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Savannah Love

Viewing comments for Chapter 54 "Chapter 11, part 5"
Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?

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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hmmmmm, a little, itsy-bisy smooch can lead to -- watch out -- bowchickawowow! These two could become an item and not even know it.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2014
    Oh so true. Thank you
Comment from Sankey
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Awww cuddles with Morgan and Cash hehe. Good one. SO plot thickening again a connection with Cash huh. Keep forgetting you are the writer of all this hehe. Good work.
No Spags again.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
    Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I am a huge dog lover.
Comment from justmarly
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Wow Cash and Paige are finally getting close. Is this novel done with 53 chapter or are there more coming? The puppy was very close to Paige. That's what I like about a dog. I'd like a man like Cash. You keep the good work going. I know I have to pick over boxes for I'm moving the 1st of Aug. I would love the apt. but its so small and I can't take all my things. I have a very busy week coming but I will try to read your stories coming up. Take care. Don't get too close to that soldier of yours lucky girl. :) MJ

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2013
    I have a lot more still coming. Thank you for sticking around.
reply by justmarly on 13-Jul-2013
    WOW! GREAT!
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
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A lovely story Barbara, The imagery is excellent and needs no suggestion of change. I enjoyed reading your story,and thanks for sharing with me. Mary

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from write hand blue
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A compelling read, with good visual and flow. Written in a natural style. I do like the description of the dog sleeping in the bed. :) mel.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Flamingbush
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Nice job with this. I caught up with the previous chapters and love your use of that little puppy Morgan as a tool to help along the romance. That part at the end is precious.

"I think someone's jealous."

"Does he have any reason to be?"

Can't wait to see what happens next.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.
reply by Flamingbush on 11-Jul-2013
    You're welcome.

    Blessings,

    Nancy
Comment from Jade Lawson
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This was another good chapter, easy to follow and understand. Quite intriguing and suspense as they investigate.
I enjoyed reading the sweet moments shared between Paige and Cash. Nice end of this chapter.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
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Once again, you have done a wonderful job in writing. Your dialogue is realistic and not too formal or chopped, and your descriptions pulls me into the story. Great job.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from kiwijenny
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This is a bit hard to review as it doesn't stand alone.. I like the smooth conversations and references to the diary...and the chocolate lab puppy...it is intriguing and leaves the reader wanting more
Thank you
God bless

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Darkhorse555
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from the beautiful picture of the pup surrounded by a lovely family reading your piece I found to be really lovely read penned in words drawing a picture I enjoyed

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.