Savannah Love
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Comment from Tonulak
Dear Barbra,
I liked the technique you use here to recap for the reader the strange events of the story. I got a ot out of it and the tug on the arm was a great cliffhanger. Great job with this one--Ted
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Dear Barbra,
I liked the technique you use here to recap for the reader the strange events of the story. I got a ot out of it and the tug on the arm was a great cliffhanger. Great job with this one--Ted
Comment Written 27-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate you stopping by.
Comment from Darkhorse555
that was a very interesting piece I enjoyed reading normally I just read poetry I like how it was all drawn together a very beautiful piece of writting
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2013
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that was a very interesting piece I enjoyed reading normally I just read poetry I like how it was all drawn together a very beautiful piece of writting
Comment Written 27-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Goinup
I liked this. Moves along smoothly. The mysterious mentions piques the interest and makes me want to go back to the beginning of the novel. Natural dialogue and crisp images made for an enjoyable read. Great job.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2013
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I liked this. Moves along smoothly. The mysterious mentions piques the interest and makes me want to go back to the beginning of the novel. Natural dialogue and crisp images made for an enjoyable read. Great job.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Curtis Hatch
Barbara,
The chapter is very interesting and adds to the mystery and suspense of the story. It is a good plan for the group to make a list of known facts; even though, they keep getting sidetracked with Paige's growing belief in the house being haunted. The mysterious force that hit Cash's elbow is intriguing and add nicely to the story.
Curtis
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2013
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Barbara,
The chapter is very interesting and adds to the mystery and suspense of the story. It is a good plan for the group to make a list of known facts; even though, they keep getting sidetracked with Paige's growing belief in the house being haunted. The mysterious force that hit Cash's elbow is intriguing and add nicely to the story.
Curtis
Comment Written 27-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Mark Alan Trimeloni
"Bradley Bookman's ghost haunts the house."
This part caught my attention. I am always up for a good ghost story.
"How do we know there are ghosts? If there are, how do we know they wear clothes?"
Being a nudist myself, I'm going to say they don't wear clothes.
"Walker lost money playing the commodities and is broke." Paige frowned. "On our ghost walk, Blackbeard wore a hat when he showed up in the Pirate's House second floor window. His beard was on fire too." Her arms were folded across her chest.
Oh, even more interesting. The flaming beard and everything. Love it!
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2013
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"Bradley Bookman's ghost haunts the house."
This part caught my attention. I am always up for a good ghost story.
"How do we know there are ghosts? If there are, how do we know they wear clothes?"
Being a nudist myself, I'm going to say they don't wear clothes.
"Walker lost money playing the commodities and is broke." Paige frowned. "On our ghost walk, Blackbeard wore a hat when he showed up in the Pirate's House second floor window. His beard was on fire too." Her arms were folded across her chest.
Oh, even more interesting. The flaming beard and everything. Love it!
Comment Written 27-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)
As the clews pile up, the mystery seems to simply involve more people. Even attempts to put the clews together on an easel fails to draw any definite conclusion. It's too bad Morgan can't tell who or what he sees or senses, but Its is becoming more apparent with each event, that supernatural as well as human actions are at work in Paige's old mansion.
Will Cash believe in ghosts now or can he find a better solution to the strange event. Maybe he and Paige can just let love prevail.
Great dialogue. Good luck with your new crop of six year olds. Love and Irish Hugs to help you out.
Roger
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2013
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Hi Barbara:)
As the clews pile up, the mystery seems to simply involve more people. Even attempts to put the clews together on an easel fails to draw any definite conclusion. It's too bad Morgan can't tell who or what he sees or senses, but Its is becoming more apparent with each event, that supernatural as well as human actions are at work in Paige's old mansion.
Will Cash believe in ghosts now or can he find a better solution to the strange event. Maybe he and Paige can just let love prevail.
Great dialogue. Good luck with your new crop of six year olds. Love and Irish Hugs to help you out.
Roger
Comment Written 27-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by,
Comment from writerwish
Excellent coverage of the events. It was fairly easy to follow even for me. I like the way you always leave the reader eager for more.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2013
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Excellent coverage of the events. It was fairly easy to follow even for me. I like the way you always leave the reader eager for more.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by,
Comment from Auroraboreal800
Fan and interesting chapter... So the dog was the one who saved Cash? I like how the ghosts are interacting in this story.
GREAT job Barbara!
:)
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2013
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Fan and interesting chapter... So the dog was the one who saved Cash? I like how the ghosts are interacting in this story.
GREAT job Barbara!
:)
Comment Written 26-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and stopping by.
Comment from Selina Stambi
I wish I knew where the summer went, myself!
This was another enjoyable read. This piece, as with previous chapters, is just the right length. Great dialogue and as always, a nice cliff hanger ending.
Hoping, as always, that those two will get together!
Happy New School Year, dear teacher! :)
Love,
Sonali
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2013
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I wish I knew where the summer went, myself!
This was another enjoyable read. This piece, as with previous chapters, is just the right length. Great dialogue and as always, a nice cliff hanger ending.
Hoping, as always, that those two will get together!
Happy New School Year, dear teacher! :)
Love,
Sonali
Comment Written 26-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jeff B.
It is if you opened a book at a book store and started reading, yes a bit confusing, but well written all the same. I will take some time and read some of the rest. It's very concise and to the point. But I assume this is your style. Nice Job!
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2013
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It is if you opened a book at a book store and started reading, yes a bit confusing, but well written all the same. I will take some time and read some of the rest. It's very concise and to the point. But I assume this is your style. Nice Job!
Comment Written 26-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
