Savannah Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 55 "Chapter 12, part 1"Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?
63 total reviews
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
OOOOPS!
One boyfriend too many. Something tells me Paige has some 'splaining to do. This is gettin' gooder.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2014
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OOOOPS!
One boyfriend too many. Something tells me Paige has some 'splaining to do. This is gettin' gooder.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
Comment Written 09-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2014
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She explains well. Thank you.
Comment from Sankey
Oh me! More thickening of plots. Like another writer in FS with all her "sub plots" seeing we are dealing with ghost stories in this book maybe some of the sub plots are extra bodies buried in graves underneath others hehe, or something. NO SPAGS AGAIN.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Oh me! More thickening of plots. Like another writer in FS with all her "sub plots" seeing we are dealing with ghost stories in this book maybe some of the sub plots are extra bodies buried in graves underneath others hehe, or something. NO SPAGS AGAIN.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from braham20191
Great ending. Now we're talking!
Your details are excellent. I'd add some humor, some comments every now and then for people to look forward to the details. Just a trick they taught us in school.
Lastly, the domestic abuse thing. You let it oeter out. Disregard this if its going to rear its head again. Else, it is a great hook. I'd build up more tension around it here and use it again.
Enjoying this read.
B
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2013
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Great ending. Now we're talking!
Your details are excellent. I'd add some humor, some comments every now and then for people to look forward to the details. Just a trick they taught us in school.
Lastly, the domestic abuse thing. You let it oeter out. Disregard this if its going to rear its head again. Else, it is a great hook. I'd build up more tension around it here and use it again.
Enjoying this read.
B
Comment Written 18-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2013
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I usually add humor when I feel it's appropriate. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from justmarly
Nice to read from you. Wish it was my book. Let me know when you get it in theatres. I am sick today. Been so hot these days and for two days its cooled down. We use fans to cool us then it makes us sick. Hope you are doing well. MJ
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2013
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Nice to read from you. Wish it was my book. Let me know when you get it in theatres. I am sick today. Been so hot these days and for two days its cooled down. We use fans to cool us then it makes us sick. Hope you are doing well. MJ
Comment Written 18-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2013
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You are doing a good job with your own writing. I hope you get to feeling better. I keep my air conditioner on all the time. Thank you for the kind review.
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You are very welcome. MJ
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I like the pacing and characterization in this. I only found one word I thought was misspelled:
alibies
I think it is just "alibis" like the way "ski" becomes "skis" in the plural.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2013
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I like the pacing and characterization in this. I only found one word I thought was misspelled:
alibies
I think it is just "alibis" like the way "ski" becomes "skis" in the plural.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I will check that out.
Comment from Selina Stambi
Ooh ... now the plot really thickens ... the fianc© is here!
Nice chapter - lots of action. You continue to keep the momentum that encourages the reader to come back.
Will they get into a fist fight now - the two "boys" ? :)
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2013
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Ooh ... now the plot really thickens ... the fianc© is here!
Nice chapter - lots of action. You continue to keep the momentum that encourages the reader to come back.
Will they get into a fist fight now - the two "boys" ? :)
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2013
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You know boys will be boys. LOL. I am hoping Cash is too much of a gentleman for that, but we will see. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Christof McTarnahan
Nice chapter. It held my attention and carried me along softly.Good character interaction as well. The dialogue was well thought out, and the pacing was spot on.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Nice chapter. It held my attention and carried me along softly.Good character interaction as well. The dialogue was well thought out, and the pacing was spot on.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
this is getting more and more interesting, my friend. as always, your grammar is flawless and you have a wonderful way of pulling your readers into the scene.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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this is getting more and more interesting, my friend. as always, your grammar is flawless and you have a wonderful way of pulling your readers into the scene.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from emjaihammond
I guess it would be natural for a doctor to question her as to any abuse with Cash. It seems to be following a path to a new discovery. This new person entering makes it even more interesting, especially because the dog senses something wrong.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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I guess it would be natural for a doctor to question her as to any abuse with Cash. It seems to be following a path to a new discovery. This new person entering makes it even more interesting, especially because the dog senses something wrong.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Antonin70
Yup, keep it coming Barbara it's getting really interesting now. Not only have we a thriller and a romantic storyline but it looks like some good twists are about to be introduced. The pace remains very easy to read and the main characters are getting closer to each other. If you are about to take the path I think you are this should continue to be an excellent read. Good stuff. Anton.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Yup, keep it coming Barbara it's getting really interesting now. Not only have we a thriller and a romantic storyline but it looks like some good twists are about to be introduced. The pace remains very easy to read and the main characters are getting closer to each other. If you are about to take the path I think you are this should continue to be an excellent read. Good stuff. Anton.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
