Savannah Love
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69 total reviews
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hey, Barb,
Poor Chase, wearing the tea is not in vogue. Maybe he should take the ghost entities a bit more seriously if he wants to remain on the good side. Just sayin'...
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2014
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Hey, Barb,
Poor Chase, wearing the tea is not in vogue. Maybe he should take the ghost entities a bit more seriously if he wants to remain on the good side. Just sayin'...
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
Comment Written 24-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2014
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One would think so, but Cash is his own man. LOL
Comment from Sankey
Still good stuff still getting through all this never stayed with one author for as long as I stayed in here so must be good.
No Spags
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Still good stuff still getting through all this never stayed with one author for as long as I stayed in here so must be good.
No Spags
Comment Written 12-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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I so appreciate your help.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Barbara,
I wasn't sure to be pleased something grabbed Chase's arm or not. Ghostly hooks well penned my friend.
No issues my end. Clean write and well laid out.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Dear Barbara,
I wasn't sure to be pleased something grabbed Chase's arm or not. Ghostly hooks well penned my friend.
No issues my end. Clean write and well laid out.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I am sorry you had to read this after it was promoted.
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Not too worry my friend it's my fault for not getting to it sooner:)
Enjoy the rest of your weekend.
Hugs
Maureen
Comment from Righteous Riter
The writer does a good job of raising the suspense in the chapter. This is a modern who dun it with a lot more excitement in it. The transition between the events is good. The pace is consistent as the writer does a good job of ending this chapter and setting up for the next chapter.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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The writer does a good job of raising the suspense in the chapter. This is a modern who dun it with a lot more excitement in it. The transition between the events is good. The pace is consistent as the writer does a good job of ending this chapter and setting up for the next chapter.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and words. I appreciate both.
Comment from Christof McTarnahan
Nice chapter, dear. It had a splash of spooky to it. I knew you had it in you. Good luck with the six year olds. I have shipped my baby girl to kindergarten. I still can't believe it.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Nice chapter, dear. It had a splash of spooky to it. I knew you had it in you. Good luck with the six year olds. I have shipped my baby girl to kindergarten. I still can't believe it.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I hope your daughter has a good year.
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Barb. How ya doin? I hope fine, really. I always like to visit your writing. It's always interesting and keeps my attention throughout.
One Suggestion: (I would have someone attributed to these questions: Like "A man in the back row said: Or the lady in the second section asked?) (for more realism, I mean)
We know James Davis Junior left his handprint on Paige's Jaguar after the house was broke into." Mary Pat watched her husband write it down.
"We know Daniel and Bonnie Walker feel they should've inherited the house." Paige hesitated. "Bonnie and James are distant cousins. I bet Daniel knows them. Probably Daniel and James are the two who broke in and tied up Mary Pat and me. They want the treasure."
Excellent write as usual. Bob
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Hi, Barb. How ya doin? I hope fine, really. I always like to visit your writing. It's always interesting and keeps my attention throughout.
One Suggestion: (I would have someone attributed to these questions: Like "A man in the back row said: Or the lady in the second section asked?) (for more realism, I mean)
We know James Davis Junior left his handprint on Paige's Jaguar after the house was broke into." Mary Pat watched her husband write it down.
"We know Daniel and Bonnie Walker feel they should've inherited the house." Paige hesitated. "Bonnie and James are distant cousins. I bet Daniel knows them. Probably Daniel and James are the two who broke in and tied up Mary Pat and me. They want the treasure."
Excellent write as usual. Bob
Comment Written 28-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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I had an editor tell me this summer not to use a lot of speech or action tags. She had me take some out of When Lonely Hearts Meet.
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I suggest that you look it up in Strunk and White's book...See for yourself, Barb. :) Bob
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I am not arguing with you, I am just saying what an editor told me a few weeks ago.
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LOL...I didn't mean tosound like I was debating his opinion....so sorry. I meant what I said...when there is a difference and conflicting opinions, zI think it's a good idea (really) to go to an authority on the subject. Perhaps your friend wqs right. LOL..Bob
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This is an editor from the publisher who's publishing my book. Whether they are right or wrong, I will go with them.
Comment from Ridley Williams
Stand alone or not I can at least say your
dialog is believable in content and text.
Your thoughts for your characters moves
without stumbles. All in all, it was an
easy read. Well done, Ridley
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Stand alone or not I can at least say your
dialog is believable in content and text.
Your thoughts for your characters moves
without stumbles. All in all, it was an
easy read. Well done, Ridley
Comment Written 28-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Curly Girly
This is well written and I could spot no spag issues. It has me mystified. I'm not sure what to make of all these strange happenings... I'll have to read more.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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This is well written and I could spot no spag issues. It has me mystified. I'm not sure what to make of all these strange happenings... I'll have to read more.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate you stopping by.
Comment from Adri7enne
Your cast is trying hard to remain factual and logical. Pretty hard thing to do when dealing with ghosts and murderers.
Now, I think someone probably tried to poison Cash. This story is starting to heat up. Way to go, barb.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Your cast is trying hard to remain factual and logical. Pretty hard thing to do when dealing with ghosts and murderers.
Now, I think someone probably tried to poison Cash. This story is starting to heat up. Way to go, barb.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate you stopping by.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Great chapter. My son visited a 'haunted house' at night and several weird things occurred. The most impressive is that when he went out to the garage and left his friend in the house, the ghost locked her in using a hoop and eye lock that was outside. He didn't do it and she couldn't have. Eerie! Debbie
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Great chapter. My son visited a 'haunted house' at night and several weird things occurred. The most impressive is that when he went out to the garage and left his friend in the house, the ghost locked her in using a hoop and eye lock that was outside. He didn't do it and she couldn't have. Eerie! Debbie
Comment Written 28-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate you stopping by. Oh my!!!
