Savannah Love
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Comment from NaughtieScribe
Oh I love the pic. Such a beautiful comb. Very classy.
again the door - against the door.
Cash needs to get over himself. I'm starting to believe Bradley is hangout in the house. lol
Nice job.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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Oh I love the pic. Such a beautiful comb. Very classy.
again the door - against the door.
Cash needs to get over himself. I'm starting to believe Bradley is hangout in the house. lol
Nice job.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and your support of my writing.
Comment from God's Writer
Another grand chapter my friend. I know I have missed a few, but I write around twelve hours a day, which doesn't leave much time for much else. Thank you for the diversion.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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Another grand chapter my friend. I know I have missed a few, but I write around twelve hours a day, which doesn't leave much time for much else. Thank you for the diversion.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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I wish I could write that much. My life gets in the way. Thank you for the kind review.
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I wish I could work. So I write to keep the blues away.
Shalom
Comment from Writingfundimension
Really good chapter, barbara. I like the reintroduction of the supernatural, but it was your pared-down-to-the-basics writing I especially appreciated. Well done! Bev
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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Really good chapter, barbara. I like the reintroduction of the supernatural, but it was your pared-down-to-the-basics writing I especially appreciated. Well done! Bev
Comment Written 01-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and your encouraging words.
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Comment from Auroraboreal800
WOW!! I LOVE this beautiful brooch with turquoise and diamonds! The chapter is very interesting with very good descriptions to keep the attention of the readers. I wonder if there are more treasures to be found?
GREAT JOB Barbara!
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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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WOW!! I LOVE this beautiful brooch with turquoise and diamonds! The chapter is very interesting with very good descriptions to keep the attention of the readers. I wonder if there are more treasures to be found?
GREAT JOB Barbara!
:)
Comment Written 01-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and your support.
Comment from RazberryBullet
Loved this!...Nala grabbed Paige's robe. "You best put this on or Mr. Cash'll be blushing for days."
Got a chuckle here:...Cash walked in first and his eyes went immediately to Paige. "I see you dressed for the occasion." LOL!!!
Well done!
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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Loved this!...Nala grabbed Paige's robe. "You best put this on or Mr. Cash'll be blushing for days."
Got a chuckle here:...Cash walked in first and his eyes went immediately to Paige. "I see you dressed for the occasion." LOL!!!
Well done!
Comment Written 01-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and your support.
Comment from rtobaygo
Excellent steady build up to the possibility that a ghost was responsible for the brooch being found where the same space had been searched and came away with nothing.
Take care,
Ray
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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Excellent steady build up to the possibility that a ghost was responsible for the brooch being found where the same space had been searched and came away with nothing.
Take care,
Ray
Comment Written 01-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and your support. hugs
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
What a mystery - who hid the brooch in the first place,
I wonder. That was an interesting little snippet about
turquoise and energy.
I can understand why Paige is convinced it's
a ghost.
"Where's the stuff you found[.](?)" - question mark
Margaret
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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What a mystery - who hid the brooch in the first place,
I wonder. That was an interesting little snippet about
turquoise and energy.
I can understand why Paige is convinced it's
a ghost.
"Where's the stuff you found[.](?)" - question mark
Margaret
Comment Written 01-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and your support. I fixed the error.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I like this. It has a strong sense of action and place. I would fix a few areas for punctuation:
Thunder clapped and Morgan climbed on Paige.
Put a comma after "clapped:
Mary Pat, and you too Nala, can help yourselves any time."
Put a comma after "you" and "too"
"Where's the stuff you found."
I would put a question mark after "found"
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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I like this. It has a strong sense of action and place. I would fix a few areas for punctuation:
Thunder clapped and Morgan climbed on Paige.
Put a comma after "clapped:
Mary Pat, and you too Nala, can help yourselves any time."
Put a comma after "you" and "too"
"Where's the stuff you found."
I would put a question mark after "found"
Comment Written 01-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and your support. I appreciate your eagle eye. I happen to hate commas. LOL
Comment from AprilShower
The brooch is pretty. It seems strange that they're finding the jewelry pieces one at a time.
Who would be doing the laughing and why?
There's seems to be too many questions being left unanswered. I have no suggestions.
April
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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The brooch is pretty. It seems strange that they're finding the jewelry pieces one at a time.
Who would be doing the laughing and why?
There's seems to be too many questions being left unanswered. I have no suggestions.
April
Comment Written 01-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and your support.
Comment from Mrs Jones
This is a delightful and interesting chapter. Doesn't seem that anyone is really peturbed by the idea that there is ghost in the house. Good writing and well edited as always.
Cheers
Rose
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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This is a delightful and interesting chapter. Doesn't seem that anyone is really peturbed by the idea that there is ghost in the house. Good writing and well edited as always.
Cheers
Rose
Comment Written 01-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and your support.
