Picture Poems
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Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed your rhymes and repeats in this Villanelle in iambic pentameter. Once again, your photograph is an excellent accompaniment to your poem. I admired your "Master Painter's" metaphor and elevated language. Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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I enjoyed your rhymes and repeats in this Villanelle in iambic pentameter. Once again, your photograph is an excellent accompaniment to your poem. I admired your "Master Painter's" metaphor and elevated language. Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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Thanks again Joan, I enjoyed writing it.
Comment from Selina Stambi
God's work conspires to set the soul aflame, ... the word conspires is so powerful in this context
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, for sure ....:)
I'm undone - again - by another breathtaking nature offering from your virtual pen, Tom!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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God's work conspires to set the soul aflame, ... the word conspires is so powerful in this context
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, for sure ....:)
I'm undone - again - by another breathtaking nature offering from your virtual pen, Tom!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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Thank you Sonali. That pleases me greatly,
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Treischel,
Thiss is a marvelous Villanelle an one I enjoyed from the first line to the last. I do like the Villanelle poetry form but forget to write one unless I read a good one. Your iambic pentameter is spot on and lends music to the lines. You have chosen lovely words to express the beauty of our surroundings. I love Nature poems and this one is no exception. I promise I am not giving you a six because you gave me one but because this piece deserves that and more....chey
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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Hi Treischel,
Thiss is a marvelous Villanelle an one I enjoyed from the first line to the last. I do like the Villanelle poetry form but forget to write one unless I read a good one. Your iambic pentameter is spot on and lends music to the lines. You have chosen lovely words to express the beauty of our surroundings. I love Nature poems and this one is no exception. I promise I am not giving you a six because you gave me one but because this piece deserves that and more....chey
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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Thank you Chey, I am very grateful that you thought so much of this poem.
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Welcome!
Comment from MizKat
Hi Treischel,
You're villanelle poem is really beautiful and written very well. A very enjoyable read. The photo you took is absolutely gorgeous too. A wonderful job of writing and photography.
God's blessings!
Kat
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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Hi Treischel,
You're villanelle poem is really beautiful and written very well. A very enjoyable read. The photo you took is absolutely gorgeous too. A wonderful job of writing and photography.
God's blessings!
Kat
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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Thank you for that wonderful review and award of stars.
Comment from robina1978
I love this photo you took to complement your poem. I liked you chose meter for it.And you put in a quest to preserve nature as well. A well written Villanelle with nice repeating lines.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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I love this photo you took to complement your poem. I liked you chose meter for it.And you put in a quest to preserve nature as well. A well written Villanelle with nice repeating lines.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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Thank you Ine, this was a nicely detailed review. I appreciate the encouragement.
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welcome, I always try to review detailed, Ine
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
I enjoyed this poem very much and the Villanelle is one of my favourite styles. They are not easy to write to achieve a natural sound, but I think you achieved it well. And I also identified with the statement about nature, Giddy
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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I enjoyed this poem very much and the Villanelle is one of my favourite styles. They are not easy to write to achieve a natural sound, but I think you achieved it well. And I also identified with the statement about nature, Giddy
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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Thank you Giddy. I agree that this on was a bit of work, but I liked the result too.
Comment from alexgeorge
Such beauty doth the natural earth proclaim. From the icy kingdoms of the north, with their deep seas and snowy pine-filled Alps, to the warm kingdoms of the Mediterranean, with their light blue seas and golden sand, to the vast expanses of America with giant lakes, mountains, plains, truly this earth is unique.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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Such beauty doth the natural earth proclaim. From the icy kingdoms of the north, with their deep seas and snowy pine-filled Alps, to the warm kingdoms of the Mediterranean, with their light blue seas and golden sand, to the vast expanses of America with giant lakes, mountains, plains, truly this earth is unique.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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Thank you Alexgeorge. You review is very poetic in itself. Yes, you have captured the majesty of the planet nicely.
Comment from sunnilicious
Wonderful poem. I am not familiar with the poetic style. So I appreciated the notes. It is in excellent form too. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Excellent work.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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Wonderful poem. I am not familiar with the poetic style. So I appreciated the notes. It is in excellent form too. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Excellent work.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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Thank you sunnilicious. I'll bet you can do a good job with it too!
Comment from adewpearl
solid rhyming in good villanelle form
effective use of the alternating refrain lines derived from the first tercet
nice alliteration in grandeur grants
and in cannot compare
and in set the soul
solid closing quatrain
vivid descriptive detail and a wonderfully celebratory appreciation of God's Creation :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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solid rhyming in good villanelle form
effective use of the alternating refrain lines derived from the first tercet
nice alliteration in grandeur grants
and in cannot compare
and in set the soul
solid closing quatrain
vivid descriptive detail and a wonderfully celebratory appreciation of God's Creation :-) Brooke
Comment Written 23-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much Brooke. I'm blown away by your review and such a generous award of stars.
Comment from Darkhorse555
like makeup upon her beauty colours her fair gods creation in his light shows us how beautiful this piece really a wonderful piece
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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like makeup upon her beauty colours her fair gods creation in his light shows us how beautiful this piece really a wonderful piece
Comment Written 23-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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Thank you Darkhorse.
