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Savannah Love

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Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?

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Comment from elgone
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This was done very well, but you're right about it not standing alone. If you didn't read the previous one you'd be lost as a reader. I could see Disney making this into a movie.

E

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
    Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you. Are you doing e-books are a paperback?
reply by elgone on 16-Jun-2013
    Not sure yet. I think it depends on the marketing plan they come up with. I should get the contract tomorrow. After I read it and figure out what's what, I'll let you know the details.

    E
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
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Well done once again. As always interesting and kept my attention all through. I did catch one tiny error. I like a work may have been left out of par 10 staring under today's post. "..so I get in." Maybe 'could' got left out. But it was very well done as always.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
    I will check that area out. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from AprilShower
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It seemed they questioning Cash and Billy Joe like they thought they might be suspect. If they were the ones why would they be there when the police came? Paige and Mary Pat should have their injuries checked out, especially, after being hit over the head.

I didn't see any nits, Barbara.

April

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
    I know they should, but they won't. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from emjaihammond
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The plot thickens! I thought the last posts were all very good. It seems to get better as the story goes along, which I am sure is the way you have designed it. It does not flat line at any point but continues to grow as it goes. I enjoyed reading this.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
    Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from adewpearl
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sound thinking is lost on these too - two
Not really. I found some jewelry - I added the period
This is getting more and more intriguing. I wonder what that hand print will reveal. You have done a great job of making me curious!! :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
    Thank you for the eagle eye. I appreciate your support.
Comment from Taffspride
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The story gets more and more interesting with each chapter Barbara. I am totally addicted to it.

I wonder if it is just jewels that is being sought. There could also be something else being sought, something very incriminating. We are just going to have to be very patient and follow the story.

Thanks for this exciting chapter.

Iechyd da

Ann

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
    Thank you for the kind review and encouragement.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
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Hi Barbara,

You keep me trying to figure out this mystery and yet the twist and turns always leave wanting to keep reading.
Yes I can relate strong woman such as Paige:)
I'd be planning the same way sticking my leg over the bubble bath:) Such as I am now recovering with eh...determination, though a few say stubborn:) Probably both, but this post reminded me of that which I think gives strength to this reality in your story.
Thanks for sharing I enjoyed the read.
Maureen

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
    Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from c_lucas
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I think Paige is getting her Yankee Dandruff up and taking mule lessons from Mary Pat. Cash is a Southern gentleman and would not spank Paige until her ankle has hill. Billy Joe, being the smarter of the two realize his wife is still packing. Very good job.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
    Thank you for the kind review. I wouldn't argue with those two women after they've been tied up.
reply by c_lucas on 16-Jun-2013
    Remember, in a Southerner's eyes, they are still delicate flowers. You're welcome.
Comment from cheyennewy
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Hi Barbara,

This plot just gets thicker and thicker. Well at least the police have ruled out Cash and Billy Joe as suspects, thank heavens for that. I had to laugh as I got a perfect image of Paige taking a bubble bath with one leg hanging out! This is a great chapter and I hope the culprits are found soon. Well done....blessings, chey

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
    Thank you for the kind review and your encouraging words.
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
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Maybe they'll find prints because Morgan chewed off the finger of the glove. This is really a very good chapter. God loves you and so do I.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
    Thank you, my friend, I always appreciate hearing from you.