Savannah Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 52 "Chapter 11, part 3"Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?
62 total reviews
Comment from Norbanus
Hell, Barbara, I'm confused anyway, and I read all of it. But that's just me. I'm so focused on waiting for Morgan to do something cute. That I miss the good stuff. This is one of the best stories ever on FS. I didn't find any opportunities for improvement.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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Hell, Barbara, I'm confused anyway, and I read all of it. But that's just me. I'm so focused on waiting for Morgan to do something cute. That I miss the good stuff. This is one of the best stories ever on FS. I didn't find any opportunities for improvement.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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I think I might just write my next story about Morgan. I'm sure he has enough personality to carry it. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from abbasjoy
Hmm, a lot of things are coming together now and beginning to make sense. So someone has a grudge on Cash. I was wondering why that officer kept picking on him as though he suspected Cash. Now it all begins to make sense.
So, is this fellow really a thief, or is this another red herring across the trail? I imagine we'll soon find out.
Another very interesting post, as the plot continues to thicken.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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Hmm, a lot of things are coming together now and beginning to make sense. So someone has a grudge on Cash. I was wondering why that officer kept picking on him as though he suspected Cash. Now it all begins to make sense.
So, is this fellow really a thief, or is this another red herring across the trail? I imagine we'll soon find out.
Another very interesting post, as the plot continues to thicken.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate the support.
Comment from Flamingbush
Each chapter you post is better than the last. I especially liked this one which ties a lot of loose ends together, but which leaves us in suspense as to how Cash, Paige et al will handle the information. It's funny at the end with both women laughing at something Cash doesn't find at all funny. Thanks for that bit of humor at the end.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Each chapter you post is better than the last. I especially liked this one which ties a lot of loose ends together, but which leaves us in suspense as to how Cash, Paige et al will handle the information. It's funny at the end with both women laughing at something Cash doesn't find at all funny. Thanks for that bit of humor at the end.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. First using a phone for this who knows how it will turn out.
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You're welcome and keep up the great work.
Flaming
Comment from Titan Black
Yes, it is halarious, that someone would take words
so serious, that they would paint a football field. Once
again, you did a fine job at painting very vivid and
graphic picture for the reader. Keep doing your thing.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Yes, it is halarious, that someone would take words
so serious, that they would paint a football field. Once
again, you did a fine job at painting very vivid and
graphic picture for the reader. Keep doing your thing.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. One of my boys played football in SC and his team actually did that to the rival team. They had kidnapped our bell.
Comment from God's Writer
Again a wonderful story. I am taking a break from writing poems. I have written over 200 poems and the month is still not over. Thank you for the blessed break.
Shalom
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Again a wonderful story. I am taking a break from writing poems. I have written over 200 poems and the month is still not over. Thank you for the blessed break.
Shalom
Comment Written 25-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I'm sure writing like that you would need a break.
Comment from samandlancelot
Barbara,
An excellent chapter with some pieces coming together about why the police officer has a problem with Cash. Very intriguing storyline.
Patricia
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Barbara,
An excellent chapter with some pieces coming together about why the police officer has a problem with Cash. Very intriguing storyline.
Patricia
Comment Written 25-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Antonin70
I am following this story with increased interest as the relationship between some of the main characters turn out to be not what one would have expected. The surprise element in this excerpt is the possibility that the police might have known more about the house's hidden treasure than anybody thought. This could lead to a lot of interesting complications which I hope live up to the expectations I have already formed for them. Keep up the good work, I want to know what happens next. This is the best comment you can have from a reader! thanks. Anton.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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I am following this story with increased interest as the relationship between some of the main characters turn out to be not what one would have expected. The surprise element in this excerpt is the possibility that the police might have known more about the house's hidden treasure than anybody thought. This could lead to a lot of interesting complications which I hope live up to the expectations I have already formed for them. Keep up the good work, I want to know what happens next. This is the best comment you can have from a reader! thanks. Anton.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and well wishes. If I could have written the book in one page, it wouldn't have been 66,000 words. This was so hard to do.
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Actually,Barabara, my latest Novel, or very long short story or what you will, is exactly 66,109 words which is why I haven't put it on FanStory. I wrote it straight through lst time in four and a half days and was absolutely shattered at the end. But the edited and proofed version changed almost nothing. It should be on Sale August/Sept but I am not awaiting a Nobel Lit Prize :) As you can see doing what you are doing really would have been very,very hard for me. But good luck with the book. Cheers. Anton.
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi barbara,
Oh dear, oh dear, the leading cop is not only related to the family so keen to get their hands on the house, but is carrying a grudge and his son's involved on the wrong end of the law as well ... I think I'd be hiring a very smart lawyer about now, and what"s more, I'd be putting all this together to put it in front of a judge and, if necessary, a higher court.
I shall look forward to seeing how this resolves in the next few chapters. I've a feeling it gets a lot nastier before it starts to get better!
Patrick
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Hi barbara,
Oh dear, oh dear, the leading cop is not only related to the family so keen to get their hands on the house, but is carrying a grudge and his son's involved on the wrong end of the law as well ... I think I'd be hiring a very smart lawyer about now, and what"s more, I'd be putting all this together to put it in front of a judge and, if necessary, a higher court.
I shall look forward to seeing how this resolves in the next few chapters. I've a feeling it gets a lot nastier before it starts to get better!
Patrick
Comment Written 25-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate your support of my writing.
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hey there cutie pie
Barbara this is such a wonderful chapter. Your characters interact so well and you kept me going up to the comical ending. I love your writing style
Bear
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Hey there cutie pie
Barbara this is such a wonderful chapter. Your characters interact so well and you kept me going up to the comical ending. I love your writing style
Bear
Comment Written 25-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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AHHHHHHHHH, now your reviews are making me say ahhhh, I appreciate you so much. Your brighten my day.
Comment from unimatrix001
Excellent chapter. The peices of the puzzle are starting to be revealed, but we can't yet see how they all fit together.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Excellent chapter. The peices of the puzzle are starting to be revealed, but we can't yet see how they all fit together.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and your continued support.
