Savannah Love
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Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Well written as always, and interesting too. I can't believe summer is already over. I hope you have a wonderful class this year. Glad you had some fun this summer. Take care~Debbie
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Well written as always, and interesting too. I can't believe summer is already over. I hope you have a wonderful class this year. Glad you had some fun this summer. Take care~Debbie
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Comment from Tina McKala
I read only bits of this story, so I can't refer to the characters, but your writing style is easy to read and enjoyable.you did a good job with showing her doubts.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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I read only bits of this story, so I can't refer to the characters, but your writing style is easy to read and enjoyable.you did a good job with showing her doubts.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from adewpearl
I love the wall period from that period. I think it says something about her troubled state of mind that she imagines the pineapples trying to devour her. LOL
Good dialogue throughout as the mystery deepens. I'd drop dishes too if a Confederate hat floated by. :-)
Brooke
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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I love the wall period from that period. I think it says something about her troubled state of mind that she imagines the pineapples trying to devour her. LOL
Good dialogue throughout as the mystery deepens. I'd drop dishes too if a Confederate hat floated by. :-)
Brooke
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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So would I! Thank you for the kind review. I am always happy to hear from you. We should do this more often. LOL
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, barbara, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where paige opens up about the people who have disappointed her and then morgan finds a confederate hat.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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this is very well written, barbara, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where paige opens up about the people who have disappointed her and then morgan finds a confederate hat.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate your continued support.
Comment from NaughtieScribe
Morgan followed her into the kitchen with Morgan. - the pup followed himself into the kitchen - kewl? lol
Ooo the hat floated off. Is it leading them to a secret grave, or maybe the treasure everyone has been looking for. Goodness I'm anxious?
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Morgan followed her into the kitchen with Morgan. - the pup followed himself into the kitchen - kewl? lol
Ooo the hat floated off. Is it leading them to a secret grave, or maybe the treasure everyone has been looking for. Goodness I'm anxious?
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Sorry, I had changed that sentence around and forgot to take the ending off. Thank you for the catch. I appreciate your help.
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Sorry, I had changed that sentence around and forgot to take the ending off. Thank you for the catch. I appreciate your help.
Comment from elgone
So the ghost is letting it be known he is a ghost for any doubters.And the hat identifies him. And the real detective work is something they will have to do instead of the police.
Morgan followed her into the kitchen{ with Morgan].
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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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So the ghost is letting it be known he is a ghost for any doubters.And the hat identifies him. And the real detective work is something they will have to do instead of the police.
Morgan followed her into the kitchen{ with Morgan].
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Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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I just fixed that sentence. I had rewrote it and forgot to delet the ending. Go figure. Thank you for the help. I always appreciate you stopping by.
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I just fixed that sentence. I had rewrote it and forgot to delet the ending. Go figure. Thank you for the help. I always appreciate you stopping by.
Comment from elchupakabra
Even though this is not meant as a stand alone it is contextualized in such a manner as to allow the reader to jump in mid scene and get a feel for what's going on and for your characters. This book seems to be character rich, which is excellent, particularly for this type of story. I enjoy your descriptive prose, it moves your story along without getting too hung up on trite details and the dialogue is solid. Excellent work overall, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Even though this is not meant as a stand alone it is contextualized in such a manner as to allow the reader to jump in mid scene and get a feel for what's going on and for your characters. This book seems to be character rich, which is excellent, particularly for this type of story. I enjoy your descriptive prose, it moves your story along without getting too hung up on trite details and the dialogue is solid. Excellent work overall, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
No wonder Nala dropped the dishes. Seeing a cap float out the door would be enough to do it. I guess the ghost wanted his had back. I can understand why Paige is suspicious of everyone. Cash has never done anything to make her suspicious but she been used by too many people.
Nice chapter.
Mary Pat watched her husband go leave the room. (You don't need go)
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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No wonder Nala dropped the dishes. Seeing a cap float out the door would be enough to do it. I guess the ghost wanted his had back. I can understand why Paige is suspicious of everyone. Cash has never done anything to make her suspicious but she been used by too many people.
Nice chapter.
Mary Pat watched her husband go leave the room. (You don't need go)
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. Thank you, I had orginally had 'go up the stairs' and I didn't like it. I forgot to take go out.
Comment from c_lucas
This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. A neat trick of having the ghost reclaim his hat.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. A neat trick of having the ghost reclaim his hat.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Barb new surprise happenings
Now in this chapter I rad of some unusual things like the jewelry and the Civil War artifacts along confederate hat that Morgan ( the dog had in his mouth) and how the wind blew the hat by the back door((eerier)
Sound like spiritual beings not human
Gert
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Hi Barb new surprise happenings
Now in this chapter I rad of some unusual things like the jewelry and the Civil War artifacts along confederate hat that Morgan ( the dog had in his mouth) and how the wind blew the hat by the back door((eerier)
Sound like spiritual beings not human
Gert
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. Only Morgqan knows for sure and he's not going to tell us.
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Okay if you want it to be that way Only Morgan knows
Gert
