Savannah Love
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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hey, Barb...
Well, maybe I'm falling for Paige's ghost stories - perhaps in the form of -trickery-!
More question but no answers - hmmmm??
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Hey, Barb...
Well, maybe I'm falling for Paige's ghost stories - perhaps in the form of -trickery-!
More question but no answers - hmmmm??
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from Sankey
Be interesting to find out where you got all these ideas from? Must have been into a bit of Ghostology as I think I said way back. Very interesting still. maybe the ghost want Paige to have all the good stuff. He has been hiding it from everyone else. No Spags again.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Be interesting to find out where you got all these ideas from? Must have been into a bit of Ghostology as I think I said way back. Very interesting still. maybe the ghost want Paige to have all the good stuff. He has been hiding it from everyone else. No Spags again.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from justmarly
This was so good. Sorry I haven't read sooner but I go to school 2 days a week to a computer course. Then I am so packed here and ready to move. Keep up the good work and get this story in the movies. Let me know when it gets there I want to watch it. That would be fun. Marlene
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2013
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This was so good. Sorry I haven't read sooner but I go to school 2 days a week to a computer course. Then I am so packed here and ready to move. Keep up the good work and get this story in the movies. Let me know when it gets there I want to watch it. That would be fun. Marlene
Comment Written 11-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2013
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I need a computer course, maybe I should join you. I had training twice this week, then my husband and I went to Austin today. OH dear, I just stay behind. I appreciate your review.
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We're all a like. I have so much to do I don't know where to start. I'm now to writers group. Its interesting. Just wrote a story for iot for Tuesday night. I enjoy your story. Take care.MJI
Comment from nora arjuna
Hello friend. Glad to check in here and find your story still alive. Didn't expect Paige to still be with a broken ankle though. I'm sure I've missed a lot on other things, ghosts for sure.
Check these few:
Nala walked toward the stairs. "I'll get her ready for a bath and then [pick up the room]." - not sure I understand that phrase....
Nala's hands sat on her hips. - Awkward, as if the hands have a life of their own. Try 'Nala placed her hands on her hips'.
"Somebody tell me what's going on." Paige leaned [again] the door. - against
"It'll be fine. I like the blue color. It highlights your eyes.["]
Hope all is well with you!
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
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Hello friend. Glad to check in here and find your story still alive. Didn't expect Paige to still be with a broken ankle though. I'm sure I've missed a lot on other things, ghosts for sure.
Check these few:
Nala walked toward the stairs. "I'll get her ready for a bath and then [pick up the room]." - not sure I understand that phrase....
Nala's hands sat on her hips. - Awkward, as if the hands have a life of their own. Try 'Nala placed her hands on her hips'.
"Somebody tell me what's going on." Paige leaned [again] the door. - against
"It'll be fine. I like the blue color. It highlights your eyes.["]
Hope all is well with you!
Comment Written 04-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
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You are the only person who caught those out of all the reviewers. Sometimes I wonder if anybody actually reads. Thank you.
Comment from Mishelly
I'm glad you added a photo of the brooch, because it really puts a clear image in my mind as I'm reading this. I'm also happy Paige's ghost has returned. It's obvious he's trying to help Paige. The discovered treasures continue to add to the mystery of the story. I'm really curious to see how all of this is going to end, and I look forward to finding out :-)
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
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I'm glad you added a photo of the brooch, because it really puts a clear image in my mind as I'm reading this. I'm also happy Paige's ghost has returned. It's obvious he's trying to help Paige. The discovered treasures continue to add to the mystery of the story. I'm really curious to see how all of this is going to end, and I look forward to finding out :-)
Comment Written 03-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and continued support.
Comment from abbasjoy
Another piece of the puzzle creating all this mystery. I wonder why no one mentioned the laughter that Paige kept referring to as coming from Bradley Bookman?
Each chapter, a bit more of the puzzle is revealed, and it keeps getting more interesting, as something more is added to indicate there is quite a lot of money at stake here. Whoever is trying to scare off Paige, is definitely after the money.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2013
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Another piece of the puzzle creating all this mystery. I wonder why no one mentioned the laughter that Paige kept referring to as coming from Bradley Bookman?
Each chapter, a bit more of the puzzle is revealed, and it keeps getting more interesting, as something more is added to indicate there is quite a lot of money at stake here. Whoever is trying to scare off Paige, is definitely after the money.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and support of my writing.
Comment from Curtis Hatch
Barbara,
The chapter is interesting, and it seems to support Paige's belief in the mansion being haunted. The mysterious appearance of the brooch adds to the suspense. It is a good read, and I look forward to the next chapter.
Curtis
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2013
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Barbara,
The chapter is interesting, and it seems to support Paige's belief in the mansion being haunted. The mysterious appearance of the brooch adds to the suspense. It is a good read, and I look forward to the next chapter.
Curtis
Comment Written 03-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from G.B. Smith
OH WOWOWOWOWOWOW MAN OH MAN WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW
What a descriptive chapter. They find a broach and hear a man laughing. Paige says it's the ghost OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOhahaha ha
Bear
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2013
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OH WOWOWOWOWOWOW MAN OH MAN WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW
What a descriptive chapter. They find a broach and hear a man laughing. Paige says it's the ghost OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOhahaha ha
Bear
Comment Written 03-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2013
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Hugs!!!!!!! thank you, you just made my day.
Comment from Titan Black
I think Mary Pat and Billy Joe will find love. If
they haven't already. I think write really well
What I would like to know is if Cash and Paige
find love also? Anyway, this is heating up. Keep
writing.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2013
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I think Mary Pat and Billy Joe will find love. If
they haven't already. I think write really well
What I would like to know is if Cash and Paige
find love also? Anyway, this is heating up. Keep
writing.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2013
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Mary Pat and Billy Joe are married. It's Paige and Cash that we are worried about. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from j.moore
Lot of characters to remember in this scene you have going. Will be interested to figure out how they are important to the writing. I read a few of your post. you are still doing some good writing. I am enjoying what I do get to read.
thank you.
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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2013
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Lot of characters to remember in this scene you have going. Will be interested to figure out how they are important to the writing. I read a few of your post. you are still doing some good writing. I am enjoying what I do get to read.
thank you.
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Comment Written 02-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2013
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I am not sure what to change to make it a five star. I wish you would enlighten me.
