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Savannah Love

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Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?

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Comment from Quillian
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Your work showed up in the reviewing box, so this is the first I've read of your story, I like it. I thought your choice of artwork of the period wallpaper and your description of the renovation of the home shows solid research of the time.
Your suggestion of an attraction between the heiress and craftsman is piquing my interest. I'll have to check out the previous chapters.......Quillian

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2013


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Comment from AprilShower
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This chapter moves right along, and holds me in suspense. There must be a ghost haunting this house. Well done, Barbara. I have only one suggestion below:

The pup dropped a cap in his master's(mistress's) hand.

April :o)

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2013


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    Thank you for the kind review and the catch.
Comment from Norbanus
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Paige must have a lot of money for her friend to be willing to put up with her pain in the ass attitude and give her so much help. At least she still appreciates Morgan. Outstanding showing of character in this segment.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2013


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Comment from chasennov
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Savannah Love. 'Chapter Twelve Part Four.' I have just enjoyed reading another excellent chapter of your ongoing saga which I thought was also very well written. Well done.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2013


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    Thank you for the kind review.
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    You're most welcome.
Comment from Tonulak
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Dear Barb,
I loved this chapter. it was very human and felt right....the chat between the women and Page's contrite attitude... the little supernatural touch at the end of the chapter juxtaposed against the making of a logical chart was great. wonderful job--Ted

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2013


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Comment from Roxanna Andrews
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Curiouser and couriouser. What or who is behind all this. Can't wait to find out, but then it will be over and I'll be sorry. I always hate it when a book ends, but I read like crazy to finish it. =} Very well done as always. Rox

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2013


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Comment from CALLAHANMR
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Hi Barbara:)
Too bad that Cash didn't get to see the old Confederate hat just float out the backdoor. Was a ghost wearing it? Maybe Cash should start believing in ghosts. One things certain, ring boxes and hats don't just move on their own. Some supernatural force around Paige's mansion.

I think maybe Paige finally believed Mary Pat when she said. "I can tell by the way Cash looks at you that he's interested in more than just friendship." Everyone else knows it's not money that Cash wants from Paige.

Maybe they just need to exchange love and Irish Hugs like I'm sending you.

Roger


 Comment Written 18-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
    Thank you for the kind review. I think it's safe to say Cash and Paige will get together.
Comment from barkingdog
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The cap is haunted and floats. Intriguing. Morgan doesn't seem to be frightened of it.

I'm interested in the list that they plan to make.

I hope Paige can work things out with Cash.

I enjoyed this chapter. It looks like they have a poltergeist.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2013


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Comment from RazberryBullet
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Great ending with the floating Confederate hat. That would freak out anybody ;)

I really like the way you bring in the dog to be part of the puzzle :)

Excellent!

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2013


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    Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
Comment from Curtis Hatch
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Barbara,

This is another interesting and engaging chapter. Paige's paranoia continues to grow, and it appears, she is beginning to distrust everyone. She is having trouble believing people can simply be friends for friendship's sake. Her reading from the diary has her convinced that all men are after her fortune. It was a riveting chapter, leaving me anxious for the next one.

Curtis

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2013


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