a pace that intensifies as the chapter goes on. The writer does a good job of keeping the readers attention from start to finish. I enjoyed reading this piece. Good job.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Darkhorse555
it was so interesting reading down your words from the pictured flat tyre as his eyebrows rose on the window shouting a enjoyable read
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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it was so interesting reading down your words from the pictured flat tyre as his eyebrows rose on the window shouting a enjoyable read
Comment Written 02-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from DRG24
Congratulations on your writing!!!!! I believe that it is very intrigiung and you have really run with this for a while!!!!!!!!!! Worth six stars!!!!
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Congratulations on your writing!!!!! I believe that it is very intrigiung and you have really run with this for a while!!!!!!!!!! Worth six stars!!!!
Comment Written 02-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
