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Savannah Love

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Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?

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Comment from SteveY
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Well I can see why this got an all time best recognition! Very well done. Some people may be able to resist even the truth, but who can resist a good story? No one!

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2013
    Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from bookishfabler
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The bad part about having your own business is you have problems catching up with reading, writing and friends sometimes. A very nice chapter. Thanks for sharing
hugs
Heidi

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2013
    I always appreciate hearing from you. Thank you.
Comment from Darkhorse555
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for me jumping in and reading this piece i enjoyed the thought gone into this alone for me shows great vision it is a very enjoyable read

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Righteous Riter
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The writer does a good job of drawing the reader in from the start. I like the photo the writer chose to represent this chapter. The writer does a good job of transitioning the events and raising the curiosity of the reader. You never cease to amaze me. Great job.

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2013
    I always appreciate hearing from you. Thank you.
Comment from Curly Girly
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Intruders and attackers... hidden jewellery, perhaps dating back to 1850... Somebody must know something, and it must be worth a lot. Still no leads yet.
Do you think the dog would have 'chewed' a finger off the glove? Or do you think the dog would have torn it off or bitten it off. I think chewing takes some time... You decide.
Well written.

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2013
    I think torn or bit it off too. I will recheck that area. Thank you for your eagle eye.
Comment from barkingdog
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I'm glad the police aren't suspicious of Cash and Billy Jo any longer. A bubble bath would never dawn on me if I had just been beaten. I guess it's a Paige thing. She does have a mind of her own. LOL
I'm anxious to know what the detective friend finds out about the hand print.

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2013
    I have a feeling Paige thinks a bubble bath cures all. LOL Thank you for stopping by.
reply by barkingdog on 18-Jun-2013
    Oh if that were only true. LOL
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2013
    Wouldn't it be nice, but with her money, I'm sure she's lived a charmed life.
reply by barkingdog on 18-Jun-2013
    Money. What's that?
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2013
    Something I don't know about. I've people on TV talk about it.
reply by barkingdog on 18-Jun-2013
    Ah, yes, the talking heads from Oz.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2013
    Now, TV wouldn't lie, would it???? LOL
Comment from bhogg
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Barbara - Queen of tension! I've always loved your posts. First, they are always so technically correct. Of that, I'm envious. More, you are a great story teller! LOL, Bill

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2013
    Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from Titan Black
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I see things are really starting to heat up. But I can't
(for the life of me) figure who has been robbing the house.
That's why I like this book. Because it's full of suspense.
Are you going to get this publised? Hope so. Anyway, you
did a great job so far. Keep writing.

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2013
    I sure hope I can get this published. I haven't completely finished it yet. That's my goal for this summer and to get one of my previous novels published. Thank you for the kind review.
reply by Titan Black on 18-Jun-2013
    No problem. I don't mind supporting. And when you get the chance, visit my page, and let me know what you think of my poetry. And fan me. For where networking is concerned, communications is the key.
Comment from Norbanus
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Another super segment, Barbara. Raised some more questions but still no answers to fret over.

'stubborn as a grand pappy mule' (Now that's a concept worth wrappin' your head around! :-)

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2013
    I have known a few people that stubborn. LOL Thank you for the kind words.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
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A good post, barbara, but a few things to look at:

so I get in - could get in

I have numerous scented bath oils and candles- sounds stilted

grand pappy mule - grandpappy

Are their tunnels? - there

:D Nancy


 Comment Written 17-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2013
    Thank you for the eagle eye. I will get on those ASAP,