Savannah Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 57 "Chapter 12, part 3"Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?
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Comment from Mark Alan Trimeloni
The pup stood on the porch and barked. After the door shut, he pawed and whined.
Ah, the poor thing. I feel for this little doggy.
But I had as normal of a childhood as a rich kid could have.
I like this line. It made me laugh. Must be nice being rich.
Paige looked up from the diary. "It's full of chicanery and mistrust."
Too often you never get to hear the word chicanery in a sentence.
"Every man I've met is just after my money, even Cash."
I think the irony here is every man is after her money and along comes a guy named Cash.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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The pup stood on the porch and barked. After the door shut, he pawed and whined.
Ah, the poor thing. I feel for this little doggy.
But I had as normal of a childhood as a rich kid could have.
I like this line. It made me laugh. Must be nice being rich.
Paige looked up from the diary. "It's full of chicanery and mistrust."
Too often you never get to hear the word chicanery in a sentence.
"Every man I've met is just after my money, even Cash."
I think the irony here is every man is after her money and along comes a guy named Cash.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Good point. I'm writing the story an didn't catch the Cash vs. cash. You made me laugh. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Norbanus
Cash after the cash, eh? But, it's easy to see how she might get that notion from her experience and after Billy Joe making that remark about her sponsoring a race car. You did an excellent job of painting that view.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Cash after the cash, eh? But, it's easy to see how she might get that notion from her experience and after Billy Joe making that remark about her sponsoring a race car. You did an excellent job of painting that view.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from BethShelby
Paige seems disillusioned and unhappy with life as she has known it. I guess someone with money could believe no one has pure motives and everyone is out to take your money. In most cases, she would probably be correct in that assumption. Her friends are looking at her differently now that they know her family has money. I don't think Cash has given her reason to think he is after her money but right now, she believes everyone is.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Paige seems disillusioned and unhappy with life as she has known it. I guess someone with money could believe no one has pure motives and everyone is out to take your money. In most cases, she would probably be correct in that assumption. Her friends are looking at her differently now that they know her family has money. I don't think Cash has given her reason to think he is after her money but right now, she believes everyone is.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from JM daSilva
So she is an heiress. Money is good if you know how to use it, otherwise it can be another problem. For instance, people talk about rich guys having any woman they want. Well, if the woman is after his money, it doesn't matter how sophisticated she is, she is a prostitute nonetheless, and poor guys have access to prostitutes, so what's the difference? Good job describing everything. Everything was clear.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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So she is an heiress. Money is good if you know how to use it, otherwise it can be another problem. For instance, people talk about rich guys having any woman they want. Well, if the woman is after his money, it doesn't matter how sophisticated she is, she is a prostitute nonetheless, and poor guys have access to prostitutes, so what's the difference? Good job describing everything. Everything was clear.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and the support.
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Great pleasure.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
I can't understand how Paige can thinks of Cash going after her money... This is another wonderful chapter written so professionally.
Thank you for sharing.
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PS: Oh my gosh! Summer is almost gone... Have a nice trip Barbara.
:)
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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I can't understand how Paige can thinks of Cash going after her money... This is another wonderful chapter written so professionally.
Thank you for sharing.
:)
PS: Oh my gosh! Summer is almost gone... Have a nice trip Barbara.
:)
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from chasennov
Savannah Love. 'Chapter Twelve, Part Three.' I have just had the pleasure of reading another excellent chapter in your ongoing saga of this love story. Well done.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Savannah Love. 'Chapter Twelve, Part Three.' I have just had the pleasure of reading another excellent chapter in your ongoing saga of this love story. Well done.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, barbara, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where more of paige's history is revealed and she angers mary pat with her thoughts of cash
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this is very well written, barbara, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where more of paige's history is revealed and she angers mary pat with her thoughts of cash
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Another well written chapter or part anyway. I'm really enjoying the story. I saw no errors and have no suggestions for improvement. Look forward to the next chapter. Rox
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Another well written chapter or part anyway. I'm really enjoying the story. I saw no errors and have no suggestions for improvement. Look forward to the next chapter. Rox
Comment Written 28-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from emjaihammond
This is coming together. I don't understand her mistrust of Cash after all he has done though. As always your chapters are interesting and keep the story moving. I hope you enjoy your time in the Midwest. Here the Kansas weather has been very mild. Have fun with your grandchildren.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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This is coming together. I don't understand her mistrust of Cash after all he has done though. As always your chapters are interesting and keep the story moving. I hope you enjoy your time in the Midwest. Here the Kansas weather has been very mild. Have fun with your grandchildren.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I spoke to one of my son's last night. He is in Columbia, MO and said it was only 75 degrees. Wow!
Comment from Zue65
I am following your novel, i want to know if Cash and Paige will finally find the love they both deserve. Yes they are poles apart, Paige an Heiress and Cash, an ordinary house builder or a helper. This story is turning to be exciting. B God bless thank you for sharing this story with your readers.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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I am following your novel, i want to know if Cash and Paige will finally find the love they both deserve. Yes they are poles apart, Paige an Heiress and Cash, an ordinary house builder or a helper. This story is turning to be exciting. B God bless thank you for sharing this story with your readers.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
