Savannah Love
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Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, Barbara, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where paige reads through the diary with cash there since he was forced to stay in the bedroom, lol
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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this is very well written, Barbara, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where paige reads through the diary with cash there since he was forced to stay in the bedroom, lol
Comment Written 08-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from donaldww
The investigation continues in Paige's room, and they seem to have found a lead. But they have to wait until tomorrow to follow up.
Then at the end, Paige asks Cash if the dog should be jealous. Perhaps this will kickstart their relationship which has been running on idle for months.
Cheers,
DW
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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The investigation continues in Paige's room, and they seem to have found a lead. But they have to wait until tomorrow to follow up.
Then at the end, Paige asks Cash if the dog should be jealous. Perhaps this will kickstart their relationship which has been running on idle for months.
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jjstar
This was one of the best chapters yet! I love that it looks like there is going to be a link between Cash and the resident ghost? I think I missed the last chapter so I'll have to go back and read. But, loved the growing intrigue suspense. :)
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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This was one of the best chapters yet! I love that it looks like there is going to be a link between Cash and the resident ghost? I think I missed the last chapter so I'll have to go back and read. But, loved the growing intrigue suspense. :)
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. Thank you, I had one reviewer say it didn't move the story along.
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pfft....it was great.:)
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
put his head on his chest...I think her is supposed to be there somewhere. This is very interesting indeed. So Cash's last name is Wilkins? Is he going to be related to the ghost? Hummm...what a thought. Good chapter. God loves you and I do too.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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put his head on his chest...I think her is supposed to be there somewhere. This is very interesting indeed. So Cash's last name is Wilkins? Is he going to be related to the ghost? Hummm...what a thought. Good chapter. God loves you and I do too.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. Oh so true, I'll make that change asasp
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
Cute. The images of the dog's antics are very realistic. And I would bet Morgan does have reason to be jealous; since he'll probably be ordered "off the bed" like our dogs are.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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Cute. The images of the dog's antics are very realistic. And I would bet Morgan does have reason to be jealous; since he'll probably be ordered "off the bed" like our dogs are.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I had to laugh, my husband doesn't let my dogs in the bedroom, his cats are all right though, anyway, with him being military he was gone often. When he would call to say good night, he would always, say "you better not have the dog on the bedroom floor. I would innocently say they are not on the floor. Half the time they were in bed with me.
Comment from RazberryBullet
Loved this:..."That dog's too big to be sleeping on you. When he's grown he'll weigh a good eighty pounds." Morgan got up and turned so his rear-end faced Cash. LOL!
Morgan's got an eloquent touch turning his rear end to Cash ;p
Excellent!
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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Loved this:..."That dog's too big to be sleeping on you. When he's grown he'll weigh a good eighty pounds." Morgan got up and turned so his rear-end faced Cash. LOL!
Morgan's got an eloquent touch turning his rear end to Cash ;p
Excellent!
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from amahra
I did read the last one and look forward to chapter 12. Thanks for the author notes explaining the non-stand-alone chapter. I love the picture of the pop. Now I know just how cute Morgan is.
Just one thing below:
She put his head on his chest. [think you meant to say, "she put her head on his chest."]
My favorite line:
Morgan got up and turned so his rear-end faced Cash.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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I did read the last one and look forward to chapter 12. Thanks for the author notes explaining the non-stand-alone chapter. I love the picture of the pop. Now I know just how cute Morgan is.
Just one thing below:
She put his head on his chest. [think you meant to say, "she put her head on his chest."]
My favorite line:
Morgan got up and turned so his rear-end faced Cash.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Interesting as ever. I love a good mystery, but it always drives me crazy wondering what's going on and who's behind it all. I did have a little trouble understanding what was happening in one paragraph. The 5th par under the **** break where you has Paige asking what is happening and wanting to know who grabbed Cash's arm. I was thinking a ghost had grabbed him. =} I don't know if it's the wording or maybe it's just me. But over all very well done again. Rox
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2013
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Interesting as ever. I love a good mystery, but it always drives me crazy wondering what's going on and who's behind it all. I did have a little trouble understanding what was happening in one paragraph. The 5th par under the **** break where you has Paige asking what is happening and wanting to know who grabbed Cash's arm. I was thinking a ghost had grabbed him. =} I don't know if it's the wording or maybe it's just me. But over all very well done again. Rox
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Cumbrianlass
A nice tender chapter. I enjoyed the interaction between Cash and Paige. The pup is a real character, too!
What fun, the link to Cash's family!
Good post.
Only a couple of things to consider - take or leave, Barbara.
Av
We've had a stressful day and (were) just having some fun."
I wonder where the passing down (of) the brooch stopped."
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2013
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A nice tender chapter. I enjoyed the interaction between Cash and Paige. The pup is a real character, too!
What fun, the link to Cash's family!
Good post.
Only a couple of things to consider - take or leave, Barbara.
Av
We've had a stressful day and (were) just having some fun."
I wonder where the passing down (of) the brooch stopped."
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2013
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I will check those areas. You know I love your writing, so I am always happy when you read my work.
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It's a pleasure to read your work, Barbara! I'm loving the story.
:D
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
"Of course. We've had a stressful day and WERE just having some fun."
WHO IS SPEAKING? ""Bradley can't make it to his son's wedding. He died before James was born."
"Shh." Paige hit (SWATTED) Cash's arm with the book.
WHAT's WRONG WITH THESE SENTENCES?
"Morgan wagged his tail and SCOOTED closer to Paige,..
"Sure." Cash SCOOTED over and PUT his arm around Paige. She PUT his head on his chest.
Regards:
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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"Of course. We've had a stressful day and WERE just having some fun."
WHO IS SPEAKING? ""Bradley can't make it to his son's wedding. He died before James was born."
"Shh." Paige hit (SWATTED) Cash's arm with the book.
WHAT's WRONG WITH THESE SENTENCES?
"Morgan wagged his tail and SCOOTED closer to Paige,..
"Sure." Cash SCOOTED over and PUT his arm around Paige. She PUT his head on his chest.
Regards:
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Sorry for the late reply. I needed to make sure I had time to make the correction. Thank you for the eagle eye.
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Always there for you Barb. Just curious.. Have you read any of my prose or my latest poem 'When I close my eyes'?
Hugs: Steve C
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I will go there right now.
