Savannah Love
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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Cash made is point. Paige is his woman -- even if he didn't come right out and seal it with a kiss, which incidentally would have pushed Cleve over the edge, I bettcha.
Fun chapter.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2014
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Cash made is point. Paige is his woman -- even if he didn't come right out and seal it with a kiss, which incidentally would have pushed Cleve over the edge, I bettcha.
Fun chapter.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
Comment Written 09-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2014
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I bet so too. Thank you, again.
Comment from Sankey
Good show!! yay!! I hoped that would happen. Everyone is after her money we can all see. Thanks for an extra special chapter. Good about the ring box moving and the ghost tripping him over he dunno much huh! No Spags.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Good show!! yay!! I hoped that would happen. Everyone is after her money we can all see. Thanks for an extra special chapter. Good about the ring box moving and the ghost tripping him over he dunno much huh! No Spags.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from nora arjuna
Hi Barb, check these notes/suggestions:
"I think it's time you [left]. I'm not giving you money, so there's no reason to stay." - I think it should be 'leave'.
She waited for his reaction. [When she got none], she asked, "How did you find me? - Getting none
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She waited for his reaction, but none came. "How did you find me?....." she then asked.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Hi Barb, check these notes/suggestions:
"I think it's time you [left]. I'm not giving you money, so there's no reason to stay." - I think it should be 'leave'.
She waited for his reaction. [When she got none], she asked, "How did you find me? - Getting none
or
She waited for his reaction, but none came. "How did you find me?....." she then asked.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Sorry for the late reply. I've been on vacation. I just got around to making the corrections. Yes, I have downloaded the Web of Love. I so love that story.
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Thanks so much, Barb for yr support.
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no you weren't late in replying. i just reviewed it yesterday. thanks again for enjoying Web of Love. Tell your friends about it. :)
Comment from donaldww
I love the twist with this race car driver showing up, Paige's former fiancee. She is showing a bit of her former life that makes her seem less prissy.
Cash is not intimidated by his notoriety, and is helping him out the door.
Cheers,
DW
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2013
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I love the twist with this race car driver showing up, Paige's former fiancee. She is showing a bit of her former life that makes her seem less prissy.
Cash is not intimidated by his notoriety, and is helping him out the door.
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 28-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I'm sorry you read with when no points were attached. I just posted the next part. I hope you can catch it while there's points.
Comment from Christof McTarnahan
Another great chapter M'lady. You put a lot of soul into this as always. Character interaction and dialogue were spot on. If I had a heart, this would definitely warm it.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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Another great chapter M'lady. You put a lot of soul into this as always. Character interaction and dialogue were spot on. If I had a heart, this would definitely warm it.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
This is very interesting. Love the cute dog's picture. The writing is turning more and more interesting in each chapter, leaves me wanting to know more of the story.
You're doing an excellent job Barbara!
:)
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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This is very interesting. Love the cute dog's picture. The writing is turning more and more interesting in each chapter, leaves me wanting to know more of the story.
You're doing an excellent job Barbara!
:)
Comment Written 25-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mumsyone
Good chapter, Barbara. It will be interesting to find out why the box with the ring moved away from Cleve.
Cash's eyes met Paige's(,) then the man's.
"No!(,) Boy! You can't do that."
Now,(no comma) I know why you're here.
All of which I funded(,) by the way."
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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Good chapter, Barbara. It will be interesting to find out why the box with the ring moved away from Cleve.
Cash's eyes met Paige's(,) then the man's.
"No!(,) Boy! You can't do that."
Now,(no comma) I know why you're here.
All of which I funded(,) by the way."
Comment Written 25-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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thank you for the kind review and the eagle eye.
Comment from Antonin70
Good stuff Barbara it's moving forward just as I thought. I hoped the jerk who turned up at the end of the last read would turn out a bum and it appears he did. It also appears that Paige has a lot of money. Is this likely to cause a different sort of problem of pride between her and Cash, or am I jumping the gun? For God's sake get it written I'm dying to know. Thanks . Anton
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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Good stuff Barbara it's moving forward just as I thought. I hoped the jerk who turned up at the end of the last read would turn out a bum and it appears he did. It also appears that Paige has a lot of money. Is this likely to cause a different sort of problem of pride between her and Cash, or am I jumping the gun? For God's sake get it written I'm dying to know. Thanks . Anton
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and encouragement.
Comment from Jade Lawson
This was a good chapter I enjoyed to read, very well written, clear and interesting to follow. This Cleve now wants Paige back, after all he has done and his excuses seemed really excuses, no one cheats because of tablets. I enjoyed the last scene very much when Cash kicks him out. I have a feeling this Cleve guy will bring trouble.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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This was a good chapter I enjoyed to read, very well written, clear and interesting to follow. This Cleve now wants Paige back, after all he has done and his excuses seemed really excuses, no one cheats because of tablets. I enjoyed the last scene very much when Cash kicks him out. I have a feeling this Cleve guy will bring trouble.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Edward Buatois
Pretty good. I enjoyed reading it . I don't have any particular suggestions. I had to figure out a bit what was going on, but I figure that was because it's a chapter and all of that is explained in the earlier ones. Good job!
Actually come to think of it there is one criticism but it may be that it soesn't apply here. I usually would not recommend over-accenting a character. It can get annoying. But I think perhaps in this ace it was called for.
Thanks!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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Pretty good. I enjoyed reading it . I don't have any particular suggestions. I had to figure out a bit what was going on, but I figure that was because it's a chapter and all of that is explained in the earlier ones. Good job!
Actually come to think of it there is one criticism but it may be that it soesn't apply here. I usually would not recommend over-accenting a character. It can get annoying. But I think perhaps in this ace it was called for.
Thanks!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
