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Savannah Love

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Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?

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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Oh, no...

Just when they actually start acting as if they like each other, kaboom! Now she thinks Cash wants her money too. Good, gravy!

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2014
    Sometimes Paige has issues. LOL Thank you
Comment from Sankey
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Good work I hope this is not the end. have enjoyed this immensely look forward to hearing from you again son.
Great work almost a good ending but maybe not. No Spags.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
    Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. You're wonderful. HUGS
Comment from ccmwriter
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Found this story to be very interesting. I want to see where it began and also where it is going. Sure do want to know more about Cash.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 01-Aug-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from nora arjuna
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Nothing really stood out in this chapter for me to pick at. Has special feelings developed between Paige and Cash? I'm surprised to hear her say he's after her money. Why is Cash taking so long to woo her, by the way? :)

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 01-Aug-2013
    Thank you for the kind review. That will be revealed later.
Comment from balloonmom
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I thought this was very well written. I know it was not written to stand alone, but it didn't leave me confused...just wanting to read more. I thought it flowed well.

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 01-Aug-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from ruhama
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I now understand why I was confused. You're right. I must read the first parts to understand what is happening, but your characters ring true and your descriptions are crisp. I'd like to read more.

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 01-Aug-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Tina McKala
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"Hell's bells, now I know a bonafide millionaire // I loved this line, made me laugh :D

Very well written chapter. Full of dynamic conversation, always clear who speaks what. Well done.

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 01-Aug-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Selina Stambi
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Have a great time away, Barbara. Your readers will be waiting for Cash and Paige when you return.

She's a jaded heiress, ha? Nice development! :)


Spags:

normal (of) a childhood ... as normal a childhood ... not of a

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 01-Aug-2013
    Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
Comment from bookishfabler
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Hello, even though it is not meant to stand alone, I have no problems keeping up with your book. I think you did a wonderful job with this and previous chapters. I hope you have a safe and fun strip. See you when you get back.
hugs
Heidi

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 01-Aug-2013
    Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
Comment from Righteous Riter
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The writer does a good job of drawing the reader into this chapter. I like the turns of events that has taken place to put Cash and Paige in the same light again. The ending is one of reality, when one doesn't really know if someone wants them for them or their money. Good writing.

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 01-Aug-2013
    Thank you for the kind review. Paige has extra baggage.