Savannah Love
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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Holy, moly! Messing with Cash's Mom is not a good idea.
Of course, Mom in the same house as Paige, cupid could get some help. (*.*)
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014
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Holy, moly! Messing with Cash's Mom is not a good idea.
Of course, Mom in the same house as Paige, cupid could get some help. (*.*)
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
Comment Written 03-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014
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Oh my!!!! Thanks
Comment from Sankey
Wow spreading the web of deceit now huh! What else is gonna happen? Going good. More and more mystery. I like this story very much.
No Spags.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Wow spreading the web of deceit now huh! What else is gonna happen? Going good. More and more mystery. I like this story very much.
No Spags.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Jade Lawson
Wow, definitely there is a supernatural element in that house. I love that. Cash felt something hitting his elbow. Still there are people like Bill who don't believe in ghosts, probably something may happen and he will in the future.
Now Paige is sure that Bradley is giving her clues. Although he is not telling her clearly everything, I heard many ghost stories that they never do that.
There is a problem with the car too. I think there is definitely the element of the supernatural here, but I also think that there is someone trying to make Paige go away. Maybe the Ghost is trying to warn Paige about something.
I experienced a supernatural thing in my own house, which I plan to write about in the future. I never believed in these kind of things before until it happened to me, and actually I believe they are trying to tell me something. Since my ex husband moved, nothing happened anymore. Well, occasionally still does, but not often. You know that my house is number 13, there is a cemetery in front of my house which I can see a few graves very well from my kitchen window and also upstairs. This was a zone quite affected by war.
Really well written, the plot is excellent and you keep the suspense very well.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2013
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Wow, definitely there is a supernatural element in that house. I love that. Cash felt something hitting his elbow. Still there are people like Bill who don't believe in ghosts, probably something may happen and he will in the future.
Now Paige is sure that Bradley is giving her clues. Although he is not telling her clearly everything, I heard many ghost stories that they never do that.
There is a problem with the car too. I think there is definitely the element of the supernatural here, but I also think that there is someone trying to make Paige go away. Maybe the Ghost is trying to warn Paige about something.
I experienced a supernatural thing in my own house, which I plan to write about in the future. I never believed in these kind of things before until it happened to me, and actually I believe they are trying to tell me something. Since my ex husband moved, nothing happened anymore. Well, occasionally still does, but not often. You know that my house is number 13, there is a cemetery in front of my house which I can see a few graves very well from my kitchen window and also upstairs. This was a zone quite affected by war.
Really well written, the plot is excellent and you keep the suspense very well.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and insight.
Comment from mfowler
It took me a while to get into the story at this midpoint but I eventually found it very easy to read and engaging in its language flow. The narrative builds well with its sense of mystery and speculation. A good write!
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2013
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It took me a while to get into the story at this midpoint but I eventually found it very easy to read and engaging in its language flow. The narrative builds well with its sense of mystery and speculation. A good write!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Another great chapter. You write so clearly and use dialogue so very well. I like the aura of mystery surrounding this story. Enjoyable story~Debbie
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2013
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Another great chapter. You write so clearly and use dialogue so very well. I like the aura of mystery surrounding this story. Enjoyable story~Debbie
Comment Written 04-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from writerwish
Keep it going. It gets more interesting each time. I like the way the characters are skeptical about ghosts, yet some quite open-minded. Good job.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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Keep it going. It gets more interesting each time. I like the way the characters are skeptical about ghosts, yet some quite open-minded. Good job.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from NaughtieScribe
"Just cause they're mad at me doesn't mean they should take it out on my mom. She's never hurt anybody." - Please let Cash open up an industrial size can of whoop-A on those idiots.
Ooo this chapter ticked me off. In a good way, but man oh man. Seriously, they are so cowardly and greedy that they took out their frustrations onf Faye. What good will that serve? Uhh
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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"Just cause they're mad at me doesn't mean they should take it out on my mom. She's never hurt anybody." - Please let Cash open up an industrial size can of whoop-A on those idiots.
Ooo this chapter ticked me off. In a good way, but man oh man. Seriously, they are so cowardly and greedy that they took out their frustrations onf Faye. What good will that serve? Uhh
Comment Written 04-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. Wait and see
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Tease ;-)
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
Another gem in a necklace of mysteries well written and presented. As for Paige, the details count and have to be recorded as such. Skeptics abound. More pleeese!! Well done and deserving. No SPAG or POV to speak of.
Regards:
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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Another gem in a necklace of mysteries well written and presented. As for Paige, the details count and have to be recorded as such. Skeptics abound. More pleeese!! Well done and deserving. No SPAG or POV to speak of.
Regards:
Comment Written 04-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from jadapenn
Hi Barbie, a very good chapter with plenty of tension. This is developing with quite a bit of mystery. I love ghost type stories and look forward to finding out more about all the happenings. Cash doesn't seem so amused by everything though. lol. luv jada
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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Hi Barbie, a very good chapter with plenty of tension. This is developing with quite a bit of mystery. I love ghost type stories and look forward to finding out more about all the happenings. Cash doesn't seem so amused by everything though. lol. luv jada
Comment Written 04-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Ted T
Hi Barbara :)
I've been off my game for quite a while due to illness.
I've missed several of your chapters in this novel.
This chapter is okay, you've got control of your adverbs and I pleased to see you avoid adverbial dialogue tags. You used to use them a lot.
If your chapters are divided into four parts and must all be long. This kind of a novel with sixty chapters seems to be getting heavy on page count. That makes a hard sell for a first novel.
Yes, you have written other books, but have they been submitted for publication? If not, why? If you have, what's the feedback from publishers or agents?
Good luck.
Ted
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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Hi Barbara :)
I've been off my game for quite a while due to illness.
I've missed several of your chapters in this novel.
This chapter is okay, you've got control of your adverbs and I pleased to see you avoid adverbial dialogue tags. You used to use them a lot.
If your chapters are divided into four parts and must all be long. This kind of a novel with sixty chapters seems to be getting heavy on page count. That makes a hard sell for a first novel.
Yes, you have written other books, but have they been submitted for publication? If not, why? If you have, what's the feedback from publishers or agents?
Good luck.
Ted
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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My last book is with a publisher now and should be out around December. It's the one about the woman who was abused. This book really isn't that long. Some of my posts have only been 500 words. This one is going really slow. I am sorry you were ill. I hope you're doing better and my prayers are with you.
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Congrats on the book deal, who's the publisher?
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Gayle
